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Incomplete · Published: 10 Nov 2017 · Updated: 20 Dec 2023 · Words: 88750 · Chapters: 16 · Reviews: 206 · Likes: 80 · Reads: 5824

Series: Sitewide Stories of the Month



Reviewer: PinsandKneazles Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2023 · Title: Chapter 16: Between Rocks and Hard Places


Hey Quilly! Here with a little festive review for you :) I've really missed this story and I'm excited to be back here immersed in a new chapter <3

 

I really feel for Lily at the beginning of this chapter. Nothing seems to be going right for her; she's having nightmares, she's not flying well, her love interest of sorts has issued a bit of a threat. All these things individually would be enough to trouble a person but altogether must feel like an impossible burden for a teenager of Lily's age. I really want her to catch a break soon :(

 

Hmmm. 'The Dark Side of Potioneering' does NOYT sound like a safe book to lose! Nor for someone as careful with possessions as Xander is it something to have been mislaid by mistake. Someone has definitely taken it. I just wonder who.And to add to his missing book, Xander doesn't seem to be having much fun with all these women, haha!! If it's not keeping up pretences with Kat so that they can investigate Lily's poisoning, Caroline keeps throwing herself at him too. And Xander's not the only one with relationship woes - I want to lock Hugo and Hannah in a classroom and not let them out until they've sorted 'this', haha!

 

I wish Lily would just ditch Edward, tell him straight that she doesn't want to be with him. Even if he won't accept friendship. They aren't right for each other and Lily knows that. He's way too controlling, the way he catches her wrist and basically tries to emotionally manipulate her. Nia overhearing at just the precise moment that Lily and Edward were discussing that kiss was unfortunate and not what Lily needed...at least Oscar was sensible about it all and didn't give Lily a hard time.

 

There's a lot to digest and a number of potential storylines in this chapter. James Potter's relationship (or not) with Harper, whether Kat will get what she wants from Xander. Can he comply with her wishes and what effect will that have on Lily? Does Kat know something useful about the Vittamortis or is this a ruse on Kat's part or a red herring? Xander becoming an Animagus - this could be fascinating and I wonder what his Animagus form will take - but I also enjoyed the little delve into Harry and Xander's relationship, how Harry had given him gifts to avoid telling him the truth. And with a little of the truth creeping out, things don't seem so bright for Xander's future. Loved the final line of dialogue which gives the chapter some lightness to end on.

 

Looking forward to seeing what happens in the quidditch match and what Kat now knows (or maybe doesn't really know) about Lily's poisoning. Can't wait for an update!

 

M





 

"Younger sons cannot marry where they like." - Col Fitzwilliam (Pride & Prejudice)

 

 ~

 

There’s little use in being a gentleman when you’re the younger son of a younger son. In fact, the person with the greatest chance of succeeding around here is Ginevra (if only she’d be reasonable).

 

But the willful sons and daughter of Burrough House in Devonshire may just find their way with a little nerve and a lot of heart (and some very unladylike behaviour).

 

~

 

(A Regency-era Muggle AU)


Incomplete · Published: 07 Nov 2021 · Updated: 09 Dec 2023 · Words: 109649 · Chapters: 23 · Reviews: 306 · Likes: 142 · Reads: 2566

Series: None



Reviewer: PinsandKneazles Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2023 · Title: Chapter 23: In which a book causes all the trouble


Hi Mel! Just dropping in with a festive review for you, and what a treat for me to have a new chapter of Burrough House to enjoy! I loved how this one solely focused on Ron and Hermione and gave us some background info as to why they've been so frosty towards each other. And for the particular period, it's deliciously scandalous for us readers, but for the characters if any of this information were to be leaked, it could be disastrous for both families or result in a forced marriage between Ron and Hermione...is that wheer you're heading with this?? :EYES:

 

I can feel Ron's discomfort at being outside what he'd consider his usual social sphere, tugging at his coat even though it was tailored for him (what luxury with all those older brothers and limited finances), but it's soon lost in the rather catty exchange between Ron and Hermione over what and what constitutes impropriety. Rion is correct, of course, and it's his sister, and Hermione knows all that, but that little remark at the beginning seems to have spurred her into disagreeing with Ron for the sake of it. Loved this moment, a real :getthepopcorn: moment between them. I wonder what Harry's thinking or whether he's oblivious, doubt he will have heard Hermione's final shot of the exchange (as far as we're privy)...

 

And oooooohhhh!! Finally we get to find out a few details from the past and the relevamce of the chapter title (the book is most definitely to blame, haha). Love Ron's humour here to distract Hermione from her book for a moment. How long did he wait before plucking up the courage and coming over...and then poor Ron, after striking up a convo and asking Hermione to dance, is met by silence and a blank stare. How awkward and intimidating...I thought he recovered well, though, and it's a change for Ron to be good at something that Hermione isn't. Glaring gap in H's 'education' though, not learning to dance. Maybe her mother tried to persuade her and gave it up as a bad job, or maybe she cared little for such things, who knows. I thought it was super sweet of Angelina not to comment but to quietly try to aid H in the movements of the dance.

 

But the book hasn't finished yet (knew it would be forgotten about) which makes me wonder whether H was really that invested in it in the first place and on learning the title it sounds like the sort of book that people have on their bookshelf to make guests think they are intellectuals, but it's never been read...although I can believe that H probably does enjoy it. Anyway, I digress. Here they are, locked outside the assembly hall with the book in the hall (or hopefully still in the hall) and a handy window which is just begging for some chivalrous heroics. And then it all goes horribly wrong but that bit of improvisation by H is just mint, hahahaha

 

It's just adorable that neither needed to make plans to meet again, but there they both are the next day, searching for each other in the same spot, and it just becomes a habit from then on, but they clearly enjoy each other's company (if H doesn't exactly relish card games with R). It's so telling how companionable they are when they can sit silently in each other's company without it feeling awkward; it's just the most natural thing in the world for H to read and R to gaze at the clouds or simply close his eyes. The real stuff that true love is made of. What I love most about this final section is the natural way in which their friendship morphs into something more, something incredibly risque, and neither has any plans to stop...

 

This was such a heartwarming chapter and I CANNOT WAIT for R and H to rekindle what they had, and to see what you've got in store for the rest of the cast. What an amazingly talented writer you are to create something this good <3 

 

M





tsw

 

A new school year at Hogwarts is starting for the Golden Quartet, and it doesn't look good.

 

As the Marauders try to pick up the pieces of a damaged friendship and Harry struggles to get used to a new family and a new identity, Neville has to deal with his resentment for a role in the wizarding world that wasn't supposed to be his and discovers that maybe there's a reason if he belongs in Slytherin.

 

Meanwhile something obscure is crawling, menacing the safety of the students inside the castle...

 

Second installment in the Jimmy Portman's AU

 

Betaed by Emma (facingthenorthwind), Abby (kuusi palaa) and Bianca (victoria_anne)

 

Inkys 2021 finalist for best cast-ensemble

 

Stunning banner by Deni (something wicked)


Rating and Advisories (required): Mature Audiences (Domestic Abuse, Self-Harm, Sexual Content, Slavery, Substance Abuse, Violence)

Content Warnings (optional): None

Genre: Angst, AU, Drama

Tropes: Family, Fate/Prophecy, Friendship, Parenthood, School
Incomplete · Published: 01 May 2019 · Updated: 19 Nov 2023 · Words: 85338 · Chapters: 28 · Reviews: 222 · Likes: 82 · Reads: 1412

Series: Jimmy Portman's Universe



Reviewer: PinsandKneazles Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2023 · Title: Chapter 28: Something special


Hi Chiara!! I'm so excited to see you updated! And this chapter definitely did not disappoint - I LOVED it!! I cannot wait to see how the Draco-diary thread pans out and what you've got in store there - Draco meeting the Dark Lord has alllll sorts of possibilites...assuming he manages to steal the diary off Neville in the first place, of course. 

 

"...when he was still at odds with the Gryffindors – or, as Draco liked to call it, when he was still in his right mind."


This made me cackle; so deliciously droll of Draco and I think you've absolutely nailed his character and level of intelligence. I do feel for Draco though because I don't think he makes friends that easily and he's invested time/effort in Neville, so to see his friend run off to the Gryffindors so easily must be extremely vexing. But that diary seems to have got under his skin more and I suppose it's natural he should be so curious and resentful...although I can't wait to find out what happens, I'm also a little apprehensive because I like Draco despite his obnoxious side and I'd hate for anything awful to happen to him. On the other hand, a break from the diary would do Neville good, even if it does send him frantic when it's no longer in his possession. It's such a toxic artefact, having it so close all the time must be pretty detrimental to his health.


Whilst I'm very invested in what's going to happen between Draco, Neville and the diary, my favourite part of this chapter was the interaction between James and Lily. They have both been so busy lately that they'll have had so little quality time to themselves, so I love that James got up to watch the sunrise, and Lily joined him, and yes I too think that James is a 'hopeless romantic' - of course he is - and the skating scene was just So Bloody Cute I had to read it several times just to get more of a fix <3 There's something wicked coming their way in the form of a basilisk so I'm glad they get a little warm and super fluffy moment together!


Okay so I'm now eagerly awaiting the next chapter (no pressure!), but even if there's a bit of time between this one and the next, that's not a problem - gives me an excuse to re-read this one before starting the next! 


Thoroughly enjoyed this <3


M <3

 

 





reflections_on_solitude

 

A collection of unrelated drabbles, all somehow connected to the concept of solitude in its many facets

 

Second place in Renacera's ABC Drabble Challenge

 

Inkys 2021: first place for best original fiction and first and second place for best drabble (Pianoforte and Wonderland)

 

Chalices 2021: best writing style and best original fiction winner

 

Hufflepuff Story of the Month - March 2021

 

Sitewide Story of the Month - July 2021

 

Stunning banner by Kris (grumpy cat)


Rating and Advisories (required): Mature Audiences (Suicide, Violence)

Content Warnings (optional): Breakups, Discrimination, Dying/Grieving

Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Microfiction

Tropes: Family, Questioning Identity
Completed · Published: 19 Jul 2020 · Updated: 20 Apr 2021 · Words: 3974 · Chapters: 26 · Reviews: 349 · Likes: 107 · Reads: 1042

Series: None



Reviewer: PinsandKneazles Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2023 · Title: Chapter 9: I - Introvert


I can definitely relate to this one. Loitering on the periphery of a party or lurking in a corner with a drink in hand, more comfortable watching than participating. It takes an immense amount of effort to interact with new people, and introverts often need plenty of time to recover after social events. It can be so daunting to strike up a conversation with someone we don't know, even if quite often the anticipation is more exhausting than the conversation itself...I have been there at times with a not-particularly-enjoyable drink in hand, thinking 'should I? Shouldn't I?' about introducing myself, and ended up just watching the proceedings instead. And observing people interact is often so fascinating, right? I find it super useful for writing scenes and describing body language, just watching two strangers in conversation or a group engaged in an activity.

 

I like how she gets to half-past nine, a perfectly respectable time to leave a party, and she'sprobably been looking forward to that moment when she can leave since she arrived(!), but when it comes to it, she finds she's enjoying being there more than she might have anticipated she would.

 

Another great interpretation - thank you for sharing!

 

M <3

 

 



Reviewer: PinsandKneazles Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2023 · Title: Chapter 8: H - Hide


Hi Chiara! 

 

This one was a surprise! I wasn't expecting that ending, lol; what a delightful interpretation of 'hide'! At first, I thought the subject may have been hiding from something sinister, the way he's trying so hard to avoid detection. The 'every man for himself' line rings so true - in times of high stress, we can often only think about saving ourselves. I was holding my breath for him, wondering whether he'd moved from his hiding place too soon, whether the person he was hiding from would double back and discover him...what they'd do if/when they caught him. So suspenseful! And yes, a hand to hold right now would probably be welcome...

 

But what joy he must have had in calling out 'Safe'! And Yay for retaining his position at the top of the 'hide-and-seek' tree ;)

 

This was unexpected and super fun! 

 

M <3 



Reviewer: PinsandKneazles Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2023 · Title: Chapter 7: G - Grave


Hi Chiara, just dropping by with a quick review <3

 

You know me, I always love the use of a word with more than one potential meaning, and 'grave' here could be a noun or an adjective, or both. This is such a sad piece, especially when she's having that conversation and telling him about things that have happened. It's often the little day-to-day details we miss not being able to share with someone more than the big events, right? Especially the moments like 'our son phoned' or being able to comment on the neighbour's geraniums with someone who would get the gist of the convo. 

 

I found the colours and imagery in this drabble to be really soothing and peaceful; the colours of the flowers and the green leaves against the white marble, and the caress of the breeze against her cheek - or was it his hand? And I like to think that the person arranging the flowers and talking to her dearly departed also found some peace in doing so, through the melancholy of the sun setting on another evening.

 

Really lovely. Thank you for sharing.

 

M <3



Reviewer: PinsandKneazles Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2023 · Title: Chapter 6: F - Funfair


Hi Chiara!! I'm back for more...

 

This one really resonated with me, especially the statement 'too old and too alone to enjoy' which hit me in so many ways - being surrounded by people of a different (younger) generation at work, having very different hobbies to my peers, having hobbies which make me feel my age(!), feeling a strange sense of guilt at enjoying something that maybe should have been left behind with childhood? 

 

I get the 'staying silent when everyone else is making a noise' too, letting everyone else compete for air time knowing there's little point in trying to make my voice heard. 

 

Some sensations - the adrenaline rush of a white-knuckle ride, for example - are often best appreciated alone when you don't have to look out for anyone else, just yourself. You can just lose yourself in that moment of madness...but at the same time wondering who's judging you for being there on your own. First time I went to the cinema on my own felt like this; I loved the freedom of watching the film alone, but the insecure part of me wondered what opinions other people were forming of me :/

 

I'm curious about the man who this piece is about. Is he old in age terms or just in relation to the crowd around him, or is his age all in his own head? Does he simply feel old? It takes a certain bravery to going to a place like the funfair alone, when all around are groupls and couples and families - single people wandering around on their own are probably in the minority.

 

When he walks away 'empty-handed' - because there's nothing tangible to take away from that moment of exhilaration - I really feel for this guy not reliving the memories and enjoying the moment all over again in his own head. Maybe he thought his waltzer ride would provide something that it didn't?

 

Another thought-provoking drabble.

 

M <3

 

 



Reviewer: PinsandKneazles Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2023 · Title: Chapter 5: E - Envy


Chiara! Thought I'd drop in to revisit and explore this collection of drabbles whilst I wait for a TSW update (no pressure!!) <3

 

Envy is such an isolating emotion, right? It reminds us of what we haven't got, what separates us from others who have, and once it's got a hold, it takes strength from itself, growing stronger on its own. It's one of those destructive feelings that we all get from time to time and it often can't be helped. Fortunately, in many cases, it's just fleeting and superficial - 'I wish I had straight hair like her!' or 'I wish I could afford nice clothes like they can'. But sometimes, it's way deeper than that and it lingers, destroys us from the inside out. I love the way you've described envy as a gaslighter - 'it's all in your head, that's what they want you to believe' - I've not thought about it in that way before.

 

As always, beautifully constructed and written. Thank you for sharing 

 

M <3

 

 





tsw

 

A new school year at Hogwarts is starting for the Golden Quartet, and it doesn't look good.

 

As the Marauders try to pick up the pieces of a damaged friendship and Harry struggles to get used to a new family and a new identity, Neville has to deal with his resentment for a role in the wizarding world that wasn't supposed to be his and discovers that maybe there's a reason if he belongs in Slytherin.

 

Meanwhile something obscure is crawling, menacing the safety of the students inside the castle...

 

Second installment in the Jimmy Portman's AU

 

Betaed by Emma (facingthenorthwind), Abby (kuusi palaa) and Bianca (victoria_anne)

 

Inkys 2021 finalist for best cast-ensemble

 

Stunning banner by Deni (something wicked)


Rating and Advisories (required): Mature Audiences (Domestic Abuse, Self-Harm, Sexual Content, Slavery, Substance Abuse, Violence)

Content Warnings (optional): None

Genre: Angst, AU, Drama

Tropes: Family, Fate/Prophecy, Friendship, Parenthood, School
Incomplete · Published: 01 May 2019 · Updated: 19 Nov 2023 · Words: 85338 · Chapters: 28 · Reviews: 222 · Likes: 82 · Reads: 1412

Series: Jimmy Portman's Universe



Reviewer: PinsandKneazles Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2023 · Title: Chapter 27: The Heir of Potter


Hey Chiara!! YAY for chapter 27's arrival :) I've been looking forward to this one ever since I read the sneak peek <3 and whoa, there's lots to digest from here!

 

The Invisibility Cloak! Harry finally decided to use it - that in itself is a breakthrough in his relationship with James if he's starting to use the gift he accepted from his father on his birthday. I can imagine he's feeling a little bit guilty about it, though; it's such an extraordinary, rare item and a Potter heirloom - nobody gives their heirlooms away lightly, right? No wonder all sorts of thoughts are running through Harry's head. I love the details of how the cloak feels in Harry's hands and the fact that he fell asleep clutching it. Yeah, I think it's going to get much more use from now on. Maybe not the most exciting maiden voyage for it under Harry's ownership, but a revelatory one - if that story about Hagrid setting a monster on the muggleborns is to be believed. I'm glad that Ron isn't completely taken in by all this...I wish Harry would consider telling James what they've found. It's understandable that Harry harbours so many sore feelings about how his childhood has effectively been a lie and how much he's missing Peter, but that's not James's fault - I can't see that James had much of a choice in what happened to Peter after the truth came out. 

 

Ooh, Draco - a bit of jealousy going on there? Is Harry taking Neville away from you? Maybe try to be a better friend to Neville then, I dunno. The bed-making assumption did make me laugh, though, and no wonder Neville felt a little embarrassed by it, haha!!

 

The scene with James and Ludwig felt so real; it was almost as though I was sitting in that consult room listening in to that conversation. In all this, I'd not really considered how much hurt James had suffered in his life. Losing both parents when he was essentially still a child, with no siblings to share that burden with, and losing a cousin only two years prior must have hit him so hard. It's the sort of grief that lasts a lifetime, but instead of facing it when it does arise, it sounds as though James has probably buried his feelings in an effort to seem strong and in control. Thinking about it, he will have been twenty-one when Harry was born, and therefore twenty-two when Harry was taken (I think) which is only four years after losing his parents...whew, that's so much trauma in the space of only six years. And it's so sad to hear James admit that he feels his relationship with Dorea has changed since Harry came back into their lives (which, of course, it would have done - you can't add a child to a family without all the dynamics altering in some way). I really feel for James here and agree that work is a burden he doesn't need right now; resetting and strengthening the bonds that he has with his family matters far more. I'm glad that Scrimgeour made it easy for James, and I want to see how this time off impacts James's relationship with Lily, Harry and Dorea. Positively, hopefully? It surprised me that James wanted another child, but the idea of a bigger family than the one he grew up in most probably appeals. Having never had a real sibling, he's probably spent up to now wistfully wondering what it would have been like...

 

What a great chapter! I loved all the naturally flowing dialogue, the speculations, the focus on Harry and James's relationships from both their points of view. I can't wait to find out if Harry does tell James about the diary and Hagrid, and I'm missing Dorea, s I'd love a glimpse into her life right now too!!

 

I will be back for sure!!

 

Hugs,

 

M <3

 

 





In-Light-of-You-2

 

 

 

The war is over, but their story is only just beginning. 

 

A Prequel to In This Darkness

 

*

 

A collection of moments between Harry and Ginny

Written for RogueSlytherin's "I'll Read Fluff If I Want To" Challenge


Rating and Advisories (required): Mature Audiences (Violence)

Content Warnings (optional): Dying/Grieving, Infertility, War

Genre: Angst, Romance, Smut

Tropes: Drunken Confessions, Established Relationship, Family, Marriage
Completed · Published: 17 May 2022 · Updated: 27 Feb 2024 · Words: 26927 · Chapters: 30 · Reviews: 265 · Likes: 105 · Reads: 3393

Series: None



Reviewer: PinsandKneazles Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2023 · Title: Chapter 30: Forever(more)


Hey Quilly, here for the final prompt <3

 

Love the wholesome family feel to the beginning of this chapter, with the thought that 'everyone's enjoying everything' because isn't that how it is on Christmas Day following all the gift-giving? Everyone delights in what they've given and received, they all get involved in each other's presents. Your descriptions, as always, are so lovely to read and really create a vivid picture of the scene.

 

Ahhh, poor Teddy :( That must be pretty tough, seeing the girl you love wrapped around someone else. In the house of his family too. At Christmas. It's little consolation that Harry thinks the guy's a git, but it must have raised an inner smile!

 

Very perceptive of Harry to notice Xander and Lily sitting apart, and Ginny to have observed the alteration in behavour from Xander towards Lily. They obviously know their kids so well and are really tuned in to how things are between them. No mean feat when the kids are all in their teenage years (or almost there).

 

It feels odd that Ginny is doubting herself for settling down at such a young age with Harry, but he's so reassuring  - 'you were all of my reasons' - that line just melts me! <3 That confession, Harry watching Ginny's dot on the Marauders' Map - I like to think it was just purely out of concern for Ginny's safety rather than any concern as to who she might be doing whilst he's on the run, haha. Of course he wouldn't be thinking of that - he was too busy with trying to live - but a little part of him was probably curious too. I love how you've shown a fallibler side to Harry whilst giving us this moment of sweetness too.

 

 

And this line: 

 

'and she’s taking him home again, to that place where all of his forevers are forevermore meant to meet.'


- I can't find the words to describe it but it made me feel all sorts of everlasting happiness feelings that even death can't destroy what thedse two share.

 

I'm so glad you ended this series happily for Harry and Ginny and gave them an awesome moment of pure joy, especially in light of what happens in between now and ITD :sob: What a way to wrap up this collection of prompts - without exception, they've all been such a joy to read and devour. Thank you <3

 

M <3



Reviewer: PinsandKneazles Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2023 · Title: Chapter 29: Behind Closed Doors


Ahh, there's never bad timing where a hot kiss is concerned! Even the morning of September the 1st when the kids are going back to school. But kids, typically, always find a way to demand their parents' attention, right? Damn those lost school ties - to be honest, Albus should have been looking for them last night and had them packed in a timely manner - I think Harry's response of 'we'll owl them to you' is perfectly reasonable!

 

Oh my, Lily gets straight to the point - 'are you two snogging again?' Although that's not quite enough to get Harry and Ginny's attention. But the thought that James may be up to no good seems to shift them ha ha!!

 

It can be so hard for parents to spend quality time with each other, so it's lovely to see Harry and Ginny getting to enjoy themselves here, if only for a very short while...and they have the thought of finishing what they started once the kids are on that train.

 

This was so adorable! 

 

M <3



Reviewer: PinsandKneazles Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2023 · Title: Chapter 28: Harry Potter Day


Hey Quilly! Thought I'd drop by with a review for you <3

 

The concept of 'Harry Potter Day' is sort of understandable, but also kind of bizarre because Harry's still here and that must be awkward AF to have people celebrating you whilst you're still alive. What a display for harry to be centre of, Harry who would probably have preferred to spend his birthday quietly with family and close friends! I love the sense that this day is just happening around him like a force that cannot be stopped, with the repetitive use of 'someone': placing a hand on his shoulder, passing him a drink. It's really effective imagery!

 

The notion that 'evil has been eradicated is so naive - good and evil are both so morally grey, and without one you can't have the other!! It must be infuriating for Harry to endure all this, but it ends eventually (as all things do) when Ginny takes him home...to another party. One that he'll feel much more at home with; imperfect, from a place of love. Who doesn't adore a poorly-constructed cake, and gifts which have been thoughtfully given?

 

Love love love the family unity in this one and the creative use of the 'fireworks' prompt!

 

M <3





tsw

 

A new school year at Hogwarts is starting for the Golden Quartet, and it doesn't look good.

 

As the Marauders try to pick up the pieces of a damaged friendship and Harry struggles to get used to a new family and a new identity, Neville has to deal with his resentment for a role in the wizarding world that wasn't supposed to be his and discovers that maybe there's a reason if he belongs in Slytherin.

 

Meanwhile something obscure is crawling, menacing the safety of the students inside the castle...

 

Second installment in the Jimmy Portman's AU

 

Betaed by Emma (facingthenorthwind), Abby (kuusi palaa) and Bianca (victoria_anne)

 

Inkys 2021 finalist for best cast-ensemble

 

Stunning banner by Deni (something wicked)


Rating and Advisories (required): Mature Audiences (Domestic Abuse, Self-Harm, Sexual Content, Slavery, Substance Abuse, Violence)

Content Warnings (optional): None

Genre: Angst, AU, Drama

Tropes: Family, Fate/Prophecy, Friendship, Parenthood, School
Incomplete · Published: 01 May 2019 · Updated: 19 Nov 2023 · Words: 85338 · Chapters: 28 · Reviews: 222 · Likes: 82 · Reads: 1412

Series: Jimmy Portman's Universe



Reviewer: PinsandKneazles Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2023 · Title: Chapter 26: Of diaries and stolen letters… again


Arrrgghhh!! How did I miss this update?? I am SO SORRY I'm late to the party, I had no idea there was a new chapter up!! Anyway, lemme at it...<3

 

Hmm, Sirius, I dunno; WHY has the Heir of Slytherin chosen Moaning Myrtle's corridor? It's a good question ;P And the fact that the message was writen by hand should alert James and Sirius to the culprit being at Hogwarts. I wonder who they'll suspect first? And YES, Dumbledore's way of dealing with things is certainly off at times, right? I'm glad Sirius has picked up on that. I do think that James is being overly harsh towards himself, though; it's not his place to 'save the world' and he can't protect his son from everything. Also, it must be so frustrating and upsetting that Harry doesn't see him as his father, biut that's not his fault either. He's just going to have to exercise patience and wait for Harry to accept him in his own time. I can understand that he wants it now, though :(

 

The 'let's call at all the Pureblood houses and ask who has a house-elf called Dobby' had me snorting. OMG, can you imagine??! I wonder if they will be able to trace Dobby's owner and use that information to piece this puzzle together. 

 

Poor Ginny; she must be feeling so confused and alone, and she doesn't even know it's not the right diary...she'll obviously work it out at some point, though, and will she try and get the diary back from Neville? I love the way you've altered the diary storyline in this AU and I'm fascinated to know how things will work out and will McGonagall become involved? The dialogue between the four was fun to read and LMAO at Harry stating the obvious with 'he just got sucked in' :D

 

Okay, so after this exciting chapter I'm now waiting eagerly for the next installment :tapsfootimpatiently: Always a good day when there's more TSW to read!

 

M <3

 

 




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Series: facingthenorthwind sampler, Slytherin MFWHATA Winners, 2019 Collab, 2019 Collab, sanctum beach series



Reviewer: PinsandKneazles Signed
Date: 20 May 2023 · Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three


Hey Quilly! Here to check out your latest chapter <3

 

I love the opening scene with Mason's friends 'helping' him to pack. Not very helpfully because everyone has their own way of packing, right? Besides, haven't they each got their own packing to do?? I don't recall Dax or Rory from ITD so perhaps they've just been mentioned in passing or we haven't had an opportunity to hear about them because they're Mason's friends rather than Lily or Xander's...but the easy dialogue and the way you write them makes me feel as though I already know them <3

 

Comic closet scene!! Of all the times Oscar could have chosen to ring, he picks this moment when Mason's in the middle of trying not to let Rory or Dax take over his packing, and then in all his fluster after having to excuse himself for this potentially important phone call, Mason cracks his head on the clothes railing. And Dax makes the joke about wanking off, hahahaha!!

 

Friendship dilemmas - well, this 'torn between two friend groups' thing could work out well (Dax and his crush on Lily - hmmm, I feel as though he's going to end up sorely disappointed there) or not so great (Rory who really wanted to go to the cinema and has no love for the Gryffindor clan). But ice-cream seems to save the day!

 

This was such a fun, cute chapter with so much promise of more to come! Loved it <3

 

M <3



Author's Response:

Dax was another one that already existed in my mind but had had no place in ITD. He's actually meant to be mentioned in later chapters but nothing that has been published yet. Rory was completely new concept born with the start of this story. I'm so glad you liked the closet scene! Hahah Honestly, to be fair, he could've called at any time, and Mason would've still been a mess because he can be incredibly awkward that way :p But I enjoy that about him very much. Thank you so much for leaving a review on this chapter! Really enjoyed hearing your thoughts on it <3





In-Light-of-You-2

 

 

 

The war is over, but their story is only just beginning. 

 

A Prequel to In This Darkness

 

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A collection of moments between Harry and Ginny

Written for RogueSlytherin's "I'll Read Fluff If I Want To" Challenge


Rating and Advisories (required): Mature Audiences (Violence)

Content Warnings (optional): Dying/Grieving, Infertility, War

Genre: Angst, Romance, Smut

Tropes: Drunken Confessions, Established Relationship, Family, Marriage
Completed · Published: 17 May 2022 · Updated: 27 Feb 2024 · Words: 26927 · Chapters: 30 · Reviews: 265 · Likes: 105 · Reads: 3393

Series: None



Reviewer: PinsandKneazles Signed
Date: 18 May 2023 · Title: Chapter 27: I'll Be Seeing You


Wait a moment; Arthur Weasley's died?? NOOOO! :'(

 

But now after you've hit me with that, I'm gonna have to cackle at Bill receiving Arthur's toaster collection because he was the favourite, BAHAHA! I wonder how many toasters were in it??

 

Ginny receiving the vinyl collection is really sweet, the way it evokes memories of her excitement as a child whenever her Dad brought home a new record for the collection. It's perhaps a good job the Potters have a turntable to play them all on. 

 

I loved the debate about whether to send Lily to school a little earlier (at McGonagall's discretion), and the fact that Harr and Ginny would get to kiss in peace as the perfect excuse to do so, haha!

 

I wonder which memory Xander is recalling? If he did hear the song before he met Harry, does that mean that Harry's memory charms aren't quite as trustworthy as he hoped??

 

Loved the last line: 

 

"The song ends, and a new one starts to play, and Ginny keeps on dancing, her hands on Xander’s shoulders, her eyes on her daughter, her heart with her husband, and her mind still on her father, the memory of him, a never fading thing."


And I listened to the song as I was reviewing this! 


Beautiful chapter <3


M <3

 



Reviewer: PinsandKneazles Signed
Date: 18 May 2023 · Title: Chapter 27: I'll Be Seeing You


Wait a moment; Arthur Weasley's died?? NOOOO! :'(

 

But now after you've hit me with that, I'm gonna have to cackle at Bill receiving Arthur's toaster collection because he was the favourite, BAHAHA! I wonder how many toasters were in it??

 

Ginny receiving the vinyl collection is really sweet, the way it evokes memories of her excitement as a child whenever her Dad brought home a new record for the collection. It's perhaps a good job the Potters have a turntable to play them all on. 

 

I loved the debate about whether to send Lily to school a little earlier (at McGonagall's discretion), and the fact that Harr and Ginny would get to kiss in peace as the perfect excuse to do so, haha!

 

I wonder which memory Xander is recalling? If he did hear the song before he met Harry, does that mean that Harry's memory charms aren't quite as trustworthy as he hoped??

 

Loved the last line: 

 

"The song ends, and a new one starts to play, and Ginny keeps on dancing, her hands on Xander’s shoulders, her eyes on her daughter, her heart with her husband, and her mind still on her father, the memory of him, a never fading thing."


And I listened to the song as I was reviewing this! 


Beautiful chapter <3


M <3

 



Reviewer: PinsandKneazles Signed
Date: 18 May 2023 · Title: Chapter 26: A Tale of Two Sunsets


"The earth welcomes it quickly, allowing it to spread across her land, melting into her every corner, becoming so much of her that it becomes impossible to decipher the land from the sun. Blue tinted snow and burnt orange glow become one and then they slip behind closed doors, leaving the world in darkness."


Oh wow! What a vivid and beautiful opening to this chapter! I love the imagery in this, sunset melting into land. And ... this is the moment that Xander arrives at Potter Manor? <3 I adore the way that Harry and Ginny just took him in, just like a magical family would have done for Harry, given half the chance. I suppose both Harry and Ginny would have reasons for not turning Xander away; Harry because he faced so much rejection during his childhood, especially his earlier years, and Ginny because the Weasleys always seemed to welcome everyone so it must have become part of her culture too. 


But wow, the guilt that Harry must feel at taking away Xander's memories - I'm still not sure why that had to be done - but Harry will have his reasons. It's not something to be undertaken lightly after all.


Love the use of the 'sunset' prompt here!


M <3


 

 



Reviewer: PinsandKneazles Signed
Date: 18 May 2023 · Title: Chapter 25: The Happiest Man on Earth


Hi Quilly!

 

I really love how this chapter begins from the mirror's point of view, how it has witnessed a chronology of events from engagement to running after toddlers <3 And now it's watching Harry plait Lily's hair. It doesn't sound as though he's quite got the knack for it yet, haha, but how sweet is Lily saying 'well tried, Daddy?' And then James being his tearaway little self by dangling Albus from the chandelier; gosh, he really is naughty/adventurous, isn't he?!

 

It's also very sweet that Lily looks like the grandmother she is named for, who she'll never meet. Also in character, it would seem, as Lily Luna doesn't seem to mince her words, telling her Dad  that he needs to learn to plait her hair because it's not up to party standards, despite telling him that he tried, haha!

 

And the mention of the Mirror of Erised - yeah,  think Harry's heart's desire truly is his reality now.

 

Such a fluffy read!

 

M <3



Reviewer: PinsandKneazles Signed
Date: 17 May 2023 · Title: Chapter 24: Of Growing Pains


Hey Quilly!

 

This was such a creative use of the prompt. Who would have thought that it would be fierce, independent Ginny Potter who would be finding reasons not to leave? And who would have thought it would be Quidditch that she was finding reasons not to leave for?

 

I really feel her pain and anguish in this chapter. Long-distance commuting is HARD. And it gets harder the longer the contract goes on for. Everything is calling Ginny back home; the lure of her husband, her two sons, the daughter that doesn't know what to call her, and she's had enough. I don't blame her. Harry;'s probably missing her just as much as she misses him when she's away, but it's Albus's juvenile honesty, James's self-sufficiency, Lily's uncertainty as to who Ginny really is in her life that causes her to crack.

 

Brave to keep battling on to the end of her contract. It'll be tough, but she'll look back and be proud that she did it, I'm sure.

 

Loved this. Sweet and sad at the same time.

 

M <3



Reviewer: PinsandKneazles Signed
Date: 17 May 2023 · Title: Chapter 23: Evening News


Hi Quilly!

 

Oh good grief!! James Sirius Potter sounds like a real handful! I love that he's running rings around his parents. His Dad defeated Voldemort, but James is outwitting him in fine style! LMAO that James took all the Sirius night-time story and absolutely ran with it, becoming a dog during the annual brunch event. That must have been a tad embarrassing when he started chewing a woman's skirt. Thank goodness Teddy was on hand with treats and a whistle. Did he know something like this might happen?? I hope he wasn't the one that put James up to this...!!

 

Ahhhh, that's such a cute convo about wanting another child and then Ginny's all like 'well guess what? We've already got another one on the way!' And I LOVE how Harry jumps into super protective mode and berates himself for allowing Ginny to run around after James earlier. Stop it, Harry! 1/ He didn't know, and 2/ Ginny's pregnant, not made of china!! She'll not shatter just by doing normal stuff...

 

Love the ending to this chapter 'but after, not before'. And somehow, I'm feeling incredibly sad now because via ITD I know that their love on this existential plane is not going to last, and it's just heartbreaking when two people are so in love with each other that one must go early...

 

M <3



Reviewer: PinsandKneazles Signed
Date: 17 May 2023 · Title: Chapter 22: On a Celebratory Note


Hi Quilly! Here to review the next installment of ILOY <3

 

OMG, I am laughing so hard at the fact that anyone throws a party for Harry Potter expecting only a few people to turn up! Not sure whether that's cutely naive or delusional, haha! I am not surprised the room is packed full, and yes, Harry would hate this. This is so NOT how he'd want to celebrate becoming the youngest Head Auror ever - if he'd want to celebrate it publically at all. And apparently - errm - he doesn't. Want to celebrate it publically, that is!

 

It must be hard for Ginny, because even if she's certain of Harry's love and devotion for her, having other women liotering around like vultures would worry the most confident of partners. I like how it's Percy who puts Ginny at ease by pointing out the Harry's eyes have been on her all evening. 

 

AHAHAHA - that's the way to celebrate! Sneaking off to Harry's new office and doing it on the desk. Brilliant! As long as no-one is nosy enough to come looking fro them...

 

This was so much fun! Looking forward to reading the next one :)

 

M <3

 

 



Reviewer: PinsandKneazles Signed
Date: 16 May 2023 · Title: Chapter 21: What We Talk About When We Talk About Luna


Hi Quilly,

 

Wow. This chapter packed a punch. It starts off all sweet and delightful with a touch of mischief, just like James himself, but the wine seemed to have fuelled a very serious conversation amongst the adults. The detail of why Albus's door has to be charmed is so cute - I can just picture James plonking Albus on his broom, haha.

 

And the wedding invites drawn individually by Luna's hand is such a gorgeous detail that would definitely be something Luna would do. The flow of conversation feels so natural; from hand-drawn wedding invites, to Ron's poor choice of words and lack of creativity, to Hermione begging the Weasley siblings not to fight...and then Ginny extolling Luna's virtues, which is such typical drinken behaviour when you're sitting with a group of close friends. And again typically of drunken diatribe, things take a downward turn to the year leading up to the Battle of Hogwarts.

 

This line: 

 

"There are certain memories that drown you whole, even years after you’ve reached shore, and, right now, they’re coming at Harry, one wave after another."


is so tragically beautiful and profound. There are certain horrors that some people will never fully escape from because they are so implanted in their mind.


And this:


"Ginny’s playing with his hand, her fingers pulling at his softly.  “Harry taught me how to believe in love,” she says, ever so quietly, “but Luna taught me how to believe in humanity.” "


is just a perfect tribute to Luna.
What a beautiful chapter and use of the prompt.
M <3



Reviewer: PinsandKneazles Signed
Date: 14 May 2023 · Title: Chapter 20: One Plus One Makes Three


Awwww, this is just super adorable <3 The line about taking Ginny's heart out of her body and placing it on her chest, calling it a healthy baby boy is just so beautiful and poetic and the perfect description of the love that Ginny has for her baby. Harry is adorable in this too, especially when he's reassuring Ginny that he won't allow any harm to befall theiur newly-born son. And Ginny's trust in her husband because she allows herself to sleep, knowing that James will be protected.

 

It's a weird concept, healthy newborn babies being placed in a nursery away from their mothers just after birth. Most mums would want their newborns right next to them. I love the description of James's hair already having that 'signature Potter gravity defiance' haha! 

 

Really enjoyed this super cute chapter!

 

M <3



Reviewer: PinsandKneazles Signed
Date: 14 May 2023 · Title: Chapter 19: (Dis)comfort


'A terrible bore whose only hobby consists of saving the world'


Best. Line. Ever, 


I love that you put this moment of togetherness into words and made it a little oasis of peace in amongst the turmoil of far-right fascism in the US and Ginny's discomfort of late-stage pregnancy. Whilst it's true that evil never ends, as long as there are good people willing to fight against it, there'll always be some light to look forward to. 


Harry must be so tired, but he still puts the effort into making Ginny feel as comfortable as she can. And she in turn gives him other things to think about :snort:


Your dreamy, descriptive writing is :chef'skiss: as always


M <3



Reviewer: PinsandKneazles Signed
Date: 14 May 2023 · Title: Chapter 18: What's in a Name?


Hi Quilly!

 

Well, you hit me with ALLLLL the feels with this chapter! I snorted when Harry said 'do you like it here' meaning the house, and Ginny replied 'I like it when you kiss me anywhere' LMAO. It must be strange for Ginny to be living in this huge house with only Harry for company after sharing The Burrow with so many family members, but home is where Harry is, right? It doesn't matter if it's a mansion or a tiny two-up two-down <3

 

The tabloids are utterly vindictive. IRL, I have no idea how they get away with saying three-quarters of the things they do. I can feel Ginny's hurt, more for her unborn baby than anything. there must be a part of her that's anxious what the Potter name will mean for her child, who is famous before he/she is even born. I love how she knows it's a boy (I suppose probability of being a boy is high when you're from a boy-laden family, haha), and I loved the details of going through names. I'm with Harry here; it'd just be confusing and a bit weird to have TWO Harry Potters running around.

 

I hadn't realised they weren't already married, so when Harry goes down on one knee and presents Ginny with a ring, it took me by surprise too! :sweatsmile:

 

This was so adorable! I love how you write Harry and Ginny together <3

 

M <3