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sunshine_locks

i've got a new chapter out, and i'd love some feedback! your reviews were so lovely and helpful, and i can't help but ask for more?

 

Story Title and author name, including link: Miracle (here! M) by Hasane

Warnings and Advisories: profanity, violence, scenes of sexual nature (the latter is nonexistent as of now and the violence is because I needed it for the premise of the story in the beginning)

Genre: romance, humor, angst

Length: chapter 5, 3,336

Summary: She was told it was a miracle, but it was more akin to a curse, if one looks at how much she lost. 

Or alternatively: What would happen if a wizard gave a muggle a blood transfusion?

Ships: Albus/OC (eventually), Scorpius/OC

Areas of Concern: Mostly just coherency, grammar, and such. It makes sense to my eyes, but I've read it a thousand times so. 

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forever_dreaming

Heads up! I’ve been working on reviews, and can take a couple more requests.

SLOTS: 

1. Liar (Felpata_Lupin) 

2. Love, Not War (RoxiMalfoy) 

3. OPEN

4. OPEN

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Story Title and author name, including link: Miracle (Here! M) by Hasane

Warnings and Advisories: it’s all listed in the chapter notes!!

Genre: romance, humor, angst

Length: chapter 6, 4,372 (?)

Summary: She was told it was a miracle, but it was more akin to a curse, if one looks at how much she lost. 

Or alternatively: What would happen if a wizard gave a muggle a blood transfusion?

Ships: Albus/OC (eventually), Scorpius/OC

Areas of Concern:: I’d like to know if I handled the sensitive matter correctly?

 
 
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forever_dreaming

SLOTS: 

1. Liar (FelpataLupin) — 4/10 chapters read&reviewed 

2. Love, Not War (RoxiMalfoy) — 0/4 chapters read&reviewed

3. Miracle (sunshine_locks) — 0/1 chapters read&reviewed 

4. OPEN

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just.a.willow.tree

Story Name: across the great expanse

Link to Fic: here+

Warnings + Advisories: none

Length: 125 words

Genre: general

Pairings (if any): none

Summary: where to traverse would be to drown

Specific Areas of Concern: you always give the best analyses of poems so just wanted to hear your thoughts :3

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forever_dreaming

@Felpata_Lupin I’ve finished all your reviews! <3 

SLOTS: 

1. Love, Not War (RoxiMalfoy) — 0/4 

2. Miracle (sunshine_locks) — 0/1

3. across the great expanse (just.a.willow.tree) — 0/1 

4. OPEN

 

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sunshine_locks

i am unsure of if i can request again when i already have one up,,, but i do have a new chapter for miracle uploaded?

Story and Author Name, including link: Miracle (M) by sunshine_locks

Warnings and Advisories: nothing as bad as the last chapter lmao. there are mentions of what happened last chapter, and some swearing but nothing too bad. 

Genre: Romance, Humor

Length: 4,975

Summary: She was told it was a miracle, but it was more akin to a curse, if one looked at how much she lost. 

Or alternatively: What would happen if a wizard gave a muggle a blood transfusion?

Ships: Albus/OC, Scorpius/OC

Areas of Concern: I just want your thoughts on it is all!

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Totally fine @sunshine_locks! I just did both of your reviews! :) 

@RoxiMalfoy your reviews are (finally) done! 

SLOTS: 

1. across the great expanse (just.a.willow.tree) - 0/1 

2. OPEN

3. OPEN

4. OPEN

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starbuck

well, since you offered :shifty::ninjavanish:

Story and Author Name, including link: The Art of Being Nonchalant (Or Not) [M] by starbuck

Warnings and Advisories: Sexual Content, Substance Abuse

Genre: Drama, Romance

Length: Novel, it currently has 3 chapters, 19 303 words

Summary:

Quote

 

"Have no fear, Quinn Jones."

Apparently, it is a truth universally acknowledged that I, Quinn Jones, a full-fledged Gryffindor, am actually afraid of three little words.

What a load of nonsense.

 

Ships: James Sirius Potter/OC

Areas of Concern: general thoughts? about the characters and the story (it's a bit slow, i think, but i'm trying to build the friendship-turned-relationship slowly). i'm also like, totally insecure about my writing (not writing for a really long time does that i guess) so i just want some feedback on how things are progressing (or if they aren't). thanks in advance :loveshower: 

 

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800 words of heaven

Story and Author Name, including link: Chai, Dancing, and a Friend in the Wee Hours of the Morning (T) by 800 words of heaven
Warnings and Advisories: Sexual content
Genre: Fluff, humour, romance
Length: 4033 words
Summary: It had sounded like a good idea at the time.
Ships: Neville/Hannah
Areas of Concern: Been feeling a little meh over writing lately. Just wanted to hear your thoughts on this story. Reviews are always inspiring, good or bad - so don't feel like you have to hold back if you read something you don't like!

 

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