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starbuck

okay lets make our lovely staffers review some more instead of just us members for the quodpot matches :P:bighug:

Link to Chapter(s): No Mercy. (M)

Word Count: 1930

Summary:

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I said what I wanted when I soaked the muddy grass of the island with the blood of my enemies.

Advisories: Substance Abuse, Violence

Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst, Crime/Mystery, Dark/Horror

Main Characters: original character

Ships: OC/OC

Areas of Concern: general thoughts? is it too hard to follow with code names (call signs)? does the action read well?

Preferred Staffer (if applicable): anyone :)

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