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just.a.willow.tree

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FoxPatronus

Hey, Eva!

I enjoy your writing so much and have seen some of the lovely reviews you have left on other folks' pieces, so I thought I would request one on my Charlie Weasley/OC fic, if you have the time/energy/interest! It's 5 chapters exactly, but on the longer side, so feel free to read and review as much or as little as you'd like!

Story and Author Name, including link: Leather Wings and Scaly Things (T) by FoxPatronus
Warnings and Advisories: Spoilers, brief mention of depression, referenced canon character death
Genre: Fluff, Romance
Length: 5 chapters, 12,311 words total
Summary: Charlie Weasley had pretty much resigned himself to solitude. He was content with his life,  fulfilled by his work, and not particularly interested in seeking out a mate.

Besides, where was he going to find someone else who shared his passion for magical creatures and would want to talk about dragons for hours on end?

Right in the middle of Weasley's Wizard Wheezes, as it turned out. 

Areas of concern: I will always welcome any general impressions and concrit! I would also specifically like to know if the pace of the main character's relationship progression is believable, what you think of my OC's initial character development (which will continue to evolve as I get further into the series), and whether the Weasley characters feel true to their canon personalities.

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just.a.willow.tree

@magnolia_magic, @FoxPatronus - Hi guys! Thank you for stopping by my thread :wub: I promise I'll get to your reviews as soon as I can! There's just the Puff review game finishing up and I'm scrambling to catch up on those reviews haha :P 

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FoxPatronus

No rush! I'll be pleased as punch for whatever you're up for, whenever you get around to it.

I didn't know we had a review game going! I need to do more exploring in the common room.

 

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FoxPatronus

@just.a.willow.tree Thank you SOOOO much for the reviews and for chatting with me about archive woes. :hug:

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Felpata_Lupin

I know, I'm a bad person... :couch:

Story and Author Name, including link: All the truth about Jimmy Portman (M) by Felpata_Lupin

Warnings and Advisories: sexual content, violence

Genre: angst, AU, drama

Length: chapter 23 is 2570 words

Summary:  

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Destiny is the result of people's choices. And any single choice can change it completely.

In this AU the Marauders are still alive and free (more or less...), Neville Longbottom is the guy with the scar, and Harry... Well, just read and find out!

 

Ships: James/Lily, Peter/Remus

Areas of Concern: As always, I would love to know what you think of the most recent chapter. I just love your reviews too much... :wub:

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Rumpelstiltskin
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^_^ I hope it's okay to stop by and steal some of your attention! 

 

Story and Author Name, including link: What We Become [Mature] by Rumpelstiltskin
Warnings and Advisories: Hate Speech, Sexual Content, Substance Abuse, Violence
Genre: Dark/Horror, Romance
Length: chapters 2-4 are 10,234 words in total
Summary:  Leaving Hogwarts to leap into the cesspool of adulthood is hard. Leaving Hogwarts to leap into the cesspool of adulthood in the wake of a life-altering war and falling in love with a Death Eater is even harder.
Pairings: Igor Karkaroff/OC, James/Lily, Sirius Black/OC, Unlisted Pairings
Areas of Concern: Much like in the first chapter, I'm mostly concerned about how easy the time-hops are to follow/if they're too confusing. Some chapters utilize the time-hops more frequently than others. I'm also looking for some general feedback on the plot arch so far as well as the progression of character development and relationships/friendships so far. 
:hug:If and when you can get to it. Thank you so much! Your feedback is always refreshing! 

Edited by Rumpelstiltskin
forgot to provide a link :P

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toomanycurls

Story and Author Name, including link: True Romance by toomanycurls (M)

Warnings and Advisories: Mature, sexual content, violence, domestic abuse, hate speech 

Genre love, drama, life happens

Length: 20 chapters with 71k words

Summary:

Will Albus be able to pursue a true romance with the person he loves? He's found friendship with Scorpius while sparks fly whenever he meets with Brandon. Can he follow his heart before it's too late?

A story about life, love, making choices, and - most of all - growing up.

Ships: Branbus, Scorbus, Al/OC, Scoprius/OC, Rose/OC (not all the same OC)

Areas of Concern: I loved your review for chapter 1 and your optimism about life, lol. I'd really like to get your opinion on how I twist and pull at relationships in the first 5 chapters, especially considering your happiness measure for ships. I also want to get some popcorn and enjoy your read of the story. :popcorn:  

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just.a.willow.tree

@Felpata_Lupin always come back for more with Jimmy! :wub::hug: I'm so bad at keeping up with chapter updates, but please know that I always, always want to read more of it <3

@Rumpelstiltskin I loved it! :wub: (but you already knew that haha.) let me know once it updates! <3

@toomanycurls I think with these next few chapters I have gotten progressively less optimistic about life haha xD done with your five! <3

 

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Felpata_Lupin

Back again... :P

Story and Author Name, including link: All the truth about Jimmy Portman (M) by Felpata_Lupin

Warnings and Advisories: sexual content, violence

Genre: angst, AU, drama

Length: chapter 24 is 4729 words

Summary:  

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Destiny is the result of people's choices. And any single choice can change it completely.

In this AU the Marauders are still alive and free (more or less...), Neville Longbottom is the guy with the scar, and Harry... Well, just read and find out!

 

Ships: James/Lily, Peter/Remus

Areas of Concern: as always, would just love to hear your thoughts! :$

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Felpata_Lupin

Hi, darling! :wub:  You know I can't stay away from here for long... :P

Story and Author Name, including link: The Lark and the Nightingale (M) by Felpata_Lupin

Warnings and Advisories: sexual content, violence, hate speech, suicide, domestic abuse

Genre: angst, drama, crossover, romance

Length: the whole story is 21 chapters and 44793 words

Summary:

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A sixteen-year-old witch. Her best friend, who's been secretly wishing to be more for years. A school project which is going to change their relationship. An ancient curse which could doom their lives...

Ships: Remus/OC, James/Lily, mentioned Sirius/Marlene

Areas of Concern: since you read the first chapter and seemed to enjoy it, I'd love to know your thoughts about the rest. :$ Feel free to read as much or as little as you are comfortable with and take all the time you need. :wub: Thank you so much, hon! :hug:

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RoxiMalfoy

*Gasp* Eva, I have found something on my AP that you haven't R&R'd yet, lol!!! :P 

 

Story & Author Name: Perfect [M] by RoxiMalfoy
Warnings & Advisories: Hate Speech 
Genres: Drama, General, Romance
Length: One-Shot (6,534 Words)
Ships: Sirius Black/Original Female Character, James Potter I/Lily Evans
Summary: To others, this night might have been considered a disaster... But to us, it was perfect.
Areas of Concern: The switching back and forth between Sirius and Saleena's POV's in this has always been an area of concern of mine in terms of flow. Like, is it easy to understand who's talking in each section? (I wrote this for a "Firsts" challenge, and I had first kiss, lol.) It was also one of my first times writing in 1st person, so I'm pretty proud of it. ;) Feel free to point out anything that sticks out to you. Your reviews always brighten my day so much!!! <3 

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It would probly help if I actually put the link to the story in, lol! XD

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