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Hello, and welcome to my review thread! I've been meaning to read more stories around here, and I figure opening up this little thread is a great way to do that. :P

 

What I'll Read:

  • Only stories on the HPFT archives please!
  • I'd largely like to stick to HP and OF, just because I feel weird reviewing fanfic if I'm not familiar with the fandom it comes from.
  • Feel free to hit me up with any era/pairing (I do have a soft spot for next-gen, but I'll read absolutely anything).
  • All ratings are fine!

 

What I'm Good For:

  • Dialogue notes. Dialogue is my (somewhat self-proclaimed) strong suit, so I'm usually pretty good at picking out when dialogue sounds forced or unnatural.
  • General plot/characterization/flow notes.
  • Love. No seriously, I tend to use a lot of exclamation points in my reviews because I'm just so dang excited about reading people's writing. I'll happily just give you and your story a lot of love and support. :hearteyes:

 

How to Request:

  • If it's multichaptered, I'll review one chapter at a time (but seriously, as soon as I'm done, feel free to request for the next chapter).
  • I'm going to do 2 slots at a time for now. General turnaround time should be a week at most.
  • The request form itself:
[b]Story and Author Name, including link:[/b]
[b]Warnings and Advisories:[/b]
[b]Genre[/b]
[b]Length:[/b]
[b]Summary:[/b]
[b]Ships:[/b]
[b]Areas of Concern:[/b]

 

Alright, give me everything you've got!! :loveshower: (And by everything I mean two requests, lol.)

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just.a.willow.tree

HI :wub: 

Story and Author Name, including link: you again by justawillowtree
Warnings and Advisories: sexual content, slavery, violence
Genre angst, general, romance
Length: 16,992
Summary:

Quote

Some people need only a single second chance at life to realign themselves with who they wish to be. Others require many more second chances.

This is a tale of the latter.

Ships: teddy/victoire
Areas of Concern: since you said you liked next gen, I thought I'd put down one of my only next gen fics :P it was written for the Soulmate AU challenge, and I just want to know your general thoughts on it! anything you liked, disliked, etc. thank you so much in advance :hug: 

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RoxiMalfoy
Posted (edited)

Hey Taylor!! :waving:  Thank you so much for offering to Review!! 

 

Story & Author Name: Doing the Right Thing by RoxiMalfoy
Warnings & Advisories: None
Genres: AU, Dark/Horror
Length: One-Shot, 1,500 Words
Ships: N/A
Summary: Mother had always said that I was different. She believed that I was capable of doing the right thing. Whatever that meant...
Areas of Concern: This is a missing moment from my main Novel; Love, Not War. It actually takes place about 3 months before the events of the main story begin. I'd love to hear your thoughts on this before coming back to request more of the full story. It's rather short, so just feel free to point out whatever sticks out to you. Thanks again so much!! ^_^

 

Edited by RoxiMalfoy

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ShadowRose

Both slots are open!! 😁

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Rumpelstiltskin
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Hey! \O I have an OF request, if you wouldn't mind taking a look :) . 

 

Story and Author Name, including link: Chapter One of We, Lawbreaking Citizens [M] by Rumpelstiltskin
Warnings and Advisories: Consent Issues (Mild/Moderate), Hate Speech, Sexual Content, Slavery, Substance Abuse, Violence
Genre: Action/Adventure, Crime/Mystery, Dark/Horror, Fluff, Romance
Length: The chapter I'm requesting, chapter one, is 3649 words.
Summary: 

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The War revealed many truths about humankind...the most important of those truths is that all humans are innately inclined to violence and chaos. We are hosts to an entire horde of plaguing ailments like jealousy and greed and we lack the physical and emotional capabilities to cope with such diseases. That is how the War started. That is how the world ended. That is why there is a grand nothingness on the Outside, beyond the walls of the Sovereignty.

My name is Cyril Bernard and I play a highly important role in maintaining the peace and overall wellbeing of our wonderfully prospering society (despite what that Mark Van said because what does that peacebreaker know anyway).

 

 

Ships: Original Character (Cyril) x Original Character (Mark)
Areas of Concern: This first chapter is written exclusively in journal entries and because of this I was able to reveal information from a skewed perspective. What I really want to know is if you have a general idea as to what is happening (is there enough information provided in this chapter), while still keeping a bit of mystery surrounding the issues. I'd also like to know what your impression is about the characters so far and any other general feedback you could provide.  I do very well with bluntness, so if you see anything worthy of CC, please drop it on me :D. Thanks so much!

 

Edited by Rumpelstiltskin

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Pen2Paper

Hey there! Hope you don't mind me snagging the last spot here.

Story & Author Name: Heaven Can Wait(M) HP Universe/ Marauders
Warnings & Advisories: Hate Speech, Sexual Content and Substance Abuse (Prospective warning)
Genres: Drama/ Romance
Length: Multichapter fic
Ships: James/Lily
Summary: An imagining of James and Lily's lives as they move forward from "Snape's Worst Memory" and the events that followed that led them to fall for each other. 
Areas of Concern:

I could use a little perspective on dialogue since you're capable of giving me an opinion about it. Also, I'd like to know how you like the characterizations and the plot. And of course, I could use some love. I will shamelessly admit that.

Thank you so much! 🤩

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ShadowRose

Two slots available!! :yay:

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Pen2Paper

Hi there! I loved your review so much! Would it be ok if I re-requested here? As you have the details above how about I drop the link?... Thanks a million in advance!  Haven Can Wait(M) for chapter 2! Thanks! 

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potionspartner

Here's a slow burn for you. 

Even the Best Laid Plans by potionspartner:
Mature: Hate Speech, Consent Issues (Severe), Sexual Content, Substance Abuse, Violence:
Dark/Horror, Romance
51 chapters
Voldemort has returned and Severus Snape has survived his first meeting with him; however, his position 
is insecure and his loyalties questioned by his master.  Desperate to convince the Dark Lord of his 
obedience, Snape launches a plan to appease him. It should take years to develop giving Dumbledore and 
Potter the time they need to fulfill the prophecy.  However, when Voldemort changes the plan, Severus 
realizes that he has inadvertently brought a muggle to the attention of the Death Eaters. Now he is 
trying to save her from evil all while convincing her that he is actually part of it.
Snape/OC
Anything that pops out at you. I've had people review the first chapter, so if you could review 
different one, that would be awesome. 

 

Thanks a million!

 

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