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PaulaTheProkaryote

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PaulaTheProkaryote

Did you just write an amazing line that's left you preening? Hilarious dialogue? Share it here with us! 

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Unwritten Curse

I'm pretty proud of this line, from chapter 4 of The Possibility of After:

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Illogically, she imagined that time would stop after Edgar and his family closed their eyes to the green of Unforgivable light.

 

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Aphoride

I'm surprisingly proud of this line, which I actually wrote on its own and found a way to work into Antebellum (which is super rare for me!): 

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There is a wildness about him then: something feral in the light gleaming, silver and metallic, in his eyes and sliding round the curve of his dimples.

 

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victoria_anne

I've got a little something to share, too! (Except it's more than one line, oops)

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Wren slipped his hands into his pockets. ‘You’ll have to do most of this. My ankle is still really sore. I don’t want to make it worse.’
She straightened, cloth dripping, and fixed him with an exasperated look. ‘Are you always like this?’
He rocked back on his heels. ‘No. Sometimes I’m asleep.’
Layla lobbed the cloth in his direction. It landed with a splat at his feet. He raised his head, opening his mouth to say something like ‘you missed’, and was just in time to catch a broom before it smacked him in the face.

 

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Diogenissa

Okay so my most personable character is a lot more like Newt Scamander than I thought? 😆

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They stepped through the broken door carefully and he looked around the room.  Yes, it was as bad as he thought. He froze a moment, noticing a huge bug skittering across the floor, much to the Gentleman’s chagrin.  Once it had safely passed, he walked over toward the Lady.

 

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starbuck

i don't even know why i like this line from chapter 5 of The Art of Being Nonchalant (Or Not) so much except that it pretty much sums up quinn in one sentence:

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If curiosity killed the cat, then my ego is what was going to be the death of me.

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