Felpata_Lupin Posted July 28, 2017 Author Share Posted July 28, 2017 No worries, Jenn. I probably would have taken a while anyway... Let me know when the edited version is up! Love, Chiara Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted September 2, 2017 Author Share Posted September 2, 2017 Hello, lovely people! Just a quick reminder that all slots are opened here, so if you are looking for some love for your stories feel free to drop a request! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abhorsen. Posted September 2, 2017 Share Posted September 2, 2017 So this is neither Marauders nor light-hearted, so please feel free to skip it if it's not your thing! Story and Author Name, including RATED link: The Only Honest Color (M) by BeeezieWarnings and Advisories: Domestic Abuse, Hate Speech, Substance Abuse, ViolenceGenre: Angst, Dark/Horror, DramaLength: 2806 words (complete)Ships: Astoria/Draco (ish)Summary: I don’t really know how I got to the point where I was entirely too drunk and alone in a Death Eater’s flat with him, but there is is.Areas of Concern: So I'm caught between being proud of this and totally second guessing it, especially when it comes to description, so I'd love your thoughts on it? <3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted September 4, 2017 Author Share Posted September 4, 2017 Done! All slots open again! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sibilant Posted September 4, 2017 Share Posted September 4, 2017 Hi! Story and Author Name, including RATED link: War Stories: china doll (M) by endless_dreamer (on AO3)Warnings and Advisories: ViolenceGenre: Angst, General, Drama Length: 3,800 words Ships: None Summary: You were once a delicate China doll, but now you're cracked and broken. Areas of Concern: Well, sort of the whole thing? The structure of this fic is a little unconventional and well, I'm just craving general feedback on if it's meaning is clear, or if it feels too disjointed. This is in the queue at the HPFT archives and at HPFF, but I already posted it on AO3 and FF.net. If you'd like to wait to review until it's on HPFT/HPFF, that's fine with me! Thanks in advance! <3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LunaStellaCat Posted September 5, 2017 Share Posted September 5, 2017 Story and Author Name, including RATED link:Fight or Flight (M) Warnings and Advisories:Violence, Hate Speech, Sexual Situations Genre:Drama Length: 4400 Words Ships: Rolf Scamander and Luna Lovegood and Charlie Weasley & Rolf Scamander Summary: Rolf Scamander makes a mistake and turns his back. Areas of Concern: Plot, Characterization, Dialogue Culture, Anything. This was written for the August Prefect Challenge. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted September 10, 2017 Author Share Posted September 10, 2017 Done! All slots open again! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted November 11, 2017 Author Share Posted November 11, 2017 Hello, my loves! I'm back! Time to send links my way! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowkat678 Posted December 13, 2017 Share Posted December 13, 2017 (edited) Story and Author Name, including link: Words and Silence by Shadowkat678 (M) Warnings and Advisories: Rated M for domestic abuse and violence. Tagged spoiler. Deals with implied PTSD and depression. Genre: Angst, Dark/Horror, General Length: 2130 Summary: "They say words can't hurt you, yet they do. Like a thousand hot knives carving each letter into your slowly beating heart." For the Phobia challenge: Monophobia, an acute fear of being alone. Also for the Proverb Challenge: The apple doesn't fall far from the tree. Ships: NA Areas of Concern: This is in second person POV present tense. I've recently edited it before putting it up on these archives, and since this is a challenging POV and tense to do, I want it checked for flow. Story and Author Name, including link: A Christmas in Azkaban (M) by shadowkat678 Warnings and Advisories: Rated T for violence and spoilers. Deals with implied PTSD and depression. Genre: Angst, Dark/Horror, General Length: 2707 words Summary: Hope is like a flickering candle. It can be snuffed out, but it can also be relit. The Christmas Eve before Sirius' escape, an unlikely encounter with two young Aurors drags up memories of a time thought forgotten long ago... Ships: NA Areas of Concern: I remember being told in one older review that I used "telling" more in this oneshot than I normally do, and was wondering if some spots could be picked out with suggestions on how to "show" more. Also, I feel like the dialogue is awkward, as short a section as it is. As that's my weakest point in writing I'm not sure how to fix it, but I'd really like some suggestions. I tried to edit it before taking it from the HPFF archives and moving it to here, but something still feels wrong.Since I'm entering this in Call For Stories, I'd like to fix anything that would sound weird read aloud if possible. Edited May 30, 2018 by LadyL8 Added mature rating Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted December 24, 2017 Author Share Posted December 24, 2017 @Shadowkat678 both your reviews are done I want to get to 300 reviews by the end of the year, so feel free to shoot requests at me, everyone! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abhorsen. Posted December 24, 2017 Share Posted December 24, 2017 Story and Author Name, including RATED link: The Open Air (M) by BeeezieWarnings and Advisories: Substance AbuseGenre: Drama, Fluff, RomanceLength: 2362 words (complete)Ships: Astoria/DracoSummary: Astoria gets an unexpected birthday present from Draco Malfoy.Areas of Concern: Yay it's a Drastoria that isn't super dark and depressed! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoxiMalfoy Posted December 26, 2017 Share Posted December 26, 2017 Story and Author Name: Love, Not War [M] by RoxiMalfoyWarnings and Advisories: Hate Speech, Suicide, ViolenceGenre: Angst, AU, Horror/Dark, DramaLength: Novel (21 Chapters) WIP: 139,944 so farShips: Draco/OC, Lucius/Narcissa, Molly/Arthur, Summary: When tragedy strikes, Lucius Malfoy is forced to make a difficult decision. He then hands his only son over to the Order of the Phoenix, in the hopes that they will protect him from Lord Voldemort. Now, with nowhere else to go, Draco Malfoy is stuck living at the Burrow with the Weasley’s. But when another new witch from America moves in too, things start to get... interesting.Areas of Concern: I'm not really sure how many chapters of this you'll wanna read right now. I just saw your comment about wanting to reach 300 reviews by the end of the year, so I thought I'd go ahead and post my Novel, lol! Feel free to read however much you want to though, Chiara!! Some of my chapters are shorter, and some of them are really long; I honestly need to learn better balance, haha!! Also, if you do like to story and would prefer to go chapter-to-chapter, just let me know and I would be happy to come back and re-request after the first of the year!! Thank you so much for the offer hun, I hope you like it!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted December 27, 2017 Author Share Posted December 27, 2017 (edited) @abhorsen. your review is done! Such an adorable story, btw! @RoxiMalfoy I think I will read 3 or 4 chapters, but not tonight, I'm too tired... probably on Friday evening... the summary sounds interesting, anyway Thank you both for your requests! Edited December 27, 2017 by Felpata_Lupin 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
just.a.willow.tree Posted December 27, 2017 Share Posted December 27, 2017 (edited) Story and Author Name, including RATED link: untrue, untrue (M) by justawillowtreeWarnings and Advisories: hate speechGenre: angst, generalLength: 676 wordsShips: n/aSummary: She wasn't.Areas of Concern: I just want to know what you think! Feel free to take your time with this one. <3 Edited December 27, 2017 by just.a.willow.tree Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aphoride Posted December 27, 2017 Share Posted December 27, 2017 Hi, Chiara! I'm trying to kick myself back into gear with this one, so if you're up for reviewing, feel free to go for one (or all) of these chapters No worries if you just wanna do one, though - I can come back Story and Author Name, including RATED link: Imperium (M) by AphorideWarnings and Advisories: Hate Speech, Sexual Content, Substance Abuse, ViolenceGenre: Angst, Dark/Horror, Drama, Crime/MysteryLength: 3 chapters, ~13k total; roughly 4k per chapterShips: Tom Riddle/Cygnus Black, Eileen Prince/spoilers, Eileen Prince/Tobias Snape (eventual), othersSummary: Men become accustomed to poison by degrees - Victor Hugo It is October 1949: Lycus Malfoy is dying, quarantined in his house alone but for his wife, Adelaide, who still hopes there is a miracle cure; Eileen Prince has vanished into a Muggle life, washing the dead and arranging flowers, away from the sneers she endured at school; Cygnus and Orion Black are at war with each other even as they bury their secrets six feet deep. There is a murderer on the loose, shrouded in paranoia, and the old structures, things of blood and age and time, are starting to crumble. And a ship arrives from Lübeck bringing Tom Riddle home. Areas of Concern: What do you think of the plot so far? Does it make sense, do you have questions? How does the structure work for you - with the four different sections each chapter, each following a different character? What do you think of the writing in general - is it too slow or too heavy? What do you think of the characters - is Tom in character? How do you like the others, Cygnus and Adelaide and Eileen? Thank you so much! Good luck with your 300 goal! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted December 31, 2017 Author Share Posted December 31, 2017 Left at least one review for all of you! And I've reached and surpassed my 300 reviews' goal! Thank you all for requesting! @Aphoride I will be back soon. Possibly I will r&r one or two more chapters for @RoxiMalfoy as well. All slots open for anyone who wants love on their stories! 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pixileanin Posted January 1, 2018 Share Posted January 1, 2018 Hi! I want some love. Author Name: pixileanin Story Title and link: http://archiveofourown.org/works/10723566/chapters/23761107 Harry Potter and the New Centenials(General Audiences) Warnings and Advisories: none Genre: general, future times Length: 2118 (WIP) Characters: OCs for now, and canon characters in later chapters Ships: none Summary: Harry Potter is dead, and all of magic has died with him. Now, hundreds of years in the future, a new magic emerges within three kids who live in a tech-obsessed world that won't accept what it cannot explain. If Zedt, Faun and Gideon have any hope in bringing magic back to life, they're going to need all the help they can get. This is a long-standing WIP. I was hoping for a fresh set of eyes to tell me if it grabs interest and suggestions for maintaining interest... as in... what would you like to see next, and what particular points are the MOST attention grabbing... on the converse, I'd also love to hear about the points that are the LEAST attention grabbing. Thanks for your time! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sunshine_locks Posted January 8, 2018 Share Posted January 8, 2018 Hellooo I'm interested in your reviews because I've heard that you give lovely reviews! (Congrats on your best reviewer nomination!) Author Name: hasane Story Title and link: Miracle (here! M) Warnings and Advisories: profanity, violence, scenes of sexual nature (the latter is mild as of now and the violence is because I needed it for the premise of the story in the beginning) Genre: romance, humor, angst Length: if you read the first chapter it is 3,826 words Characters: OCs, canon next gen characters Ships: Albus/OC (eventually), Scorpius/OC Summary: She was told it was a miracle, but it was more akin to a curse, if one looks at how much she lost. Or alternatively: What would happen if a wizard gave a muggle a blood transfusion? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted January 9, 2018 Author Share Posted January 9, 2018 @Pixileanin your review is done! (Sorry it took me so long, it's been a hectic week... ) @sunshine_locks I will get back to you as soon as I manage. I'm super curious, the summary sounds so interesting... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted January 13, 2018 Author Share Posted January 13, 2018 @sunshine_locks I've reviewed a couple of chapters for you, please feel free to re-request if you like! All slots are open again Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoxiMalfoy Posted January 13, 2018 Share Posted January 13, 2018 Story and Author Name: Love, Not War [M] by RoxiMalfoyWarnings and Advisories: Hate Speech, Suicide, ViolenceGenre: Angst, AU, Horror/Dark, DramaLength: Novel (21 Chapters) WIP: 139,944 so farShips: Draco/OC, Lucius/Narcissa, Molly/Arthur, Summary: When tragedy strikes, Lucius Malfoy is forced to make a difficult decision. He then hands his only son over to the Order of the Phoenix, in the hopes that they will protect him from Lord Voldemort. Now, with nowhere else to go, Draco Malfoy is stuck living at the Burrow with the Weasley’s. But when another new witch from America moves in too, things start to get... interesting.Areas of Concern: Would you mind R&R'ing a few more chapters of LNW for me, Chiara? I don't mind you doing however many chapters you'd like. Your reviews are always so lovely!! I believe you left of on #4: Unexpected Visitors. Thank you so much hun!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sunshine_locks Posted January 14, 2018 Share Posted January 14, 2018 hey, i'm back to ask you if you could read the last two chapters of Miracle? Author Name: hasane Story Title and link: Miracle (here! M) Warnings and Advisories: profanity, violence, scenes of sexual nature (the latter is mild as of now and the violence is because I needed it for the premise of the story in the beginning) Genre: romance, humor, angst Length: chapters 3 and 4: 9,064 words Characters: OCs, canon next gen characters Ships: Albus/OC (eventually), Scorpius/OC Summary: She was told it was a miracle, but it was more akin to a curse, if one looks at how much she lost. Or alternatively: What would happen if a wizard gave a muggle a blood transfusion? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted January 17, 2018 Author Share Posted January 17, 2018 @RoxiMalfoy and @sunshine_locks I will have your reviews up by the end of the week. Sorry if I'm so slow... 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted January 21, 2018 Author Share Posted January 21, 2018 All done! (Finally... sorry again for having you wait... ) I'm going to get a little break from here, so I can prioritize reading for the FROGS. I will be back once voting is over. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted January 31, 2018 Author Share Posted January 31, 2018 Hi, my loves! Guess I'm going to reopen this a bit earlier than I thought (I probably won't make much more progresses with FROGS anyway... ) Throw those links in, people! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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