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just.a.willow.tree

Hi Chiara! <3

Story and Author Name, including link: five lives (M) by justawillowtree

Warnings and Advisories: hate speech, sexual assault, violence

Genre: general

Length: ~6800

Summary: Four lives Astoria saved. And then the fifth.

Ships: n/a

Areas of Concern (if any): I just want to know what you think! Maybe about Astoria's characterization, or the different ways she saves them, or if Astoria is actually clever or if I wrote really dumb scenarios that anyone could come up with. :P I'm mostly concerned about the fifth life, which is where the advisories really start coming in. Concrit would be super appreciated! Thank you so much <3

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Felpata_Lupin

Eva, your review is done! And I loved the story, it was stunning! :wub:

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Felpata_Lupin

Hello, my loves! :wub:

Just bumping this thread up since it's been silent for so long... send me your stories to love!!! :hug:

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Pen2Paper

May I? I'm in need of new perspective!

Story and Author Name, including link: Heaven Can Wait(M) (HPFF link) by Pen2Paper

Warnings and Advisories: Profanity, Mild Violence, Substance Use

Genre: Romance/ Drama (Pre First Wizarding War)

Length: 8 Chapters , Ch1 5576 words

Summary:

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"Mudblood" 

The word hung in the air for a long moment. No one who heard it knew the full gravity of it. They knew what it meant, sure. But why was it said? What happened next? ...

 

The story of how Lily and James and their friends grew into the people we remember from the books.

Ships: Lily/James 

Areas of Concern (if any): Yay for marauder lovers! It's been a while since I've left on hiatus leaving this story unfinished. But I'm back and I'm trying to get back into the plot. I'd like to know if it's interesting enough to keep reading, do you feel like going on to the next chapter. How's the characterization? :)  I've been editing most of the chapters, because some lines felt flat but I've tried not to disturb the original writing too much that it becomes unrecognisable. Anyway  knowing how you feel about the story and characters would be a big help! Thanks in advance !! <3

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victoria_anne

Stopping by here like I said I would! So this is a scene from HTF but I’m Brindley’s POV and I still can’t remember if you’ve read it or not :$ Anyway, here it is! Alive (M)

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Felpata_Lupin

@Pen2Paper your review is done :wub: (on HPFF, is your story on HPFT, too? I can crosspost the review, if you want)

@victoria_anne  I will get to yours tomorrow, B... I'm too tired right now... can't wait, though, I miss Finn and Brindley! :wub:

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Felpata_Lupin

And also @victoria_anne's review is done! :D (it's probably more of an incoherent rambling than a review, stilll...)

All slots open again! :greenstars:

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Pen2Paper

@Felpata_Lupin Oh my goodness! Thank you so much for the AH-MAZING review! I love it so much! and YES PLEASE! I'd love it if you could crosspost the review on HPFT! I'll include the link here! Heaven Can Wait(M) Thanks so much and yes I absolutely will be re-requesting!! :hug::hug::hug:

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Pen2Paper

Back again!!! I absolutely loved your review! Hope you don't mind...

Story and Author Name, including link: Heaven Can Wait(M) (HPFF link) by Pen2Paper

Warnings and Advisories: Profanity, Mild Violence, Substance Use

Genre: Romance/ Drama (Pre First Wizarding War)

Length: 8 Chapters , Ch2 6903 words

Summary:

"It was not your fault! I’m afraid he just was his worst self that day.” She said calmly taking another sip from her mug. 

“Yeah, but so was I...” I said thoughtfully

Ships: Lily/James 

Areas of Concern (if any): New POV, do tell me how you like the characterization! And you love Marauders so please do tell me how you think of the story progression and if you like it so far and think its interest. Gah! Tell me anything you feel like about the chapter! I can't wait to hear more :)

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sunshine_locks

heya! i've got a new chapter out, and i'd love some feedback! 

 

Story Title and author name, including link: Miracle (here! M) by Hasane

Warnings and Advisories: profanity, violence, scenes of sexual nature (the latter is nonexistent as of now and the violence is because I needed it for the premise of the story in the beginning)

Genre: romance, humor, angst

Length: chapter 5, 3,336

Summary: She was told it was a miracle, but it was more akin to a curse, if one looks at how much she lost. 

Or alternatively: What would happen if a wizard gave a muggle a blood transfusion?

Ships: Albus/OC (eventually), Scorpius/OC

Areas of Concern: Mostly just coherency, grammar, and such. It makes sense to my eyes, but I've read it a thousand times so. 

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Felpata_Lupin

@Pen2Paper  your review is done! :wub:  (sorry for the wait)

@sunshine_locks  I will get to yours as soon as I manage, by the end of the week in any case. :rose:

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dreamgazer220

Hey, Chiara!

Story and Author Name, including link: Haunting Shadows (M) by dreamgazer220
Warnings and Advisories: eating disorders, sexual content, substance abuse, violence || anxiety, depression, PTSD
Genre: angst, crime/mystery, drama, hurt/comfort, romance
Length: chapter 14 is 4262 words
Summary: Wasn’t the best place to start the beginning? If he was going to be my friend, he needed to know why Chris’ death was affecting me the way that it was.  And the only way to do that was to go back to the very beginning.

trigger warning: anxiety

Ships: Fred Weasley I/OC, OC/OC
Areas of Concern: As always, your general thoughts on: characterization, flow, tension. Also for this chapter, I'm wondering if it's too slow or too much of an information dump? Is it relevant enough or does it seem too filler? Also: your thoughts on Fred's reactions / how he responds to Cate / their relationship in general.

sorry for any wonky formatting, I’m on phone at the moment. Thanks! ❤️

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Felpata_Lupin

@sunshine_locks done! :hug:

@dreamgazer220  I'll get to yours by the end of the week, possibly tomorrow evening. I'm super thrilled to read your new chapter! :wub:

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Felpata_Lupin

@dreamgazer220  and your review is done, too! (I realized too late that I hadn't payed attention to your areas of concern at all... sorry... :rose:)

I'm planning to change a bit the rules of this thread, primarily I'm planning to remove the limit of two slots at a time (will have the first post edited asap)

In the meantime, request away, my loves! :wub:

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sunshine_locks

Story and Author Name, including link: Miracle (M) 

Warnings and Advisories: Hate Speech, Substance Abuse, Violence

Genre: romance, humor, angst

Length: 4,371 (chapter 6)

Summary: She was told it was a miracle, but it was more akin to a curse, if one looked at how much she lost. 

Or alternatively: What would happen if a wizard gave a muggle a blood transfusion?

Ships: Albus Potter/OC, minor Scorpius Malfoy/OC

Areas of Concern: continuity, grammar, flow, etc.

 

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Felpata_Lupin

Just bumping this up since it's been too quiet for too long... Send me your request, my loves! Help me reach review Alum! :P

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Pixileanin

I've got a 4 chapter thing.  Wanna see it?

 

Coffee and Curse-Breakers (M) by Pixileanin

 Self-Harm, Slavery, Substance Abuse, Suicide, Violence

Action/Adventure, AU, Crime/Mystery, Hurt/Comfort

22K (4 chapters)

Then she saw it.  Two broken, wavy lines across the top of his wrist, not pink from the coffee spill, but actually glowing from under his skin.  At the same time, she felt her own wrist burn like it never had before.  The marks were shockingly familiar, like the underside of her own arm. They matched hers.  

No.  It couldn’t be this man.  There had to be some mistake.

Tonks/Bill W

It's new.  I'm insecure.  Also, concrit away.  I'm always trying to make stuff better, and I wrote this REALLY FAST.

Thanks,

Pix

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Felpata_Lupin

@Pixileanin I've reviewed the first chapter and I've loved it! :wub: I will be back to read on soon (but right now I should really go to sleep, sorry...)

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abhorsen.

Story and Author Name, including link: Everything by abhorsen 

Warnings and Advisories: None

Genre: Fluff, General

Length: 436 words (one-shot)

Summary: The wind is everything, and while she feels it whipping against her face, so is she.

Ships: OC/OC

Areas of Concern: So recent events in my life have led me to feel like expanding on this very loosely connected group of stories might be a thing I want to do... so I'd like thoughts on them? :P

Thank you! :hug:

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