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beyond the rain

Story and Author Name, including link: That's All(M) by beyond the rain

Warnings and Advisories:  Consent Issues (Mild/Moderate), Derogatory Language, Sexual Content, Spoilers, Violence

Genre: Angst, AU, Drama, Fluff, Romance 

Length: Novel, 6 chapters currently over 20,000 

Summary: A witch hides from the society that shunned her for being a muggleborn...and a slytherin. That is until two broken men, fighting on opposite sides of a war, give her no option but to return to the wizarding world. Magic hasn't managed to convince Clara that she belongs, but friends are more persuasive than any spell could be.

Ships: Remus/OC

Areas of Concern: I'd love to hear your first impressions, what you think of the characters that you meet along the way? This is a time jump fic, it takes place over several years rather than months, so maybe if it flows well too? I just want to know how my fic is doing. I don't normally write fics of this length! 

As far as what chapters you can review, if you don't have time to review them all (which is fine) then could you please review the last two chapters? The plot starts getting a bit more interesting there, so I'd really value some feedback on them! 

Thank you!

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