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Name: BellaLestrange87 (Signed) · Date: 30 Apr 2017 03:44 AM · starstarstarstar [Report This]
Story:Coffee And Handcuffs Chapter: Sensory Deprivation

Hi Kaitlin! I'm here for CTF!

I think these are getting more and more rambly so I apologize in advance for the complete and utter nonsensicalness that this will be.

Okay so first of all I saw your author's note and this was so much better than 50 Shades. So much better. There's no comparison. Fifty Shades was.... ugh.... ugh.... ugh... *pours bleach in eyes* This was not. This was excellent smut.

I love the dynamic between them. You can really tell that they care about each other - from the fact that Seamus thought to do this in the first place, to how he was deliberately doing things that he knew would feel good to Dean.

Clearly, my abilities to review smut are not any better than my nonexistent ability to write it. *sighs*

The decaf joke was really funny, and I'm wondering whether he gave Dean decaf or not. I think not because he would need the energy boost from the caffeine to be awake and energized enough for their bedroom antics. (she says, trying to keep this review PG)

I have to admit that I'm a bit curious about what Vestimenta Removere (I don't know how to do accents) is. Is it something he'll be doing? Is it a love phrase (or whatever those darned things are called)?

I think the ending was really sweet. I like how you went from showing their physical love to demonstrating how that was just one part of the emotional connection they shared.

This was really good and I really enjoyed it, regardless of what my mess of a review looks like. I'll be back post-jail!

~Olivia



Author's Response:

Hey Olivia! 

 

No worries. I totally understand how review competitions go.

 

I am so glad to hear that this was better than 50 shades. It's a huge relief to be honest.

 

I definitely wanted to portray a healthy dynamic between Dean and Seamus. I personally ship them together and imagine them having a very loving relationship. 

 

No worries. I have a very hard time writing smut as well. 

 

Ah. The decaf joke hit home for me. Once you hit your late 20s, caffiene really messes you up. 

 

I made up the Vestimenta Removere spell and imagined it being used to remove clothes. 

 

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for the review! Sorry it sent you back to CTF jail.

 

~Kaitlin



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