Hi, Meg! I tried reading your Snap&Hermione story in this archive, but only six chapters up ( as you may know, I've already done chapter 6 at HPFF), so I chose this story. Yay, I'm the first reviewer of this story.
Oh, the story begins with the second person's perspective. It is very impressive. It's lovely to imagine the procedure how James determined to take the wedding ceremony. Did I mention before, that your words flow like the water into the river? I felt your music while reading the mind movement, emotion of James. The balance of the description of Lily and his inner thoughts and feeling is super!
I really love the last paragraph (Kenny grinned, too while reading them kissing ;) . MegGonagall is our Queen for fellow authors. :worshipers:
Aww Kenny! You're the absolute sweetest person ever, did you know that? I can't get over how unbelievably kind this review is. :) I don't even know how to properly respond besides just leaving a string of nonsense like, ahhfodnhahifkebgag!!! I'm really glad that you liked this story, because it was one of my favorite oneshots to write. It was really difficult, too, since I tried to make it 500 words, in second person, with each sentence beginning with the next letter of the alphabet. So to hear that it actually flowed well means a lot to me.
Thank you so much for this review, Kenny! It truly made my day! *hugs*