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Name: Rhaenyra (Signed) · Date: 09 May 2017 12:13 AM · [Report This]
Story:House Elf Cup Event #1: Curling Rock Cakes Chapter: Curling Rock Cakes

I was scrolling through recent Ravenclaw stories for BvB when I stumbled upon this.  The possibility of not only curling but house elves curling was enough to draw me in.

 

Curling is a sport that people don't watch in a lot of areas, so at first I thought it was an interesting choice.  Upon further reflection I actually think it makes a lot of sense given the successes of Team Scotland.

 

I love the way you were able to write the elves talking.  They have such distinct voices in canon that it is important to get them right to seem realistic and you did that.  You could probably add in them using their names a bit more, but all in all it was really good.

 

This left me with lots of questions, some of which I expect some of the others in the House Elf Cup (great name, by the way) will answer.  I have to assume that Dobby has a lot to do with this, though and hope to get the chance to see him more in future additions.

 

I will probably pop by to read the rest soon, because it is hard to resist a nice house elf story. :)



Name: WindingArrow (Signed) · Date: 08 May 2017 10:24 PM · starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Story:House Elf Cup Event #1: Curling Rock Cakes Chapter: Curling Rock Cakes

This was so adorable, I just can't even right now! It's sort of my head canon that Winky and Dobby became an item and I want to write a depressing one shot about her after he dies, but I just can't think about that right now because this is too stinking cute!

 

Poor Winky with her honey covered hands! But I find it ridiculously funny that they are using stolen cookies from Hagrid's as rocks to play their games with. And I don't like Skippy! He's not a very nice elf! XD

 

-Liz



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