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Name: Dojh167 (Signed) · Date: 17 Aug 2018 06:41 PM · [Report This]
Story:The summer guide Chapter: The summer guide

Quodpot - Match 3

 

This already looked like a super interesting concept based on the title alone,but the style you’ve chosen to write it in is super fun! I’m also cracking up because the tone almost sounds like something they’d make us write for the house cup XD

 

The line about the changes that have happened over the years kind of makes me feel like the greenhouses are getting a reputation makeover, and I wonder if/why that would be needed.

 

It’s obvious that you put a lot of thought into this, and it really pays off Even though you’ve taken things from the HP canon, it still has the effect of reading new well thought out world building. I like the little detailed lines like how Neville has balanced dragon and mooncalf dung to get the shrivelfig to thrive. I would never have come up with something like that.

 

Lol someone ran afoul of a puffapod XD

 

Hehe, I like that all those years later, most people have no idea what the Whomping Willow is doing there. And yeahhhh that must have been an awkward conversation for Dumbledore: “I’m going to plant this giant destructive plant right in the middle of the school grounds.” “Okay… any particular reason?” “Cause. Albus out!”

 

Lol at Mcgonagall not believing idle curiosity is strong XD

 

This was a really cool piece! On one hand it was very dry and down to business, but there were also lots of little fun bits and humor. Very nice job!

 

Sam.



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