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Name: M C Crocker (Signed) · Date: 03 Dec 2018 04:53 PM · starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Story:This Is How You Love Her Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh, ug, I am gutted.  Simply gutted.  Mainly becuase of where this story ends and knowing where it will go next.  What Cedric dreams will not be and that kills me.  You really capture the sweet nature of Cedric you hold his personality ture and it is wonderful  You also paint a lovely picture of what the relationship betwen Cedric and Cho was like.  This was such a wonderufl read and the light passion of the fingers currling around the waist band of jeans.  Just bliss.

 

I'm just so sad that Cedric never gets what he wants, what he dreamed of.  You played emotions well here and you also handled the 2nd person pov perfectly it read well and did not feel odd or jarring at all.  Lovely job dearest.  You write beautifully and it has been my pleasure to do these reviews as a reward for winning my challenge.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I'm so glad to hear that you enjoyed this piece. It was hard to write because of Cedric's fate, but ultimately very rewarding. I also love dabbling in second person, so I'm happy to hear it worked for you.



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