10 Dec 2018 02:59 PM ·
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Hi, Gina. After a long time, I came back to your story.
It's very sad to read through the protagonist's half life. I guess she had been happy until the marriage. Marriage changes life for everyone. Marriage brings both happiness and torture, which, I say the golden rule as two persons get together having different background each other.
You set HP fandom, especially choosing the situation as being Pureblood and her husband as a Death Eater. It's an interesting concept and I feel you try to explain what the war has had influenced human-beings in the term of marriage, the relationship between a husband and a wife. Besides, you embedded the theme infertility, which gave the depth to this story. I found your story full of joy and sadness, that's life. I think it's your writing style and readers are attracted to it. 70 % painful experiences brought by marriage and the rest, happiness produced by marriage. I felt that way while reading your story.