Reviews For Daddy's Little Girl


Name: forever_dreaming (Signed) · Date: 13 Aug 2018 12:09 PM · For: Daddy's Little Girl

Hi there! Here with another review for Quadpot (Match 3) and BvB! 

 

OH NO. I was really unprepared for the twist at the end of this fic, and it's left me really sad. I think the fact that this was written directly to Bill only increases my sadness. You're really very good at manipulating emotions haha. 

 

I loved your depiction of Victoire and Bill's relationship, it really made me think of my relationship with my dad. Bill seems like the best kind of dad—the kind of dad who wants to protect his daughter, but also wants her to be strong. I loved that he didn't tell Victoire she was too young to understand when she asked about his scars; he was honest, without telling her so much that he'd scare her, and I really love that sense of fairness about him, because Victoire doesn't deserve to have the truth hidden from her.

 

I know that you didn't intend for this to be political, but this line struck me especially hard: "there was no greater horror to my young mind than the thought that I might never see you again." I couldn't help but think of the children who're being separated from their parents and the level of terror they might be feeling; your depiction of Victoire as a child, so attached to her father, really reaffirms my viewpoint that families belong together and separating families is honestly a criminal action. At the same time, this line is doubly tragic because Bill was bound to leave her at some point—we all die (not to be totally nihilistic haha), which makes this fic even more devastating. 

 

Ugh. Gotta go give my dad a hug now. Thank you for sharing this lovely fic with us! <3



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