Reviews For Have No Fear


Name: StarFeather (Anonymous) · Date: 02 Jan 2019 05:09 AM · For: Master Wu’s Surprise

Hi, Kevin. I came back. 

It's hilarious that Harry and Ron found out Sensei was a squib and it was respected in his community. I like your idea.

 

I am relieved to know Master Wu was very calm just like Kingsley and wise to let Harry and Ron see the things correctly. I enjoyed the episode he had known who Harry and Ron were, too. I like the 'serving  green tea' description, too.

Wu sounds rather Chinese name, however, Sensei, surely Japanese people often use it. 

 

Ash is also a great man. I am very impressed by your creating appealing characters such as Ash and Master Wu. Readers can enjoy more not only HP canon characters but also new ones you created. You put them together great and you caght Harry's and Ron's characteristic very well when they couldn't stop plunging themselves into Auror stuff. I feel your kind eyes to see these young protagonists in this chapter. 

A great chapter again!

 

K



Author's Response:

Hi Kenny!

Thanks again for the Challenge reviews!

 

I did intend for Master Wu to be Chinese...you will see his explanation of how he knew who Harry and ron were. I use the term "sensei" for Master Wu's title because it I have called almost allof my martial arts teachers that whether they were Chinese, Japanese, Korean or Phillipine. Correct me if I'm wrong, but I believe it's actually Japanese but many martial arts use the term.

 

I do like to create supporting characters! It seems to give more depth and believability to the story.

 

Thanks, again, for the reviews, my friend!!



Name: StarFeather (Anonymous) · Date: 02 Jan 2019 03:02 AM · For: Unexpected Decisions

Hi! I came back to drop an award review.

I was eager to know if Ginny would be okay, so I read through the previous chapter in haste and felt relieved to know she recovered completely. 

Then I could find how Harry made a decision to enter the Ministry along with Ron. A penny dropped. I guess the incident must have influenced on his mind , too. 

I spotted this : Quidditch is in your heart and Auror is in your blood. A good line. I love it. It's great Ginny knows Harry and understands him very well.

The steamy scene, Ginny led must be appealing to Hinny shippers (including me. :D ). On the contrary, the moment when Harry noticed her shaved spot let us feel sad and feel for her. We hope their happiness more from the scene. A great chapter! 

 

I'll be back.

 

K



Author's Response:


Name: StarFeather (Anonymous) · Date: 02 Jan 2019 01:42 AM · For: Into Harry’s Memories

Hi, Kevin. Happy New Year!

 

Sorry for dropping late award reviews at Auror's Tale Story Challenge Season 4.

I chose this chapter for it ^ , as I have written about Draco myself. So it's interesting to read how you think of his angst or his desire for the future. I like your way how Draco knew contradiction of the Pure-Blood's society and how awful the Dark Lord was, he was just a tyrant. And I could figure out how Draco got his job like he worked for Teddy Lupin in the other work of yours.

The last part, he had to erase the part of Harry's memory, I guess it was necessary to work secretly for the department of the ministry. I understand that.

Still the mystery, why Ginny was shot has not revealed yet. Is it too easy to guess the woman who led the sequence of the gun shots may be Rita Skeeter? If so, I am afraid how Harry will be furious and might do action extremely towards her. Maybe not. We have smart Hermione. She will find the best answer for it.

 

I'll be back. :)

 

K



Author's Response:

Hello, again, my friend!

Thanks for the review!

 

I always thought Draco would be the DeathEater most likely to turn away from the ways of Lord Voldemort. I like to write him as a "soul in search of itself"...someone who knows they need to change, but not always so sure how to do it.

 

Well, it will be quite a few chapters before we find out who "she" is that set the wheels in motion for the attempt on The Golden Quartet's lives, but I hope you enjoy the story getting there!

 

Thanks again for the review!

 

Kev



Name: StarFeather (Anonymous) · Date: 12 May 2018 07:22 PM · For: INCONSOLABLE

Hi, Kevin. I finally came here. When I started reading, I got a bit confused, like "wait, did I miss something? Ginny was gojng to die?" Then I had a look at the summary of your other work, 'CL, SL, KH'. Hmm... you seemed to start a unique kick off for the sequence. 

 

I felt for Harry's deep grievance over Ginny who had been sick in bed from your excellent descriptions (Ron's dialogues, Harry's lack of sleep). I wonder why she had been unconscious. It seems that Hermione has the important key to solve the problem. And his memory, the gunshots and the flash light. It's obvious someone from the dark side tried to kill him and Ginny.

 

The conversation between him and Neville is very intriguing. The mystery began. Then he suddenly pointed his wand at Draco Malfoy casting Legilimens. I'll come back to see how you will develop the plot next.

 

K



Author's Response:

Hello my good friend, Kenny!!

I'm so glad you stopped by and reviewed!! I can understand your confusion if you haven't read my first story completely. This story picks up immediately after the first and is not a stand alone. I left a HUGE cliffhanger at the end of CL, SL, KH! I hope you get some time to read it, or at least the last chapter so you can get a better idea of the first chapter of Have No Fear.

I see you've posted/ updated many of your stories...now it's my turn to get on the review wagon and return to some of your stories!

Oh...and, I've been working on the Auror Challenge. It should be all done very soon, and then i'll get it all submitted!!

Thanks agina for stopping by, Kenny!!!!

 

Kev



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