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Name: Renacera (Signed) · Date: 15 Jul 2019 10:48 PM · [Report This]
Story:A Street Vendor's Rose Chapter: Take Me Dancing

Hello again!

This is such a sweet little story. I love that you took something you were interested in (the tango) and expanded it into an origin story/folklore. I think that sort of creativity is how the best stories begin--authors think of something that they want to know more about, and if there isn't an answer, they create one. This story does that very well.

You did a fabulous job showing the flashback to the first dancers. We don't even get names for them, but we "know" them. We understand their struggle and their love for each other, and you did a very good job of illustrating that through the dance.

Your descriptions of the tango are perfect. Even someone who's never seen it danced will understand the moves and the sensuality of it, and I think that's very impressive.

The scene with Draco and Hermione made me smile. I love them so much as a couple, and I love the observation by the flower seller that they've cleared been through fire to be together. I think that any Dramione story should know that--these two have to go through something significant to find each other and fall in love. Wonderfully done.

Everything about this story was so nice. Very well-written. Good job!

Best,
Emily



Name: trashyreader (Signed) · Date: 12 May 2018 01:36 PM · [Report This]
Story:A Street Vendor's Rose Chapter: Take Me Dancing

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Author's Response:

Hello there. I'm not sure what your message is, but thanks so much for reading my story. I hope you liked it! 

Sincerely, Dark Whisper



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