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Name: MuggleMaybe (Signed) · Date: 20 Jan 2019 08:05 PM · [Report This]
Story:Kiss Me, My Prince! Chapter: Kiss Me, My Prince

Hello! I'm here for the Magical Menagerie and BvY Team Black.

 

Firstly: OLIVER/CEDRIC IS A GREAT SHIP AND I DON'T KNOW WHY I NEVER THOUGHT OF IT. I am ALL IN.

 

Secondly: The idea for this story is beyond adorable.

 

It is hilarious that there's a spell to prevent anyone but your true love from transfiguring you. On the one hand, that's kind of terrifying. On the other hand... maybe it would make dating easier? Everyone can transfigure into puppies and give each other kisses until they find the one =P

 

It's really clever to have him turn into a cat rather than the traditional frog because frankly, who in the world would kiss a frog? But I have kissed several ittens in my day! =P Plus, he truly did sound like an adorable cat. 

 

One thing I really liked was the way you situated the story chronilogically with the line about Sirius Black. 

 

Soft Oliver is the only Oliver I want right now <3

 

I honestly want this to be longer. I want to understand why they like each other, I want the ~history. This is incredibly charming, but very short and sweet. I'm greedy and would like more Cedric/Oliver please =P

 

Super cute story!

 

xoxo Renee



Name: dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap (Signed) · Date: 16 Aug 2018 07:43 AM · starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Story:Kiss Me, My Prince! Chapter: Kiss Me, My Prince

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I’m on the bus and I probably shouldn’t be reading this story because I can’t stop chuckling out loud. This is too funny! I love Cedric here. I don’t read too many stories of him but his personality shines here even as a cat. 

 

I think this is an interesting and original concept. I don’t think it has ever been done before. From the beginning I knew this was going to be good because if you can’t trust your partner, who can you trust? He knew things were going to go South quickly. I was surprised that Katie could turn him into a cat. I had figured she’d turn him into a half cat-half man or something of the sort so it was a nice surprise to see he transformed! 

 

He sounds like such a cute little kitty and very into himself. 

 

Only his true love can turn him back?! What type of magic is this! As a transfiguration class you’d think mcgonagall would point out incantations to not say to prevent a predicament like this. 

 

Lolol Cedric in love with McGonagall? I would hope not. 

 

Ahhh!!! How cute!! I’m smiling weirdly on the bus now. Oliver finds kitty Cedric and that’s his love. I like that he transforms once he kisses him and it’s slightly awkward but Cedric brushes it off. Better to not face your feelings and go kill your transfiguration partner instead. I love that Oliver is not even phased by the transformation as if he knew all along and is just like “I like you.” If only life was that simple! 

 

This was such a cute and sweet story. I absolutely loved it from beginning to end. I think you nailed Cedric’s characterization and Oliver seemed like the sweet little Captain that I love. 

 

I kind of wish Cedric would have been able to kiss him back but I suppose we can’t get everything we want. 

 

 

I just realized Cedric squeezed his hand. Hahaha he really should have just gone for the kiss. That hand squeeze is rather awkward! 



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