Reviews For Master of Luck

Name: StarFeather (Signed) · Date: 19 Oct 2018 02:04 PM · starstarstarstar [Report This]
Story:Master of Luck Chapter: II: I’d Lie

Hi, I came from the review tag at the forums. I have also known that you twittered about your fics. ; )


I read chapter 1 and got curious to know what the incident was exactly around the relic, which made Narcissa feel dirty or got McGonagall furious. The silvery words were chiseled and Draco knew it from his Hogwarts years? It seems that Lucius and Nott were just like James Potter and Sirius Black. They also had done lots of mischievous things. It's new 'cause I read from Slytherin students' POV at Hogwarts. It likely happened that they got used to be with Muggle Borns in spite of the situation, the Pure Bloods must hate them for their upbringing.


I feel for Black sisters, Andromeda and Narcissa. Bellatrix had prepared spies for her sisters' behavior. I feel like reading the detailed description about her more. :D


Wow, Lucius did such a chivalrous action for Narcissa. It's very unexpected and cool. It's also so fresh to read Narcissa's mind movements. I have only read Andromeda / Tonks ship before. You wrote Lucius-Narcissa ship so straight, which is a great thing. Keep writing! I send cheers. :)



Name: starbuck (Signed) · Date: 18 Oct 2018 05:37 PM · starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Story:Master of Luck Chapter: I. Teenage Dream

i really shouldn't commit to a story that's supposed to be around 55 chapter while there are only two posted...but the whole idea you have behind this is quite original and i couldn't help myself.


i adore lucius/narcissa fics for some reason - i just always think of the two of them being only truly loyal to themselves and their family and it's something i find truly interesting, their love for each other&draco is stronger than voldy and i think it shows that lucius, while being kinda evil-ish and death eater-y and all that, isn't actually someone who really believes in all of voldy's pureblood mania propaganda. he's in it for himself and his family. at least, for the most part because i know there's some part of him that believes purebloods are better than everyone else, but, much like draco, i think that's mostly due to his upbringing.


anyhow, a muggleborn healer/psychiatrist fighting to help lucius malfoy is something i've never read or would think of so i'm dying to know more!


the way you described why narcissa would actually share their intimate history with someone just to get him out of azkaban faster (and that's not even when she's 100% sure that it will actually help him) is so very her and something i can easily imagine happening.


i'm looking forward to reading more of this story!



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