Reviews For Cain's Pit

Name: MuggleMaybe (Signed) · Date: 28 Jan 2019 11:59 PM · [Report This]
Story:Cain's Pit Chapter: Soaked in Abel's Blood

Hello dear! Here for the Menagerie and BvY. Here we go...


DUDE, I am so here for a Chilling Adventures of Sabrina fic!


It's been a while since I watched it and it took me a minute to place this story in canon, but I'm there with you now. Super interesting idea to write about this! I don't think this was Sabrina's best ever idea. To say the least.


I really love the first two lines of this drabble. It's so hard to believe others will act differently from how we expect them to. It's so hard to conceive that other people are that complex, or that inconsistent. So, even though I know what is going to happen, I still find myself caught off guard, just like that second sentence shows.


It's sad when she asks who will mourn her. I'm kind of a fan of Prudence. I think people are too hard on her. But it's true no one from their school of the church of the night is ever particularly forthcoming with loving emotion. And I include grief as a loving emotion. What a lonely idea. 


I hope you write more Sabrina fic at some point. I would definitely read it!


xoxo Renee


Name: juls (Signed) · Date: 04 Dec 2018 05:27 PM · starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Story:Cain's Pit Chapter: Soaked in Abel's Blood

Hey, Rumpels, I'm here for the EvS review battle (gotta restake the claim for the Emeralds, y'know!)

First off, I seen this episode of Sabrina and it chilled me to the bone. Sabrina is slipping into that dark side of her in a chilling pace, even she always meant to resurect that aweful Weird Sister. (Which is such a tie into Harry Potter with that name to me!) Those three are pure evil in my book.

I'm glad you brought out her side of the story. Her thoughts, I mean, come on, she had NO clue that she was going to be brought back to life. Didn't know Prudence's and Sabrina's plan until AFTER she clawed herself out of the dirt. Kind of (more of) a fitting revenge set for both Sabrina AND Prudence. (Sabrina for the murder of the miners and Prudence for overstepping the hierarchy of the Weird Sisters)

This was fantastic, Rumpels!!


<3 juls

Name: godslayer (Signed) · Date: 04 Dec 2018 05:24 PM · starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Story:Cain's Pit Chapter: Soaked in Abel's Blood

first off, i'll be composed and say that i'm here for the EvS review battle (go Silver!) and then let me get right into this

alsjdalj i literally went back and watched ep 8 + 9 just so i could review this with Good Background Knowledge and honestly. this is art. a masterpiece. the alliteration - the declaratives - "we used to be three" hardcore chef kiss, this is beautiful. "loamy earth" MMMMM GOOD CONTENT, it just gives such a clear image of dirt... if that makes sense...

i love how you've pinned down agatha's anger so succinctly - her rage at prudence for not really being a weird sister and at sabrina for being a half-witch (high key love the call out that sabrina demands exceptions) and even her fury at tommy kinkle. 

absolutely incredible 

- emily 

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