I'm trying to make BvB in November one of the best ever. Since you were the first person to post reviews, I thought it only fitting that you shoul get one too. And then I saw that your newest story didn't have any reviews yet!
You hit one of myy sweet spots. I absolutely adore missing moments. And I'm a sucker for any story that offers a unique perspecitve and a new way of looking at the story. This amazing one-shot delivered spot-on with both of those requirements. A sentient pumpkin that tells his tale from beyond the grave?! Yes, please. And thank you very much.
I love how you drew the reader the picture of how this moment in time was so very important to Harry and his cause. You drew us a picture of Harry's timeline and how very important this pumpkin's death was to his cause. I was moved by your words.
The story was nearly flawless. I noticed this typo in the line: "Would Dumbledore have killed Potter than night in an attempt to strike at the Dark Lord? "
I think you meant to type "that," not "than."
What I really adored about this story is the sweet undertones brought about by your chosen words. I've actually started feeling sorry for this pumpkin. But then, I start to feel brave. The pumpkin knew it had a respnibility, a job to fulfill. I felt like I was taking my place alongside the pumpkin in the sacrificial role that was played and the waterfall effect that it had.
Overall, great job with this story!