Reviews For A Soft Murder


Name: Lacey Black (Signed) · Date: 20 Jul 2019 03:16 AM · For: A Soft Murder

Hey there here for the HC

There was something about this that made me want to read it, and I am more than glad I did because you drew me in right from the first line. There is something so powerful there that captured my interest right away, I had to keep reading. He doesn’t kill you with physical means but he does kill you so how. There isn’t a physical wound so there’s no way to repair it. And that is I think so very powerful alone. I felt that in my bones. Your way with words through out this entire piece is amazing but I think it’s the first stanza that really hit me in my guts. 

The second stanza is interesting so much more so because the speaker describes the murder not by a verbal sense either, the person hasn’t tainted other views of them either. You as the writer then capture a very important moment. The murderer doesn’t murder, they simply leave, knowing that is easily the worst way to end it all. Leave them broken, bruised but don’t end their life. Let them suffer. 

This really drew me in and I find how you write captivating and stirring. You have a way with expressing a moment in a way that is so powerful, meaningful and emotional. You brought in a very strong and emotional topic and even though I haven’t read the story this is about now I want to and that is what great writing does. It makes the reader want more and I feel like this was everything in just 80 words that’s amazing. 

Just wow.

insert keyboard banging now.

xo

lexi



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