Name: StarFeather (Signed) · Date: 16 Apr 2019 11:18 AM · [Report This]
Story:When the Walls Won't Hold Chapter: Chapter 1

Hi, Jill. This fic has Morgana. Even one line made me excited. I imagine she beat Arthur with their discussion. Good old days, we know how she would turn to be the evil witch...

Uther was stupid in spite of Gaius's effort, he didn't know fear. At least, we don't have to face Camelot's fall under the coming circumstances...evil curse...yet.

The first half, you did great with describing friendship between Arthur and Merlin. Your awesome description reminded me of the drama on TV. You reproduced the world, "the prince and the servant, but they were best mates" very well.


From the next chapters, I guess you prepare tons of very angsty scenes caused by the old chest armor. It's scary to imagine how terrible the curse must be...ancient grudge of the old king?



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