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Name: Nix (Signed) · Date: 24 Dec 2018 04:40 AM · [Report This]
Story:Confundus Chapter: Confundus

Hey! Stopping by to leave you a little Christmas review! This was such a great little story! I'm not much of a fan of Hermione/Ron, but I'm definitely not a fan of Cormac so this was a fun little tidbit to read from Hermione's perspective. I was a little surprised your version of Hermione doesn't understand sports. I always thought that she did, but just didn't play due to her fear of flying and possible lack of cordination. I always wonder what made her decide to confund Cormac that day. Doing so was very against her beliefs in fairness, but maybe after spending so much time with Harry and the Weasleys, all their rule-breaking must have eventually rubbed off on her enough to do such a thing. Of course, we all know she did everyone a huge favor by keeping Cormac off the team.

 

Anyway, this was such a lovely little story and a great read! Hope you have a lovely holiday!

xxNix



Name: juls (Signed) · Date: 14 Dec 2018 06:15 PM · starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Story:Confundus Chapter: Confundus

Hey, Meg, back again for the EvS review battle!

<i>Confundus</i>. I really, for some reason, before I began reading, expected this to be directed at Ron. Why? He's an insufferabe git, of course.

But, then, I saw the name <i>Cormac</i> and almost, well, lost my lunch. If there was ever a person in the HP universe I disliked more than good ole Umbridge, it would be Cormac. You described perfectly how slimy he and just how he makes <i>me</i> feel in Hermione's own reaction.

I love how you've written her. She (and our beloved Snape) are my favorite characters and you've kept her <i>in</i> character so beautifully. You have a great way of drawing your readers in with your words, dear.

This was fantastic, and even made me feel for Ron.

<3 juls



Name: M C Crocker (Signed) · Date: 27 Jun 2018 09:59 PM · starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Story:Confundus Chapter: Confundus

For the Hot Seat! 

 

Anyway, love, this was a good read.  You did a great job capturing Hermione's voice and giving her reasons for doing what she did in the books.  I love seeing canon moments from the perspective of other than Harry.  This was a joy to read as is most of your stuff.  I should do more reading in general but life is just so crazy.  Still, I really enjoyed this story!

 

I loved the moments of Hermione getting creeped out by Cormac as well - that amused me.  Sorry I'm spastic with this review - I hope it isn't too spastic.  Lovely story.



Name: Anonymous Gift Enthusiast (Anonymous) · Date: 24 Aug 2017 12:30 PM · [Report This]
Story:Confundus Chapter: Confundus

*splutters* Excuse me? How dare you all have a gift giving competition without ME?!?! Well, lucky I caught you all before it ends.

 

I love all the little details throughout, like Hermione understanding everything, so it was saying something when she didn't understand Quidditch, and how Harry could defeat Voldemort but not control a bunch of students. I love that she was there in a show of support for Ron. It was so great to see this scene from Hermione's point of view, I think you did a fantastic job of writing it, and writing Hermione's feelings of McLaggen!    



Name: Unreliable Time Turner (Anonymous) · Date: 14 Aug 2017 06:31 PM · [Report This]
Story:Confundus Chapter: Confundus

Confundus is such a funny charm.  You think you know how something is going and then – what was that? Confused! I can rather relate to this, being an Unreliable Time Turner myself. You never can be quite sure what you’re going to get with me, I’m afraid.


 


I have seen Hermione in a number of pesky situations on your AP before but it seems that this “sports” thing is confusing her most.  She has an excellent point: why promote even more rivalry between the houses? It could be all in good fun at times, but during a war you would think Hermione is on to something. Turning people against possible allies is just bad planning. I suppose that is the issue with houses in the first place, even though it is rarely talked about.


 


“Catcher” made me laugh. She has memorized so many spells and complex theories but a simple Quidditch term is too much for her. After five years in the wizarding world, she should be well versed in the Quidditch positions!


 


“She couldn't help but to become slightly angry and shake her head at Harry's poor judgement.” This is definitely something a 16 year old would think about one of their best friends. Know-it-all teenagers especially. ;)


 


Cormac really is something. Staring, winking, and running his tongue across his lips. It’s like he has read all the flirting tricks out of Witch Weekly. Somebody has it bad for our dear Hermione!


 


I’m not a big Ronmione fan, but the end part was touching. She doesn’t seem to have admitted that she fancies him to herself yet, but I suppose it could be a just-good-friends moment if you really argued for it.


 


This was very short and sweet.  I didn’t catch any mistakes, but I am “Unreliable”.  I did read “Rob” instead of “Ron” at one point, but a double-check revealed that was just me misreading. I was hoping to have at least one correction to feel like a useful sort of time turner, but I guess compliments will just have to do.


 


Now how do I get out of here? I am a bit lost, I’m afraid!



Name: AbraxanUnicorn (Signed) · Date: 02 May 2017 09:05 AM · starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Story:Confundus Chapter: Confundus

Meg!

I can't believe it's taken me so long to visit your AP and read some of your stories! All I can do is apologise for RL getting in the way. I have put "Saving Severus Snape" onto my must-read list for this month, so expect another visit from me soon :)

I absolutely love the opening couple of lines of this story, which include the essential words for any story with Hermione as the protagonist "because Hermione Granger understood everything." I wonder if she views the concept of organised sport as rather silly, mainly because she isn't very good at it? I understand her point that inter-house quidditch matches create yet more divisions within the school, but there are many admirable skills and qualities to be acquired and honed through participating in team sports. Look at what CTF did for us, for example!

Within the first couple of paragraphs of this story, you have really captured the essence of Hermione; an intelligent girl and loyal friend, who understands the power of unity and isn't afraid of voicing her opinion, but knows also when to keep her thoughts under wraps. We get a glimpse of her affection for Ron, and how she's willing to compromise her morals to protect his pride, in a game she neither understands nor cares for. I wonder if it's a bit of a turning point towards romance for both of them, especially when Hermione hugs Ron at the end?

I loved the comparisons drawn by Hermione between Harry's demonstration of leadership qualities in the fight against Voldemort and the rather hopeless management of his quidditch team. Thank goodness for Ginny Weasley's no-nonsense approach. TBH, she would have made a much better quidditch captain than Harry. I'm sure Dumbledore only chose him because he felt bad at not awarding him the Prefect badge.

Cormac McLaggen is so odiously portrayed here; I can feel my skin crawling at the thought of his "hungry eyes". When he licked his lips, I actually recoiled in disgust. Bleugh.

I really enjoyed this comical one-shot; it was really well-written and a lovely bit of insight into Hermione Granger's character. Great work!

Brax X



Name: LunaStellaCat (Signed) · Date: 31 Dec 2016 05:42 PM · starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Story:Confundus Chapter: Confundus

Wow.  I am here with your review.   And Wow.  Can I just say this is the best, most cohesive thing zI have read on ths site?  I am not just saying that, either, I am a stickler when it comes to this stuff.  I have had your name down because I wanted to read your stuff.  The Severus Snape thing is on my list.  

 You put a lot of thought into this moment.  I love how she's sitting there with a thermos of coffee, and I am sitting here on New Years Eve in my new house with no heat.  That might have a lot to do with this review - Im kidding.  

You may have just converted me to a Hermione fan.  Outside of her name coming from Shakespeare, I didn't csre for her.  It's nice that she sees this from the outside going in.  The part that I find hilarious is that she finds McLaggen appalling and somewhat handsome.  The part where I laughed out loud in HBP and spilled coffee over a copy?  When she's at the Slug Club party and she turns to Harry and says, "I've only just escaped."  There were literal tears the first time I read that!:)  

That's probaby not a direct quote.  Whatever.  You keep this thing consistent the entire way through, which is REALLY impressive.  It's not a flowery romance where she flips to pinning over Ron.  You stay on point with staying on the scene. It's nice that she acknowledges Harry and Ginny working together.  Hang on.  I have to scroll back up because you said something.  The hint about Harry's popularity is a nice touch.  

I'm going out of order here because I'm jumping back up to the top.  I read through twice before I review.  The introduction talks about Hermione's adversion to sports?   MegGonagall, can I give you a virtual handshake because that is spot on?  It makes me wonder how Hermione was with skiing with her parents on the holidays.  That's another think I love in Book 5.  When she describes skiing to Ron and he finds the whole thing stupid and laughable?  It isn't that she's a cliche nerd walking away from sports, and you make that distinction here.  She's Hermione being classic Hermione🤗 

Jesus, I could write a book on this.  You want me to continue?  Oh, correct me here if I'm wrong because I am too lazy to walk over to my bookshelf.  (Yeah, my new house is in disarray but the Harry Potter collection is on the bookshelves.  Don't judge.)  Isn't "McGlaggen" supposed to be "McLaggen"? It is.  I just looked it up. I am a research rat.  Sorry.  

The part that I LOVE?  She wants to tell him he's brilliant without knowing if he's brilliant.  She may even doubt if he's brilliant. That, Meg, is your stroke.  There is so much to that.  

Are you this strong of a writer on your other pieces?  Damn.  If you need reviews, I need reading material.  Well done.  

 

LSC

 

 

 

 

 



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