Reviews For Unlikely


Name: Renacera (Signed) · Date: 27 Jan 2021 02:36 AM · For: Abandoned

Aww, cute. :)

I'm on a kick of reading Slytherin-centric stories right now, and I really enjoyed this one. I don't tend to read many stories that happen prior to 7th year (mostly because I have no concept of how kids act or what they think about, so I can't tell if a story's characterization is good, haha), but this one was really lovely!

And, because talking about characterization is my favorite!, I think you did a really good job with Parvati and Pansy! In particular, I liked their banter. You can tell it's a tense peace, but I think Pansy has a point that it's the first step. They really do have a lot in common, and if they put their house rivalry aside, I think they could be really good friends!

You did such a great job with a "missing moment" type story. I enjoyed this a lot. Thanks for the wonderful read!

Best,
Emily


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Name: 800 words of heaven (Signed) · Date: 31 Mar 2018 12:27 AM · For: Abandoned

*Transferred from HPFF*

 

REVIEW TAG.

 

Oh, I am so here for Gryffindor/Slytherin friendships, especially those during the Hogwarts era and between two women to boot! It kinda sucks that they have to go under an AU label, but at least you've written something like this, and for that, I am forever thankful.

 

First of all, I just love the fact that you've written about the beginning of a friendship between two women. So often, females are portrayed as trying to rip each other apart, especially when they're on opposites sides of a rivalry like the one between Gryffindor and Slytherin.

 

And OMG. The sass these two girls have! Fantastic! So fantastic! It's literally all I have to say on that subject. I am all about the sass, as well as the friendship.

 

It's so great that these two girls bond over something that's perceived as being really "girly" but they're so unashamedly enthusiastic about it anyway. It doesn't take anything away from their strong personalities, and I really like how it's decoupled "girly" from "weak".

 

I really enjoyed this little one-shot. Thanks for the lovely read :)



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