Reviews For The First Quidditch Match


Name: Felpata_Lupin (Signed) · Date: 25 Dec 2018 03:43 PM · For: Chapter 1

Paula!!! :D

Here to wish you a Merry Christmas, dear (aka, here with a little gift for your wishlist)

I was scrolling your page, uncertain of what to pick, then I saw this little Harry/Albus tucked there and I couldn't resist... I live for cute family moments! <3

And this was so adorable! It was so lovely to imagine little Albus in Harry's lap enjoying his first Quidditch game! Albus, who hadn't yet joined James in the age of being too-cool-for-cuddles For some reason, I adored this line so much!!!

It's so much fun how Albus is so into the Cannons, and how abashed (is that the right word? Probably not...) Harry is about it. Uncle Ron must be so proud, though... :P Also, so fun how Ginny was so shocked that her son hadn't been to a Quidditch match before six years old... considering she made a living with Quidditch, the shock is understandable, I guess... :P

I really think this was just plain adorable, it's just a very short moment, but so nice to read. And yes, I agree... Cursed Child's Harry is just so bad... I mean, I guess I get what they were trying to do, but it's just not right? Sorry, digression...

Loved, loved, loved this!

Merry Christmas again, my dear! And a huge snowball hug rolling your way!

Chiara



Name: 800 words of heaven (Signed) · Date: 03 Dec 2018 06:46 AM · For: Chapter 1

Hey, Paula! Just wrestled a Niffler on behalf of Kaitlin/TreacleTart to get this review!

 

Aww! This was just so sweet! I am just a sucker for fluff, and whilst I usually go for the romantic type, I’m glad I read this lovely bit of domesticity. Quidditch was so important to Harry, the only time he truly felt like a productive member of Wizarding society during the books, and it was just so lovely to see him share that with his son. And Albus is so sweet! Of course he goes for the worst team in the league! He seems like someone who’d go for the underdog, with or without the influence of his uncle Ron. I am truly amazed Ginny didn’t get to him first and convince him the only team worth barracking for was the Holyhead Harpies :P

 

What a delightful read, Paula! I will be stalking your AP some more later this holiday season, so watch out for another rambling review from yours truly!

 

Xx 800



Name: forever_dreaming (Signed) · Date: 13 Aug 2017 07:07 PM · For: Chapter 1

Hi! This fic was actually on my TBR labeled as "the fluffy fic that'll probably make you cry and grin and a loser"... and my expectations were completely met and even surpassed. This was so freaking adorable. I completely absolutely 100% agree with you that Harry would treat his kid like this and not like the neglectful jerk he was in CC--especially because of how he was treated by the Dursleys. 

So many things to love about this fic. Harry's resignation over Albus's traitorous love for the Cannons. Fierce Rose--I think this portrayal of her as protective and love is much more true to her nature than what was portrayed in CC. Albus's tiny fists (I LOVE BABIES ❤️). Harry being proud of Albus's natural seeking ability. The front row seats. Gosh, everything about it was so sweet and loving.

The entire time I was imagining James doing something similar for Harry and crying a little (okay a lot). I loved that you focused on Harry's love for his son and his desire to make his son feel loved and never neglected--absolutely in character. 

The only thing I didn't like about this was that it was so short! I wanted more fluffy sweetness haha! 



Name: ShazaLupin (Signed) · Date: 11 Jun 2017 06:29 PM · For: Chapter 1

Hey, just transfering reviews over from CTF!

"Hey there, here for CTF!


I thought this sounded like a cute little one-shot of Harry and Albus, and I was right, this is adorable. You portray Harry as an amazing father, and it’s so nice to read. From how he enjoys cuddles of Albus and being happy that he’s totally going to be a seeker, to indulging him in seats that will give him the best view. It’s so cute, and yeah, I agree with Ginny, by age six he should have definitely been to a game haha.

Lol, I love Ron’s subtle influence here, go Cannons! I must admit I was hoping for a bit of fanfiction artistic licence and to have them win but I suppose Fan Fiction can only go so far haha. I did like how even though they lost ALbus was still so cheery and singing the songs he’d learnt, at six he was probably just thrilled to see them play and might not have understood what happened.

This is such an amazing one shot, Albus is so funny. I can imagine how much of a mess he is, and how displeased Ginny clearly is because she's probably going to be the one to clean him up. Woops, I wouldn’t want to be Harry right now.

This was a lovely little one-shot that showed just how cute Albus and Harry are, although your COMMENT AT THE BOTTOM! I haven’t read CC, going to see it on Sunday, and now I’m a little scared D: 

-Shaza :)"



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