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31 Oct 2016




Hello there friends, I'm Lily! A bit of a nomad, a tea lover, an extreme shipper (75% slash *the guilt*), film lover, avid reader, proud French girl, speaker of three languages, and cellist.



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Happy Christmas, Teddy by Beeezie

Rated: Teen Audiences • 2 Reviews
Summary:

The way the genuine, open smile on Victoire's grandmother slid into a polite one when Victoire kissed him with a little more ardor than was strictly necessary under the mistletoe had been enough to make him avoid the mistletoe for the rest of the evening.

 

 

 

For ImaRavenclaw's Very Christmassy Love Challenge


Reviewer: ImaRavenclaw Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2017 Story: Chapter: Chapter 1: Happy Christmas, Teddy

Branwen you kill me! This was so perfect, urgh. The father-daughter’s boyfriend talk theme of your story was so great. It was just-oh my God-sighs. 

Okay so of course Bill’s going to be the protective father, and of course he doesn’t want his daughter to grow up. It’s the Harry Potter cliché (and real life too, actually), but you’ve written it so well that it doesn’t even seem like a cliché.

Christmas is minor and I would’ve liked if it were mentioned a little more, but you certainly make up for that with a great story in every other aspect.

Good luck, my friend!

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-Lily



Best Christmas Ever by Rhaenyra

Rated: Teen Audiences • 2 Reviews
Summary:

Lily Luna Potter and Elia Gardener have left Hogwarts.  They are doing their best to balance their family traditions with new ones of their own.  They think they may have found a schedule that works for them.  This may just be the best Christmas ever.


Runner up in the "Very Christmassy Love Challenge" ||  Sequel to Forest.  [[Lily II/Elia]]


Reviewer: ImaRavenclaw Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2017 Story: Chapter: Chapter 1: Best Christmas Ever

Awwww this was so cute. I actually think that this is the first Lily/Female OC I’ve ever read. It’s so great, I absolutely loved it! Lily and Elia make such a wonderful couple, and even though I haven’t read ‘Forest’ this makes me really want to. You write them so well! 

I loved how Elia and Lily find this way to balance out their old Christmas traditions with new ones they’ve made. I can see Lily getting a bit annoyed with her loud and big family and seeking comfort in Elia’s reserved and quiet one, and Elia wanting more excitement and finding it in Lily’s boisterous family. I also loved how they have their own traditions, that they’ve made together in their new home. 

And that proposal? Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!! Squees for life. That was just so cute, how they didn’t know that the other was going to propose but they both ended up proposing. It seemed slightly cliché, but it was still fantastic.

All in all this was such a cute fic! I wish you luck with my challenge, and hope to read more of your works.

Yours sincerely,

ImaRavenclaw

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Author's Response:

I'm glad to introduce you to a Lily/Female OC ship. =) I'm glad you liked it and appreciated the extreme fluff. Sometimes, it is hard to resist some of the romantic cliches but they seemed to fit here.

Thank you for the very sweet review. =)

- R



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Reviewer: ImaRavenclaw Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2017 Story: Chapter: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooooh fake dating trope, Paula this bribery simply won’t do! Haha, just kidding. My love of fake dating tropes is my little secret (uh, I guess it’s not super secret anymore). 

More bribery? I laughed so hard when I read he had been angry when he wrote that he would, in fact, be home for Christmas and moreover, his mother should set a place for his plus one. He adamantly ignored the crumpled up parchment in the mesh bin where his mother not-so-subtly implied that perhaps he and his cousin, Rose, had some sort of weird sharing relationship with her boyfriend Scorpius and that she would understand if he never gave her grandkids. ISB. Implied Scorbus Bribery.

And of course classic Ginny “don’t worry about not giving us any grandchildren.”

Since you know I review as I read I’m now commenting on my first view of Ellie. She seems interesting. I wonder what Albus is thinking about by how he says (well not HIM, but ominous narrator) her interruptions are more than welcomed. 

 

Oh my God that’s so like Albus, briefly considering whether or not faking his death over the holidays would be too extreme and dramatic. I love it!

Honestly Paula if you were a witch there’s no way you wouldn’t be a potioneer. 

I was not expecting him to proposition that. Co-authors on his Elixir article? Really?

There’s the catch.

She has the right to be mad, but this is totally sexual tension and I want more chapters Paula!

I really loved it, and if you win it’s not just because you’re a good friend of mine.

Yours sincerely,

Lily

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(Just realized that in my HPFF review I though it was a one-shot??? Ha ha).



I Don't Remember by WindingArrow

Rated: Teen Audiences • 1 Reviews
Summary:

A series of one-shots and short stories about Dominique Weasley and Mark Ross. Sequel to Tell Me Who You Are. (Part of the House of Stone AU.)

Chapter One (the first story) is for ImaRavenclaw's Very Christmassy Love Challenge, which prompted me to start this series!


Reviewer: ImaRavenclaw Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2017 Story: Chapter: Chapter 1: The First Christmas

Hey Liz, finally here with your review for the challenge (after like, 7 months). Okay, so I haven’t read The House of Stone or Tell Me Who You Are, but I figured it would be alright if I read this without having read your HOS stories (which I will hopefully get to eventually).

First of all I love your writing. I don’t know why I but I just love the way you write. 

I really like the parallels between Mark’s family and Dom’s. It’s fun to see because he’s a muggle(born) and she’s a wizard. But I liked how you touched on it without making a super huge deal out of it.

One thing that I’m confused about however… Did Dom obliviate Mark’s memories or the other way around?

Awwww I really like the idea of him recreating dates. And I especially love stories where couples ice skate.

AWWWWMIGOD that proposal was so cute.

Liz this was such a sweet and awesome story. Good luck (not that you need it!)

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-Lily 



Author's Response:

I did not think about the possibility that you have not read TMWYA before I decided to enter this, hahahaha! You don't really need to know HoS as all that's really happened is I've referenced family unique to my AU. I'm glad you liked the proposal, it was super fun to write and a great start to the rest of this little series as soon as I get around to working on it. *ahem*

 

You confusion is well deserved! Mark is a Muggle. Not a Wizard at all. Since Dom has known Mark, he has been Obliviated three times. XD He's better now, though! And Dom HAS been Obliviated as well, buuuut you have to read TMWYA for the whole story because #spoilers.

 

I'm glad you enjoyed it even if it confused you. It was a fun challenge! <3

 

-Liz



Our First Christmas Without You by MalfoysAngel

Rated: Teen Audiences • 8 Reviews starstarstarstarstar
Summary:

Draco visits the grave of his beloved.

 

**For ImaRavenclaw's Very Christmassy Love Challenge**


Reviewer: ImaRavenclaw Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2017 Story: Chapter: Chapter 1: 23 Dec 2012

How sad. Well, there isn’t much to say about this fic since it’s such a short one, but here it is: I can’t imagine what it must have felt like for Draco to lose the love of his life. However, even though you say at the top that it’s Draco/Hermione, it’d be nice for a bit more explanation that it is in fact Draco in the fic, like ‘It’s your Draco, my darling” or something like that.

However, other than that this was such a poignant fic, that almost made me cry. You can see how much Draco misses his wife. Your writing is wonderful.

Well, that’s all for now! I wish you luck in my challenge, and hope to read more of your stories.

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Half an Hour of Mentionitis by Beeezie

Rated: Mature Audiences • 5 Reviews starstarstarstarstar
Summary:

wonderful banner by azimuth @TDA!

 

 

Johanna Greengrass calls Teddy on a serious case of mentionitis.

 

For the wonderful ImaRavenclaw's Very Christmassy Love Challenge


Reviewer: ImaRavenclaw Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2017 Story: Chapter: Chapter 1: Half an Hour of Mentionitis

Hey Branwen, finally here after 7 months with your last review.

First off, I love the description you use in all of your stories. It makes me feel as if I’m there.

Second, I’m also reviewing as I read so these are going to be quick little snippet phrases rather than long paragraphs.

I love the way that your character, Johanna, is introduced. She seems very interesting, and though I’ve barely read any of your story, I already like her.

Of course ;)

Oh no, here comes the best friend battle of ’this guy’s not boring’ and ‘oh yes he is, you can do better’

Ooooh Victoire. I wonder if she’s going to be in the story or not. I absolutely love it when you write her. She’s so fun! 

Oh this is very he gets interrogated about his feelings for Victoire that he won’t admit to. Living this up!

“Teddy, as your friend - you’re being weird. Stop being weird.” I loved that line.

This is such an interesting story and does an amazing job at showing the dynamics of friendship, especially when a friend is into a girl/guy and they want to know more about. I absolutely loved this story, and its characters.

You need no luck at all.

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-Lily Xx x



Stolen Sweets by Dojh167

Rated: All Audiences • 11 Reviews starstarstarstarstar
Summary:

Lavender and Parvati sneak candies from the Honeydukes storeroom and maybe a kiss. Maybe.

 

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For ImaRavenclaw’s First Kiss Challenge. Banner by ShadowRose


Reviewer: ImaRavenclaw Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2018 Story: Chapter: Chapter 1: Stolen Sweets

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Hey Sam! Just a quick little review for your entry. (Incredibly late I know!)

 

First of all I have to say that I really enjoyed it. It was sweet and fluffy and the way it just jumps into the first kiss is fun. I would have loved a bit more backstory into their friendship but what there was was very good.

 

There is close friendship but to me something was a little off about the way Lavender and Pavarti interacted. It was like they were close, but something felt a little distant.

 

Anyways I really like how the story ended up rolling out. The candy distracting them, the conversation about Lavender’s past kisses and Pavarti’s lack of them.

 

I all in all really enjoyed it. Thanks for such a cute story!

 

Good luck, not that you need it!

-Lily