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Looking to improve your reviewing skills? Want to become the best reviewer you possibly can? Why not grab some reviews... on your review?  ;D



- With the exception of the first poster, each person looking to have their own review reviewed, must - in the same post - review the above person's review.

- Just like reviews for stories, try to find the right balance of critique and positive feedback. People are looking to improve here, but do not want to leave feeling downtrodden. Honesty without hostility or condescension is the best way to be helpful. That said, if a person's review looks great to you, you're under no obligation to search for something to critique.

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Hopefully I'm not a disaster at reviewing...


Hey Jill, Lily here with a review tag! I tend to jump around in my reviewing, just so you know.


First off I'd like to say, this is the fifth time I've read this story. I regret nothing! Every single time I've been in such a rush and I've wanted to review but... So I'm doing it now!


Now let's get to the story.


I absolutely loved this one-shot. It's one of my favourites and I seem to come back to it a lot (5 times), so this time I had to remember the details for what I would have said for every past review I didn't leave.


First up I'd like to say how much I loved the relaxed air of this fic. I love how it's really just Scorpius and Albus talking about life and the future, those topics can be pretty scary for couples.


I love the things they talk about, from Draco to the Wotters, and everything else!


I loved how Scorpius was insistent that Albus tell him if anything was wrong, and that Albus returned by telling Scorpius he is usually the one who keeps things, and they just have this awesome conversation.


With Scorpius asking Albus to move in, and everything else. I can't really describe how much I like this one-shot. I'm looking forward to seeing more Scorbus from you, and hopefully you keep writing them (you are REALLY good at it).


Sincerely, ImaRavenclaw.

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I have been looking for a place to ask for advice on my reviews, since my review thread became quite inactive, and I'm affraid I'm doing something wrong... So it would be greatly appreciated if you could comment on how am I doing


these are the reviews I've written so far on HPFF



do I need to be more positive? more detailed? any suggestions really :)


I see this topic has been inactive, but I really hope to get feedback!


and well, ImaRavenclaw, I don't know if you still expect reviews on your review - but just to follow the rules :)

the review you posted has your own style (you say it yourself that you tend to jump around), and I don't think that would be a problem

what you say is very positive and encouraging, as an author it must feel really great to get such reviews

I missed the constructive criticism

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