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Eeep! It has been awhile, hasn't it? :D 

If you don't know who I am, I am Deeds and I love reviewing! 

Anything within the HP fandom and Original Fiction is fine with me! All ships, all ratings, genres, themes, etc. are fine. Length doesn't matter either. The longer the better! Just don't expect me to turn my review around in a day. Haha. :D 

With that said I do have some rules: 

1. I will only read stories on HPFT

2. I will only read one chapter at a time. (Feel free to request another chapter when I have spots open again.) 

3. I will have spots open for three people at a time. (I will let everyone know once the reviews have been posted that all spots are open again.) 



I have limited time to review so please give me a week or so to leave my review. If I need more time I will let you know. 😎


[b]Story and Author Name, including link:[/b]
[b]Warnings and Advisories:[/b]
[b]Areas of Concern:[/b]

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I have totally been hoping for this! :yay:

Story and Author: After Destiny [M] by CambAngst

Warnings and AdvisoriesHate Speech, Consent Issues (Severe), Sexual Content, Slavery, Spoilers, Substance Abuse, Violence 

Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort

Length: Novel -- currently 18 chapters

Summary: Harry Potter and his friends struggle to move on with their lives after the Second Wizarding War.

Ships: Harry/Ginny, Ron/Hermione, Neville/Luna, others to come

Areas of Concern: Characterization, flow, is this just way too long?


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snagging the second spot 😏

Story and Author Name, including link: The Art of Being Nonchalant (Or Not) [M] by starbuck

Warnings and Advisories: Sexual Content, Substance Abuse

Genre: Drama, Romance

Length: Novel, it currently has 5 chapters, 28 652 words




"Have no fear, Quinn Jones."

Apparently, it is a truth universally acknowledged that I, Quinn Jones, a full-fledged Gryffindor, am actually afraid of three little words.

What a load of nonsense.


Ships: James Sirius Potter/OC

Areas of Concern: general thoughts? i think i have too many characters (maybe it's not obvious in the first chapter, idk, but later on (if you don't hate the story i'll request again later :P )...) so i have no idea if i'm handling them well :shrugs: i also think quinn, the main character, isn't easy to like (though it's just how she is so maybe that's a good thing but i still don't want readers to hate her 😮 )


Edited by starbuck

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[b]Story and Author Name, including link:[/b] passionfruit by poppunkpadfoot http://archive.hpfanfictalk.com/viewstory.php?sid=2275 (M)
[b]Warnings and Advisories:[/b] sexual content
[b]Genre[/b] angst
[b]Length:[/b] 4209 words

"How would you feel about a free trip to France this summer?”

“That depends. What’s the catch?”

“It’s a trip with my family,” Marlene says. 
She can’t quite bring herself to look Sirius in the eye as she continues, “I’d be introducing you as my boyfriend.”

[b]Ships:[/b] Marlene McKinnon/Sirius Black
[b]Areas of Concern:[/b] marlene’s characterization, flow


sorry this is ugly, I’m on my phone lol

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All three reviews have been posted. Thanks for the requests! 

All three spots are now open

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Story and Author Name, including link: The Spark by FawkesyLady  
Warnings and Advisories: None 
Genre Fluff 
Length: 7100 
Summary: Marcus Flint is a wizard with a razor and the owner of the up and coming Flint and Steel Salon in London. When the brilliant but reclusive owner of Weasley's Wizard Wheezes is forced into his chair, can Marcus put history aside and help? Will sparks fly, or will the whole place go up in flames...    
Ships: Marcus Flint/George Weasley 
Areas of Concern: I seem to have issues writing short stories. This is my third attempt at doing one, and it is a rare pair. Cohesive? Does it end at an okay point or does it feel chopped off? Enjoyable? Thank you for your time.
Edited by FawkesyLady

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just gonna drop in here and take the last spot...

Story & Author Name: dum vivimus vivamus (M) by sunshine_locks
Warnings & Advisories: mentions of eating disorders, racism, and islamophobia
Genres: Angst, general, humor
Length: One-Shot, 18,227 Words
Ships: N/A
Summary: Reflections don't change, but people do. 
Areas of Concern: none really! comment on whatever you like!

Edited by victoria_anne
unrated mature link

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All three reviews have been posted. Thanks for the requests! 

All three spots are now open

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Hey Deeds! :wub: 

Story and author name, including link: How to Catch a Snorkack (M)
Warnings and advisories: None
Genre: Action/adventure, crime/mystery, romance
Length: 3434 words so far
Summary: When Rolf Scamander seeks solace in a national park, all he wanted was a break from his homework. What he got, however, was a half-troll named Gus, a black market operation, the exploitation of magical creatures, and a girl searching for a Crumple-Horned Scorkack.
Ships: Rolf Scamander/Luna Lovegood
Areas of concern: None really, just looking for love and motivation ^_^ 

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Do you still have those slots open?


Story and Author Name: I'm not a hero (M) by javu

Warnings and Advisories: Derogatory Language, Hate Speech, Violence

Genre: General, action/adventure, mystery and crime, war

Category: Harry Potter Universe

Era: Next Gen

Length: First chapter is 3,917 words.

Summary: From Archives: "All this nonsense about me being a hero is crap. Just because I've been through hell and back doesn't make me a hero. I'm not a hero; I'm a survivor." Basically, story starts with Charlotte Ward towards the end of her sixth year at Hogwarts. Some unexpected events happen over the summer, which spark massive character development for Charlotte. 

Ships: Next Gen Characters/OC, OC/OC

Areas of Concern: Just your general impression. Constructive criticism is welcome. 


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Howdy Deeds, I'm going to sneak in and steal your last spot. 😆


Story and Author Name, including link:  Golden Girl [M] by Finefrenzy__

Fandom/Era: Next Gen

Warnings and Advisories: Severe Content Issues, Substance Abuse, Derogatory Language, Violence, Eating Disorders, Hate Speech and Sexual Content

Genre: Drama, Angst, Romance, Fluff

Length: 5 chapters (including Prologue) [WIP]

Summary: We are a generation defined by the expectations upon us

Ships: Albus/OC

Areas of Concern: I'd appreciate feedback on the overall flow to the story. Does it read well? And just your general impression of the story.

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