magemadi Posted September 1, 2018 Share Posted September 1, 2018 (edited) Hello everyone! I'm back again with a multi-fandom review thread Please read my guidelines carefully so I don't have to skip you. Things I enjoy reading: Fandom: Original Fiction, HP The 100, Merlin, Doctor Who, Lord of the Rings/The Hobbit, Tortall Universe (Tamora Pierce), HTTYD, aka most fandoms, but if you're unsure if I'm familiar with it, just send me a PM Genres/Eras/Inclusivity: All Themes: Most anything Things I will NOT read: Ships: Hermione/Snape, Hermione/Tom Riddle, Hermione/Ron (focus), student/teacher (or other similar pairings) Themes: teenage pregnancy (unplanned or other pregnancy types are fine, I'm just not very familiar with teen pregnancy), adult/minor relationships, very gory violence Other Guidelines: Can review on AO3, FFN, or FFT, but prefer FFT I will have 2 slots open at a time as I am a busy graduate student, and my turn-around time is two-three weeks, so please PM if it's been longer than that. You may request up to 2 chapters at a time for a short story/novella/novel/etc but it may take a bit longer. Form: Quote Story and Author Name, including link: Warnings and Advisories: Genre: Length: Ships: Summary: Areas of Concern: Current Review Request Count: __/5 I'm excited to read all of the wonderful things you have been writing! Edited December 3, 2020 by frostmagemadi edited per madi's request Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
belgian quaffle Posted September 5, 2018 Share Posted September 5, 2018 Madi! Jumping in on this like I said I would! ? Story Name, Author, and Link: The Week of Unknown Pranks (m) Warnings and Advisories: language,I guess? Genre: humor, AU Ships: none besides friendship ? (I'll see myself out) Length: 3986 words Summary: Quote James and Sirius are baffled when someone else starts pranking Snivellus. Lily is still trying to feel her way around the office. Albus tries to score an invite to the Semi-Annual Chair Races. Or, the Marauders The Office AU I've previously discussed Areas of Concern: flow is a big area I'm concerned with for this because there are a lot of breaks within it. otherwise, I'd love to just hear your thoughts! ♥️ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoxiMalfoy Posted September 10, 2018 Share Posted September 10, 2018 Hello Madi, I have finally made it here, lol!! ? Story & Author Name: Doing the Right Thing by RoxiMalfoyWarnings & Advisories: NoneGenres: AU, Dark/HorrorLength: One-Shot, 1,500 WordsShips: N/ASummary: Mother had always said that I was different. She believed that I was capable of doing the right thing. Whatever that meant...Areas of Concern: Feel free to point out whatever sticks out to you in this, I'm really not picky at all. This is the prequel one-shot to my Novel Love, Not War. It actually takes place about three months or so before the events of the main story begin... I would love to hear your thoughts on this, Madi!!! If you like it, I'd be happy to come back and request some reviews on the main story as well!! ☺️ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magemadi Posted October 10, 2018 Author Share Posted October 10, 2018 One slot open! Deana I'll get to yours tomorrow Slots: 1. RoxiMalfoy 2. OPEN Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suzy turquoise blue Posted October 10, 2018 Share Posted October 10, 2018 Story Name, Author, and Link: The Shopping List (T), by esmeraude Warnings and Advisories: None Genre: Fluff, Humour Ships: None Length: 933 words Summary: Quote The shopping list pinned to the kitchen door of Number Twelve, Grimmauld Place, reveals far more about the Potter children than their parents would like you to know. Areas of Concern: So, this idea came to me while answering reviews and I'm feeling nervous about it because it's a bit of an unconventional one-shot I was limited on formatting -- is the story easy to read? Can you tell each of the kids' characterisations through what they write? How realistic are the sibling relationships? I ended the fic where it ended because it felt like the story needed to be short -- but does it feel like a natural ending? What popped out to you as great and what was terrible? Thank you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magemadi Posted October 22, 2018 Author Share Posted October 22, 2018 1 slot open! @esmeraude, I'll do my best to get to yours in the next couple of days Slots: 1. esmeraude 2. OPEN Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magemadi Posted October 28, 2018 Author Share Posted October 28, 2018 Happy Halloweekend number 1! Both slots are open again. Slots: 1. OPEN 2. OPEN Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
facingthenorthwind Posted October 28, 2018 Share Posted October 28, 2018 Hello lovely! Could I possibly request a review? I don't mind which one, anything that takes your fancy: +ap. I know you're not super into wolfstar and I am. terrible wolfstar garbage BUT there is non-wolfstar content! so feel free to pick one of those. (I was going to start listing the non-wolfstar ones but there's quite a lot actually! against all odds, only 5/28 fics on my ap are wolfstar. WHO KNEW, I sure didn't. clearly this means i should write more.) 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stella Blue Posted November 4, 2018 Share Posted November 4, 2018 Hello! I see you like rare pairs so I have a rare pair(s) for you! Story and Author Name, including link: to dwell on dreams by Stella BlueWarnings and Advisories: violence, sexual contentGenre: Drama, romance, angstLength: 3500 wordsSummary: Quote and forget to live but what does it mean to live? Ships: Padma Patil/Lisa Turpin, Padma Patil/Sally-Anne PerksAreas of Concern: General thoughts? Does the ending seem too abrupt? Thank you!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magemadi Posted November 20, 2018 Author Share Posted November 20, 2018 Both slots are now open! Slots: 1. OPEN 2. OPEN Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowkat678 Posted December 22, 2018 Share Posted December 22, 2018 Hi, Madi! [b]Story and Author Name, including RATED link[/b]: Founders Four: Pillars of the Ages (M) by shadowkat678 Advisories: Violence Genre[/b]: Adventure/action, Angst, Drama, General Length: 2915 words Summary: History speaks to us of four friends, a school they together founded, and a division that still echoes through the stone halls of Hogwarts today. Yet, that great castle was never truly the beginning, and most certainly wasn't the end. Maybe, it's time to find out what the history books didn't tell you. Ships: Eventually Salazar/Helga, but nothing yet. Areas of Concern: I'm starting this back up and I'm trying to revise and add to the existing chapters while writing the next ones. I remember when I first posted this three years ago a few people mentioned they had trouble separating the characters, and there were also lots of suggested edits. I want to make sure I have all of that fixed up. Also, just any general constructive criticism you could think of. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magemadi Posted January 8, 2019 Author Share Posted January 8, 2019 Hello hello! School is back in session so please PM me if there are delays in your review One slot open! Slots: 1. @Shadowkat678 - hopefully will get to this by the end of the week! 2. OPEN Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoxiMalfoy Posted January 9, 2019 Share Posted January 9, 2019 (edited) Hey Madi, I have finally made it back here to request some reviews for my Novel!!! ? Story & Author Name: Love, Not War [M] by RoxiMalfoyWarnings & Advisories: Rated M for Hate Speech, Suicide, ViolenceGenres: Angst, AU, Horror/Dark, DramaLength: Novel (23 Chapters) WIP: 160,260 so farShips: Draco/OC, Lucius/Narcissa, Molly/Arthur, Summary: When tragedy strikes, Lucius Malfoy is forced to make a difficult decision. He then hands his only son over to the Order of the Phoenix, in the hopes that they will protect him from Lord Voldemort. Now, with nowhere else to go, Draco Malfoy is stuck living at the Burrow with the Weasley’s. But when another new witch from America moves in too, things start to get... interesting.Areas of Concern: Hey Madi!! I'm really glad you liked the one-shot, and I am so excited for you to start reading the Novel now!! If you'd like, you can skip reviewing the Prologue here, as I have already gotten a lot of feedback on that chapter over the years. I'd really like reviews for Chapters 1 & 2: The Letter and The Healer, but I know you're limited on time right now also. So it's totally okay if you only have the time for just one of these at the moment also... I hope you like it, Madi. Thank you so much!! ? Edited January 9, 2019 by RoxiMalfoy 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magemadi Posted January 14, 2019 Author Share Posted January 14, 2019 One slot open again! Slots: 1. @RoxiMalfoy - will hopefully get this done this week! 2. OPEN Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WanderWitch Posted January 14, 2019 Share Posted January 14, 2019 Oooh can I grab it? Story Name, Author, and Rated Link: Push and Pull (T) | you-make-me-wanderWarnings and Advisories: NoneGenre: Angst, AU, Fluff, Humor, RomanceShips: Bellamy Blake/Clarke Griffin (The 100)Length: 2379 words (one-shot - for now anyway)Summary: He can't think of many things more attractive than falling for a beautiful someone whose beauty isn't what actually attracts him. Only problem is, he can't stand her, a feeling that she reciprocates passionately. When Bellamy and Clarke are paired up for a First Kiss Experiment, could anything go right?Areas of Concern: Just the overall flow and opinion of the story and its plot, and if perhaps it's worth pursuing more chapters. Thank you 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magemadi Posted January 25, 2019 Author Share Posted January 25, 2019 @RoxiMalfoy and @you-make-me-wander, both of your reviews are done! Both slots are now open! Slots: 1. OPEN 2. OPEN Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReillyJade Posted January 27, 2019 Share Posted January 27, 2019 Hi, Madi! I'd love to hear your thoughts on this if you don't mind! Thanks! ❤️ Story Name, Author, and Rated Link: June Bug (M) by yours truly Warnings and Advisories: Consent Issues (Mild), Sexual Content, Derogatory Language, & Substance Abuse Genre: Angst, Drama, and Hurt/Comfort Ships: no main pairings, but Teddy/Victoire and Bill/Fleur make appearances Length: one-shot, about 8k Summary: As far as Louis Weasley is concerned, life couldn't be better. He has his family, a decent job, and Tessa, his not-quite-girlfriend. In a few months, he'll have enough money saved up to buy a place of his own. His life is right where he wants it to be. But life, as it so often does, has other plans. Areas of Concern: Everything I've written in the past couple of years has either been a continuation of a WIP or a reworking of something old. This is the first completely brand-new thing I've written in a long time, and is something where I got an idea out of nowhere and just ran with it. What I'm worried about, as silly as it may sound, is if this story makes it obvious that I've been out of the game for a while. I'm worried that it's sloppy, rushed in some places but dragging on in others, etc. Basically, is it a mess? Lol (Heads up - This story is centered upon an unplanned pregnancy and the hard choices that come along with it. Your guidelines said teen pregnancy stories are a no-no, and though my characters aren't teens, it's still a pregnancy storyline. If that isn't your cup of tea, I completely understand! ) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Noelle Zingarella Posted January 29, 2019 Share Posted January 29, 2019 Hello Madi. I would love a review for a chapter or two of my story Moonlight if you are interested. It is a Snape/OC pairing, so if that's not your cup of tea I totally understand. The OC is an American witch, about the same age as Snape. It's set during the Hogwarts years. Thanks for considering! Story Name, Author, and Rated Link: Moonlight by Noelle Zingarella Warnings and Advisories: Derogatory Language, Sexual Content, Domestic Abuse, Spoilers, Substance Abuse, Violence Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst, Romance Ships: Snape/Female OC Length: Novella Summary: Miranda Rose had always been a bit reckless. She did what she wanted when she wanted and took the consequences as they came. However, when she meets a certain dark-eyed Potions Master in the summer of 1995, the consequences would change her life forever. Areas of Concern: This is my first fanfic in a long time, so I guess I'm just looking for encouragement and feedback. Thank you! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magemadi Posted February 19, 2019 Author Share Posted February 19, 2019 (edited) @ReillyJade and @Noelle Zingarella both of your reviews are done! Both stories very intriguing! Both slots open!! Slots: 1. OPEN 2. OPEN Edited February 19, 2019 by MadiMalfoy 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bunbury Posted February 19, 2019 Share Posted February 19, 2019 Hey Madi! Here to request a slot for my new WIP, Inheritance Story and Author Name: Inheritance by Bunbury. Here's the +link. Fandom/Era: Harry Potter, Second Wizarding War Warnings/Advisories: Derogatory Language, Domestic Abuse, Hate Speech, Violence Genre: Mystery, Horror, Drama, Romance, Humour (tonal whiplash is unfortunately my modus operandi) Length: about 2700 words (Chapter 1) Summary: Phaedra Morley leads a quiet, private life, working at a Diagon Alley apothecary and looking after her infirm mother. But Phaedra has a secret, and now she must retrace her father's footsteps through the Dark Arts and find out what he was working on when he disappeared in the wake of Voldemort's fall. Along the way she enlists the help of a feckless bookseller and -- much to his displeasure -- Severus Snape. A story of death, madness, haunted houses, true friends, and Cockroach Clusters. Ships: Eventual Snape/OC, but the development of their relationship is glacial. Areas of Concern: Basically any information about what you did or didn't like, and any constructive criticism, would be really helpful. This is the first chapter of what's slated to be a long story, so I'd rather know about problems now than later! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted February 19, 2019 Share Posted February 19, 2019 Hi, Madi! Do you mind if I steal your second slot? Story Name, Author, and Rated Link: All the truth about Jimmy Portman (M) by Felpata_Lupin Warnings and Advisories: Consent Issues (Mild/Moderate), Domestic Abuse, Sexual Content, Substance Abuse, Violence Genre: Angst, AU, Drama Ships: Peter/Remus, James/Lily Length: 36 chapters, 104843 words. The first 2 chapters are around 3500 words total. Summary: Quote Destiny is the result of people's choices. And any single choice can change it completely. In this AU the Marauders are still alive and free (more or less...), Neville Longbottom is the guy with the scar, and Harry... Well, just read and find out! Areas of Concern: nothing in particular. Would just love to hear your thoughts. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magemadi Posted March 27, 2019 Author Share Posted March 27, 2019 @Bunbury your review is done, apologies for the delay! @Felpata_Lupin I'll get to yours by the end of this weekend, I promise!! Slots: 1. @Felpata_Lupin 2. OPEN 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pen2Paper Posted March 27, 2019 Share Posted March 27, 2019 Hi there! Snagging the second spot! Story Name, Author, and Rated Link: Heaven Can Wait (M) by Pen2Paper Warnings and Advisories: Hate Speech, Sexual Content, Substance Abuse, some Violence Genre: Drama, General, Romance Ships: James/Lily Length: 9 Chapters so far, Novel, would love to request for first two! Summary: An imagining of James and Lily's lives as they move forward from "Snape's Worst Memory" and the events that followed that led them to fall for each other. Areas of Concern: I'll take any advice you have for me. My main concern is plot and character development. Thank you so much!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magemadi Posted April 3, 2019 Author Share Posted April 3, 2019 (edited) @Felpata_Lupin your review is done, apologies for the further delay! @Pen2Paper, I'll get to yours probably this weekend as those are some looong chapters One slot open! Slots: 1. @Pen2Paper 2. OPEN Edited April 3, 2019 by MadiMalfoy 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrsDarcy Posted April 3, 2019 Share Posted April 3, 2019 Hi Madi - can I snag the second slot? Story Name, Author, and Rated Link: Tainted (M) by Mrsdarcy Warnings and Advisories: derogatory language, hate speech, sexual content, substance abuse, violence Genre: action/adventure, dark, romance Ships: Regulus/OC Length: novel 50k+ Summary: Quote An exploration of the life and death of Regulus Arcturus Black in the final months leading up to his valiant treachery Featuring: the devoted house-elf Kreacher, the Death Eater and soccer-mum Fau MacNair, the scrupulous businessman Hannibal Borgin, and, his apprentice, the enigmatic witch Alma Pierce Areas of Concern: just your thoughts Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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