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MadiMalfoy

Hello everyone! I'm back again with a multi-fandom review thread ^_^ Please read my guidelines carefully so I don't have to skip you. 

Things I enjoy reading:

Fandom: Original Fiction, Harry Potter/Fantastic Beasts, The 100, Merlin, Doctor Who, Marvel, Lord of the Rings/The Hobbit, Tortall Universe (Tamora Pierce), The Maze Runner, Star Trek, How to Train Your Dragon, Hamilton, and others I may have forgotten (just PM if you think you have something else that I might be familiar with!)

Ships: HP: Draco/Hermione, Harry/Ginny, Harry/Hermione, Newt/Tina, Sirius/Remus, James/Lily, rare pairs | The 100: Bellamy/Clarke, Clarke/Lexa, Octavia/Lincoln, Raven/Shaw

Genres/Eras/Inclusivity: All

Themes: Most anything

 

Things I will NOT read:

Ships: Hermione/Snape, Hermione/Tom Riddle, Hermione/Ron (focus), student/teacher

Themes: teen pregnancy, underage activity (if there's mention, that's fine)

 

Other Guidelines:

  • Can review on AO3, FFN, or HPFT, but prefer HPFT
  • I will have 2 slots open at a time as I am a busy graduate student, and my turn-around time is two-three weeks, so please PM if it's been longer than that.
  • You may request up to 2 chapters at a time for a short story/novella/novel/etc but it may take a bit longer. 

Form: 

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Story Name, Author, and Rated Link:

Warnings and Advisories:

Genre:  

Ships:  

Length:  

Summary:    

Areas of Concern:

I'm excited to read all of the wonderful things you have been writing! ^_^

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fixed some of the formatting to fit what madi requested (white bars everywhere)

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adorably cute

Madi! Jumping in on this like I said I would! 😁

Story Name, Author, and Link: The Week of Unknown Pranks (m)

Warnings and Advisories: language,I guess? 

Genre: humor, AU

Ships: none besides friendship 😜 (I'll see myself out)

Length: 3986 words

Summary: 

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James and Sirius are baffled when someone else starts pranking Snivellus. Lily is still trying to feel her way around the office. Albus tries to score an invite to the Semi-Annual Chair Races.

Or, the Marauders The Office AU I've previously discussed

Areas of Concern: flow is a big area I'm concerned with for this because there are a lot of breaks within it. otherwise, I'd love to just hear your thoughts! ♥️

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RoxiMalfoy

Hello Madi, I have finally made it here, lol!! 😉 

Story & Author Name: Doing the Right Thing by RoxiMalfoy
Warnings & Advisories: None
Genres: AU, Dark/Horror
Length: One-Shot, 1,500 Words
Ships: N/A
Summary: Mother had always said that I was different. She believed that I was capable of doing the right thing. Whatever that meant...
Areas of Concern: Feel free to point out whatever sticks out to you in this, I'm really not picky at all. This is the prequel one-shot to my Novel Love, Not War. It actually takes place about three months or so before the events of the main story begin... I would love to hear your thoughts on this, Madi!!! If you like it, I'd be happy to come back and request some reviews on the main story as well!! ☺️ 

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MadiMalfoy

One slot open! Deana I'll get to yours tomorrow :) 

Slots: 

1. RoxiMalfoy

2. OPEN

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esmeraude

Story Name, Author, and Link: The Shopping List (T), by esmeraude

Warnings and Advisories: None

Genre: Fluff, Humour

Ships: None

Length: 933 words

Summary:

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The shopping list pinned to the kitchen door of Number Twelve, Grimmauld Place, reveals far more about the Potter children than their parents would like you to know.

Areas of Concern: So, this idea came to me while answering reviews and I'm feeling nervous about it because it's a bit of an unconventional one-shot :$ I was limited on formatting -- is the story easy to read? Can you tell each of the kids' characterisations through what they write? How realistic are the sibling relationships? I ended the fic where it ended because it felt like the story needed to be short -- but does it feel like a natural ending? What popped out to you as great and what was terrible? Thank you ^_^

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MadiMalfoy

1 slot open! @esmeraude, I'll do my best to get to yours in the next couple of days ^_^ 

:grinningpumpkin:Slots::grinningpumpkin:

1. esmeraude

2. OPEN

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MadiMalfoy

Happy Halloweekend number 1! Both slots are open again. ^_^ 

:grinningpumpkin:Slots: :grinningpumpkin:

1. OPEN

2. OPEN

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facingthenorthwind

Hello lovely! Could I possibly request a review? I don't mind which one, anything that takes your fancy: +ap. I know you're not super into wolfstar and I am. terrible wolfstar garbage BUT there is non-wolfstar content! so feel free to pick one of those. :P (I was going to start listing the non-wolfstar ones but there's quite a lot actually! against all odds, only 5/28 fics on my ap are wolfstar. WHO KNEW, I sure didn't. clearly this means i should write more.)

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Stella Blue

Hello! I see you like rare pairs so I have a rare pair(s) for you! :)

Story and Author Name, including link: to dwell on dreams by Stella Blue
Warnings and Advisories: violence, sexual content
Genre: Drama, romance, angst
Length: 3500 words
Summary:

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and forget to live

but what does it mean to live?

 


Ships: Padma Patil/Lisa Turpin, Padma Patil/Sally-Anne Perks
Areas of Concern: General thoughts? Does the ending seem too abrupt?

Thank you!! :)

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MadiMalfoy

Both slots are now open! 

Slots:

1. OPEN

2. OPEN

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Chemical_Pixie

Hiya Madi! I saw this post on Twitter and I thought... why not? :)  I don't have anything in particular in mind. Anything that strikes your fancy on my +AP (rated m for good measure)!

Note: Based on your things you won't read, you may not want to review chapter 2 of A Woman's Place. That comes with a tw.

Thank you! ❤️ 

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Shadowkat678

Hi, Madi!

[b]Story and Author Name, including RATED link[/b]: Founders Four: Pillars of the Ages (M) by shadowkat678


Advisories: Violence


Genre[/b]: Adventure/action, Angst, Drama, General


Length: 2915 words


Summary:

History speaks to us of four friends, a school they together founded, and a division that still echoes through the stone halls of Hogwarts today. Yet, that great castle was never truly the beginning, and most certainly wasn't the end. Maybe, it's time to find out what the history books didn't tell you.


Ships: Eventually Salazar/Helga, but nothing yet.


Areas of Concern: I'm starting this back up and I'm trying to revise and add to the existing chapters while writing the next ones. I remember when I first posted this three years ago a few people mentioned they had trouble separating the characters, and there were also lots of suggested edits. I want to make sure I have all of that fixed up. Also, just any general constructive criticism you could think of.


 

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MadiMalfoy

Hello hello! School is back in session so please PM me if there are delays in your review One slot open!

Slots:

1. @Shadowkat678 - hopefully will get to this by the end of the week!

2. OPEN

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RoxiMalfoy
Posted (edited)

Hey Madi, I have finally made it back here to request some reviews for my Novel!!! 😉

Story & Author Name: Love, Not War [M] by RoxiMalfoy
Warnings & Advisories: Rated for Hate Speech, Suicide, Violence
Genres: Angst, AU, Horror/Dark, Drama
Length: Novel (23 Chapters) WIP: 160,260 so far
Ships: Draco/OC, Lucius/Narcissa, Molly/Arthur, 
Summary: When tragedy strikes, Lucius Malfoy is forced to make a difficult decision. He then hands his only son over to the Order of the Phoenix, in the hopes that they will protect him from Lord Voldemort. Now, with nowhere else to go, Draco Malfoy is stuck living at the Burrow with the Weasley’s. But when another new witch from America moves in too, things start to get... interesting.
Areas of Concern: Hey Madi!! I'm really glad you liked the one-shot, and I am so excited for you to start reading the Novel now!! If you'd like, you can skip reviewing the Prologue here, as I have already gotten a lot of feedback on that chapter over the years. I'd really like reviews for Chapters 1 & 2: The Letter and The Healer, but I know you're limited on time right now also. So it's totally okay if you only have the time for just one of these at the moment also... I hope you like it, Madi. Thank you so much!! 💙 

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MadiMalfoy

One slot open again!

Slots:

1. @RoxiMalfoy - will hopefully get this done this week!

2. OPEN

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you-make-me-wander

Oooh can I grab it? ^_^


Story Name, Author, and Rated Link: Push and Pull (T) | you-make-me-wander
Warnings and Advisories: None
Genre: Angst, AU, Fluff, Humor, Romance
Ships: Bellamy Blake/Clarke Griffin (The 100)
Length: 2379 words (one-shot - for now anyway)
Summary: He can't think of many things more attractive than falling for a beautiful someone whose beauty isn't what actually attracts him. Only problem is, he can't stand her, a feeling that she reciprocates passionately. When Bellamy and Clarke are paired up for a First Kiss Experiment, could anything go right?
Areas of Concern: Just the overall flow and opinion of the story and its plot, and if perhaps it's worth pursuing more chapters.

Thank you :wub:

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