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faeruhs

By popular demand (and by that I mean 3 people replied to me on twitter), I'm starting my own review thread. Hopefully this way I can get more involved and active in the community and branch out a bit in terms of what I read! ☺️

Rules:

  • Stories on HPFF & FF.net are fine, I'm best with Harry Potter, but I'm familiar with Percy Jackson & The 100 and I'll happily do original fiction. 
  • I'll be reviewing one chapter at a time. 
  • At most, it'll take me 10 days to get back to you. I have a hectic home life & I don't want to fall behind on university work. 
  • 2 slots open at a time. I'll post when a slot opens up. 

What I'm good for:

  • britpicking
  • general grammar mistakes
  • general plot help
  • love. I'll drop by and shower you in exclamation marks and confetti. I gush a bit. 

Weak spots:

  • I'm pretty easily confused at the moment (thanks medication) and it takes a few reads of anything for it to settle in.
  • Characterisation. I'm gonna outright admit that I struggle to keep my own characters in check, so just bear that in mind. 
  • I tend to do very run on sentences that can get a bit confusing. 
  • Just not that familiar with Marauders era.

Other info:

  • Please bear in mind I have horrific ADHD.
  • I'm a massive (massive) Next Gen fan. It's honestly the way to my heart. 😘

How to request: 

  • Drop on by with ye olde form:

Story and Author Name, including link:
Warnings and Advisories:
Genre:
Length:
Summary:
Ships:
Areas of Concern:

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ShadowRose

helloooooooo i have next-gen for you 😁

Story and Author Name, including linkComplex [m]
Warnings and Advisories: sexual content, substance abuse, violence, hate speech (the first one is really the only one that applies to this particular chapter)
Genre: romance/drama
Length: first chapter is like... 2.2k words?
Summary:

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Abby Winchester is working to track down the perpetrators of the single largest massacre in wizarding history. She’s also planning a wedding.

One of those things is probably going to kill her – and right now, she’s betting on the latter.

{sequel to Complicated}

 

Ships: James II/OC
Areas of Concern: ok, so i actually have no clue whether or not you've read complicated - so this request could really go two different ways. if you have, i'd love to know your thoughts on how everything from that flows into this. if you haven't, i'm actually really curious as to whether or not things make sense without having read the novel that precedes it, because it'd be dope if this could also be a standalone novel as well but idk if i manage to explain things enough to pull that off.

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Sleepingbagonthesofa

Yay you started a review page!! I've got my first next gen chapter for you 😊

Story Title: Revival (M)

Advisories: Derogatory Language, Hate Speech, Sexual Content, Substance Abuse

Genre: Romance, Drama, Humour

Length: Novel, One chapter so far (About 2000 words) 

Ships: Louis/OC

Summary : 

"There are three sides to this story: Yours, mine and the one they'll print in The Prophet."

A drama-free Seventh Year would have been nice, I guess I'm not that lucky.

Areas of Concern: Just first impressions and general thoughts on everything that has happened so far ❤️

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faeruhs

ahah i've actually read both of these already, so i'll get to reviewing them tonight for you both! (after what is shockingly, a class on how to write a review lol)

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  2. @Sleepingbagonthesofa

 

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Alwynse

Hey there! Here's another Next Gen fic for you!

 

Story and Author Name: I'm not a hero (M) by javu

Warnings and Advisories: Derogatory Language, Hate Speech, Violence

Category: Harry Potter

Era: Next Gen!

Length: First chapter is 3,917 words

Summary: From Archive: "All this nonsense about me being a hero is crap. Just because I've been through hell and back doesn't make me a hero. I'm not a hero; I'm a survivor." Basically, the story begins with Charlotte Ward towards the end of her sixth year at Hogwarts. The story is about her experiencing some traumatic things and coming out stronger :) 

Ships: Next Gen characters/OC, OC/OC

Areas of Concern: I'd like your general impression, what stuck out to you, what can you see that's being foreshadowed, etc.

 

Looking forward to it! Thank you!! 

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faeruhs

alrightyyy! 

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Alwynse

Thank you!!!!🤩

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you-make-me-wander

Hey there! Can I grab a slot? ^_^

Story & Author Name: The joys of you [M] | you-make-me-wander | (Chapter One)
Fandom / Era: Harry Potter / Next-Gen
Warnings & Advisories:  Mature, Sexual content, Spoilers
Genres:  AU, Drama, Fluff, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Friendship, Family
Length: Multi-chaptered novel, on-going. Requested chapter (Chapter One) is 3064 words long
Ships: Scorpius/Rose , Draco/Astoria, Ron/Hermione, Harry/Ginny, Albus/OC, Lily/Lysander, Hugo/OC & James/O C
Inclusivity: Gay, Anxiety, Depression, Dying/grieving
Summary: Scorpius comes back home after being four years away studying wandlore. Finding Astoria already affected by the curse that'll most likely kill her, Scorpius must learn how to deal with the inevitable loss and grief it'll bring, reconnecting with old friends and family, and with making sure that Rose knows that he's never stopped loving her.
Areas of Concern: Mostly the flow of the story and my writing style, since I've been told a few times that I have a certain way of writing that isn't so usual (I think it mostly pertains to longer sentences that have a certain rythmic flow to them, at least to me). Overall opinion of the story is appreciated, and constructive criticism is welcome.

Thank you :wub:

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you-make-me-wander

@faeruhs Thank you. Take all the time you need ^_^

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faeruhs

wow I was good and I replied, so Emily's Garbage Reviews are open for business once again!

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Theia

me please! this is one of my older fics. I just revisited it and realised it could use a bit more love. ^_^

Story & Author Name: falling. (M)
Fandom / Era: HP Next Gen
Warnings & Advisories:  Mature - Eating Disorders, Substance Abuse
Genres:  Angst, Hurt/Comfort
Length: 1271 words, completed
Ships: Hugo/Lysander
Inclusivity: Gay, Anxiety
Summary

Quote

 

You might want to hide forever, silently sinking deeper into this hole you've carved out for yourself, but you are not alone - I will never let you be alone. 

Lysander/Hugo

Alphabetical progression of sentences. 

 


Areas of Concern: Nothing in particular. General comments on the style, flow, and what you think of it overall would be great. :wub:

 

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Finefrenzy__

I would love one of your reviews :) Ta

 

Story and Author Name, including link:  Golden Girl [M] (Prologue) by Finefrenzy__

Fandom/Era: I'm going to appeal to your love for Next Gen
Warnings and Advisories: Severe Content Issues, Substance Abuse, Derogatory Language, Violence, Eating Disorders, Hate Speech and Sexual Content
Genre: Drama, Angst, Romance, Fluff
Length: approx 12k, though the prologue is just under 1000
Summary: We are a generation defined by the expectations laid upon us
Ships: Albus/OC
Areas of Concern: I'd appreciate all of the Brit-picking you can muster (though there probably isn't any in the Prologue), haha. As well as the overall flow to the story. Does it read well? And just your general impression of the story.

Edited by Finefrenzy__
General typos and formatting

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faeruhs

*hyperventilates* SAY. NO. MORE. I will yeet you both a review sometime this weekend!

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  2. @Finefrenzy__
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  2. OPEN (slide on down folks)

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Alwynse

Thank you for your reviews! I'll take that second slot, if that's alright!

 

Story and Author Name, including link:  I'm not a hero, chapter 2 (M) by javu
Warnings and Advisories:  Derogatory Language, Hate Speech, Violence
Genre: Action/Adventure, Mystery/Crime, Romance
Length: Chapter 2 is 5281 words
Summary: Chapter 2 picks up right where chapter 1 leaves off. There is more character development and foreshadowing for future events. 
Ships: Next Gen characters/OC, OC/OC
Areas of Concern: Just your general impression, constructive criticism 

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faeruhs

okie dokies! 

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faeruhs

ok! your reviews are done, we officially have 2 spots open up!

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Alwynse

Thank you!

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Alwynse

I feel like I'm hogging you ... are you up for chapter 3?

 

Story and Author Name, including link:  I'm not a hero, chapter 3 (M) by javu
Warnings and Advisories:  Derogatory Language, Hate Speech, Violence
Genre: Action/Adventure, Mystery/Crime, Romance
Length: Chapter 3 is 5688 words
Summary: Chapter 3 picks up on the Saturday following chapter 2. It begins with Charlotte and Kitty in Hogsmeade.

Ships: Next Gen characters/OC, OC/OC
Areas of Concern: Just your general impression, constructive criticism 

Edited by javu

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faeruhs

i can be! i'll get to it tomorrow morning ;)

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Alwynse

You're the best!! 😍 

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Veritaserum27

Ooo!  I'd love a review from you.  I have a next-gen fic that I hope you'll like.

 

Story and Author Name, including link:  Actions Speak Louder than Words (M) by Veritaserum27
Warnings and Advisories:  
 Sexual Content, Substance Abuse, Violence
Genre:  Action/Adventure, Drama, Romance, PTSD
Length:  44 Chapters
Summary:  Bravery comes in many different forms, even for a Ravenclaw like Rose.
Ships:  Rose/Scorpius, Albus/OC, Harry/Ginny, Ron/Hermione
Areas of Concern:  My main area of concern is how the mystery unfolds - I'd love any feedback on how the clues are laid out or if it is confusing to the reader.

 

Thanks so much! :wub: 

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