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Noelle Zingarella

I really enjoyed your review on chapter 5!  I'd love your thoughts on chapter 6, which I did some rewriting/restructuring on. Thank you!

 

Story, Author Name, and Link: Moonlight by Noelle Zingarella Chapter 6

 Fandom: Harry Potter

Warnings/Advisories: Consent Issues (Mild/Moderate), Derogatory Language, Domestic Abuse, Hate Speech, Sexual Content, Spoilers, Substance Abuse, Violence 
 

Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst, Romance
 

Length: Novel (currently at 57962 words)
 

Main Characters: OC (Miranda Rose), Severus Snape, Albus Dumbledore, Lucius Malfoy
 

Ships: Snape/OC
 

Summary: A Comedy of Errors about an Unstoppable Force meeting an Immovable Object: Miranda Rose had always enjoyed more than her share of good luck, which served her well in avoiding the consequences of her frequently impulsive behavior. But when her penchant for risk-taking leads her into the middle of a war—and an entanglement with the enigmatic Severus Snape—her luck may not be enough to save her.

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