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Noelle Zingarella

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Story, Author Name, and Link: Moonlight by Noelle Zingarella  Chapter 14: Cruciatus (M)

 Fandom: Harry Potter

Warnings/Advisories: Consent Issues (Mild/Moderate), Derogatory Language, Domestic Abuse, Hate Speech, Sexual Content, Spoilers, Substance Abuse, Violence 
 Genre: Action/Adventure, Humor, Romance
Length: Chapter 14 is 7611 words
Main Characters: OC (Miranda Rose), Severus Snape, Albus Dumbledore, Lucius Malfoy
Ships: Snape/OC
 Summary: A Comedy of Errors about an Unstoppable Force meeting an Immovable Object: Miranda Rose had always enjoyed more than her share of good luck, which served her well in avoiding the consequences of her frequently impulsive behavior. But when her penchant for risk-taking leads her into the middle of a war—and an entanglement with the enigmatic Severus Snape—her luck may not be enough to save her.

Areas of concern: Just your thoughts! 

Number of Open Requests in last 2 weeks: 1/5 open requests

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Hi Kevin! I'm back as I see you still have a spot open. :)


Story and Author Name, including link: Irrational chapter 2 by RonsGirlFriday

Warnings and Advisories: Teen audiences; sexual content

Genre Romance, Humor, Fluff

Length: 3168 words

Summary: Knowledge belongs to the head - wisdom, to the heart.

Ships: Percy/Audrey

Areas of Concern: Just looking to get feedback in general, and for this fic in particular I'm always interested to hear thoughts on the characterizations, Audrey's voice, and pacing.

Current Review Request Count: 5/5

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