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Noelle Zingarella

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CambAngst

Hi, Noelle! Thank you for the review on chapter 6. would love to re-request, if I may, for chapter 7?

Story and Author Name including Link: After Destiny [M] by CambAngst

Warnings and Advisories: Hate Speech, Consent Issues (Severe), Sexual Content, Slavery, Spoilers, Substance Abuse, Violence

Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Recover/Healing, Romance

Length: Novel (25 chapters and counting...)

Summary: Children. Warriors. Heroes. Victims. Survivors.
Harry Potter and his friends struggle to move on with their lives after the Second Wizarding War.

Ships: Ginny/Harry, Hermione/Ron, Luna/Neville, Fleur/Bill, others to come

Areas of concern: Chapter 7 sees our heroes leave Hogwarts and venture out into the world beyond. But along the way, there's a scene with Harry and Molly, Harry and Arthur, as well as an unexpected disruption in the Great Hall. I'm curious whether the conversations Harry has feel natural for the characters' emotional states. Also, whether the event that drives them out of Hogwarts feels too contrived.

Thank you, as always!

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Noelle Zingarella

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@Felpata_Lupin @CambAngst after way too long, your reviews are finished--so sorry for the wait!

 

And now for an important announcement: 

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I am temporarily closing my review thread while I work on NaNo-ing and catching up on prize reviews. I expect to open the thread again sometime in December. I've really enjoyed reading everyone's stories and I look forward to getting back to it as soon as I can. 

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Noelle Zingarella

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I'm back folks!

 

Hit me up with your review requests: TWO SLOTS OPEN

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RonsGirlFriday

:o I know you and I are doing a one-shot review swap, but...is it cheating if I slide in here with this review request on one of my WIP's as well?? :whistling:

 

Story and Author Name, including link: Ignatius by RonsGirlFriday
Warnings and Advisories: Rated Teen; suicide advisory for a passing reference in a later chapter (no suicide occurs in this story)
Genre: Dark, Drama
Length: 3 out of 4 chapters posted; Chapter 1 is 2825 words
Ships: None
Summary: The lost sheep. The prodigal son. A sinner who might be a saint.
Areas of Concern: Just your thoughts!
Current Review Request Count: 5/5

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Simplicius

Story and Author Name including Link: A Death in the Family by Simplicius

Warnings and Advisories: Rated Teen. Violence (Note: I am over-zealous with warnings and advisories so it probably doesn't need one.)

Genre: Angst/Drama

Length: 2,335 Words

Summary: Lucius Malfoy's death brings about a sudden and painful change in the lives of his many foes.

Ships: Albus Potter / Scorpius Malfoy (Note: It's ambiguous, and not the focus of the story.)

Areas of concern: I've always loathed frequent POV-switching but I "had to" resort to it here because I wanted, essentially, a snapshot taken from different angles (times, places, people) of a single event. I'd really like to know how that comes across to a reader who doesn't have the connective tissue - as it were - in their head. Along those same lines, I'd like to know how plausible/organic the story feels.

Current Review Request Count:  1/5

 

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Noelle Zingarella

@Simplicius I'm so excited that you stopped by my thread!

 

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Chemical_Pixie

Noelle! Mind catching the next chapter of A Place Not Far From Here? ;) 

Story and Author Name, including link: A Place Not Far From Here by Chemical Pixie
Warnings and Advisories: Violence, Derogatory Language, Hate Speech, Sexual Content, Substance Abuse, Domestic Abuse
Genre: Mystery, Action/Adventure, Dark, Drama
Length: 33 chapters, 147,000+ words
Ships: JSP/OC
Summary: The hunt for the Hallows. The disappearance of James Potter. The power of The Cause. For Amelia Fortescue, time is running out. She must find her place before it is decided for her, and the consequences may very well carry her to the brink.
Areas of Concern: Your thoughts! (I think you're on chapter 12? No worries if you read ahead--you can review where you left off!)

3/5

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RonsGirlFriday

*swoops in*
 

Story and Author Name including Link: Irrational by RonsGirlFriday

Warnings and Advisories: T (sexual content)

Genre: Romance, humor, fluff

Length: Chapter 1 is 3976 words

Summary: Knowledge belongs to the head - wisdom, to the heart. A Percy/Audrey romance.

Ships: Percy/Audrey

 Areas of concern: Just your thoughts! Audrey’s voice? Characterizations? 

 Current Review Request Count: 5/5 in past two weeks

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MrsDarcy

:ninja::ninja: I love your reviews, so I'm here with chapter 2

Story and Author Name including Link: Until the Sun Falls by MrsDarcy
Warnings and Advisories: M, derogatory language, sexual content, violence 
Genre: drama, romance, action/adventure
Length: chapter 2, 3232 words
Summary: Anne and her adventures continues!
Ships: Remus/OC
Areas of concern: just your thoughts

current review request count: 1/5

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@MrsDarcy I’m looking forward to reading this!

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CambAngst
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Hi, Noelle! So awesome that your thread is open again! May I re-request for chapter 8?

Story and Author Name including Link: After Destiny [M] by CambAngst

Warnings and Advisories: Hate Speech, Consent Issues (Severe), Sexual Content, Slavery, Spoilers, Substance Abuse, Violence

Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Recover/Healing, Romance

Length: Novel (26 chapters and counting...)

Summary: Children. Warriors. Heroes. Victims. Survivors.
Harry Potter and his friends struggle to move on with their lives after the Second Wizarding War.

Ships: Ginny/Harry, Hermione/Ron, Luna/Neville, Fleur/Bill, others to come

Areas of concern: Chapter 8 marks the arrival of Harry, Ginny, Hermione and Ron at Grimmauld Place. I'm curious what you think about Harry's interactions with Kreacher, as well as the steps the 4 teens make in advancing their relationships.

Thank you, as always, and Happy New Year!

current review request count: 1/5

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LadyMarauder

Hi Noelle! I'm really looking to get this finished, so would love to know what you think if that's ok?

Story and Author Name including Link: Let Me Love You - LadyMarauder

Warnings and Advisories: Derogatory Language, Domestic Abuse, Sexual Content, Substance Abuse, Violence

Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance

Length: 2 chapters  - c1 is a teeny (for me) 1335 words

Summary: Sometimes lovers, always friends, Remus Lupin and Chi McAllister have a complicated relationship. She looks at him like he's worth something, and that terrifies him. 

Ships: Remus Lupin/OC

Areas of concern: Just your thoughts 😁

Current Review Request Count: 1/5

Thanks!

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Noelle Zingarella

@CambAngst yay! I'm looking forward to getting back to this :)

@LadyMarauder Sounds good! Looking forward to it :)     

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Noelle Zingarella

@CambAngst, I had already reviewed chapters 8 and 9, so I reviewed chapter 10--it was hilarious.

@LadyMarauder Chi is fascinating! Thank you for sharing her with me :)

 

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RonsGirlFriday

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Story and Author Name including Link: Irrational (chapter 5+) by RonsGirlFriday

Warnings and Advisories: T (sexual content)

Genre: Romance, humor, drama

Length: Chapter 5 is 2447 words

Summary: How a logical boy and a sensible girl decided to listen to their quiet hearts. A Percy/Audrey romance.

Ships: Percy/Audrey

 Areas of concern: Just your thoughts! 🙃 

 Current Review Request Count: 2/5 in past two weeks

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CambAngst

Hi, Noelle! Sorry about messing up the chapter number in my last request. Thank you for working that out! I'm glad you liked seeing Hermione so far out of her comfort zone. It was a lot of fun to write. May I re-request for chapter 11?

Story and Author Name including Link: After Destiny [M] by CambAngst

Warnings and Advisories: Hate Speech, Consent Issues (Severe), Sexual Content, Slavery, Spoilers, Substance Abuse, Violence

Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Recover/Healing, Romance

Length: Novel (26 chapters and counting...)

Summary: Children. Warriors. Heroes. Victims. Survivors.
Harry Potter and his friends struggle to move on with their lives after the Second Wizarding War.

Ships: Ginny/Harry, Hermione/Ron, Luna/Neville, Fleur/Bill, others to come

Areas of concern: Chapter 11 is the first tentative outing into the magical world for our heroes, where they start to get an idea of how others are processing the fallout from the war. I'm super-curious as to what you think of the goblins and the negotiations over Harry's inheritance. Also, what do you make of Harry's back-and-forth struggle to accept what everyone is telling him about his responsibility for the war?

Thank you, as always!

current review request count: 2/5

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