Felpata_Lupin Posted April 13, 2019 Author Share Posted April 13, 2019 @abhorsen. done with your request! @Lacey Black and @beyond the rain I'll (hopefully) get to you tomorrow! Sorry for having you wait a bit... 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted April 14, 2019 Author Share Posted April 14, 2019 All done! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Noelle Zingarella Posted April 15, 2019 Share Posted April 15, 2019 Hi Chiara! Would you please take a look at some of my WIP? Story and Author Name, including link: Moonlight (M) by Noelle Zingarella Click! Warnings and Advisories: Consent Issues (Mild/Moderate), Derogatory Language, Domestic Abuse, Hate Speech, Sexual Content, Spoilers, Substance Abuse, Violence Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst, Humor, Romance Length: 14 Chapters, 57,945 words Summary: A Comedy of Errors about an Unstoppable Force meeting an Immovable Object. Miranda Rose had always enjoyed more than her share of good luck, which served her well in avoiding the consequences of her frequently impulsive behavior. But when her penchant for risk-taking leads her into the middle of a war—and an entanglement with the enigmatic Severus Snape—her luck may not be enough to save her. Ships: Snape/OC Areas of Concern: Just your thoughts. 🙂 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReillyJade Posted April 15, 2019 Share Posted April 15, 2019 Hi, Chiara! I'd love to hear your thoughts on my most recent story if you're up for it. Story and Author Name, including link: Diamond in the Rough by ReillyJade Warnings and Advisories: Violence and Consent Issues (Minor) Genre: Angst, Drama, and Hurt/Comfort Length: One-shot (1895 words) Summary: Hope begins in the dark. Ships: none Areas of Concern: This was written a few years ago, and though I've modified it a bit, I kept the one thing I challenged myself to do: to only allow one line of dialogue for each character. I'd like to know if that decision worked, felt natural for the story, etc.? Aside from that, I'd just love your thoughts in general, as well as any concrit you'd like to share. 💙 Thank you! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted April 22, 2019 Author Share Posted April 22, 2019 @Noelle Zingarella and @ReillyJade both your requests are done! Wonderful job, both of you! Feel free to come back anytime! Request away, folks! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Noelle Zingarella Posted April 24, 2019 Share Posted April 24, 2019 Hello Chiara! Thank you for your lovely reviews on the first couple of chapters of Moonlight. May I be so bold as to take you up on your offer to read a bit more? Story and Author Name, including link: Moonlight (M) by Noelle Zingarella Link Warnings and Advisories: Consent Issues (Mild/Moderate), Derogatory Language, Domestic Abuse, Hate Speech, Sexual Content, Spoilers, Substance Abuse, Violence Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst, Humor, Romance Length: 14 Chapters, 57,945 words Summary: A Comedy of Errors about an Unstoppable Force meeting an Immovable Object. Miranda Rose had always enjoyed more than her share of good luck, which served her well in avoiding the consequences of her frequently impulsive behavior. But when her penchant for risk-taking leads her into the middle of a war—and an entanglement with the enigmatic Severus Snape—her luck may not be enough to save her. Ships: Snape/OC Areas of Concern: Just your thoughts. 🙂 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted April 25, 2019 Author Share Posted April 25, 2019 @Noelle Zingarella Done! I'm really enjoying your story! Open to requests again!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CheekyTorah-Lex Posted April 26, 2019 Share Posted April 26, 2019 Story and Author Name including Link:Tasty by Lacey Black Warnings: Rated M for Sexual content, derogatory Language and SMUT Genre: Smut, Friends to Lovers, LGBTQ, Bisexual/Biromantic Length: 4029(ish) words, One-shot Collection Summary: Years after the war, Katie was one of the top ten Chasers in the entire world, playing for England’s National Team. It was her greatest wish for them to make World championships this season. Confident in almost every way, Katie felt it waver when confronting the fiery Redhead on her team. Ships: Ginny Weasley/Katie Bell Areas of Concern: Punctuation, Grammar, Flow of the story. Enjoyable or not. you didn’t have a thing that said weather you would or wouldn’t read smut, IF your not comfortable that’s totally cool, and I won’t be offended. just thought I’d give it a shot Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Noelle Zingarella Posted April 26, 2019 Share Posted April 26, 2019 I'm sorry to keep bugging you, Chiara, but I'm really enjoying your reviews (and hugs)! Would you mind reading a little more of my epic? I'm really curious to know what you'll think of what happens next. 🙂 Story and Author Name, including link: Moonlight (M) by Noelle Zingarella Link Warnings and Advisories: Consent Issues (Mild/Moderate), Derogatory Language, Domestic Abuse, Hate Speech, Sexual Content, Spoilers, Substance Abuse, Violence Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst, Humor, Romance Length: 15 Chapters, 65,342 words Summary: A Comedy of Errors about an Unstoppable Force meeting an Immovable Object. Miranda Rose had always enjoyed more than her share of good luck, which served her well in avoiding the consequences of her frequently impulsive behavior. But when her penchant for risk-taking leads her into the middle of a war—and an entanglement with the enigmatic Severus Snape—her luck may not be enough to save her. Ships: Snape/OC Areas of Concern: Just your thoughts. 🙂 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted April 28, 2019 Author Share Posted April 28, 2019 @Lacey Black done with your request @Noelle Zingarella I will have yours done sometime next week (right now I'm a bit review-exhausted...) PS I've updated (or at least requested to update) my rules, referring in particular to the smut genre (which... no, I'm not particularly comfortable reading... ) so please, check them out before posting new requests 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CheekyTorah-Lex Posted April 28, 2019 Share Posted April 28, 2019 I’m so sorry you could have just said so! You didn’t have to read it 💚 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted April 28, 2019 Author Share Posted April 28, 2019 23 minutes ago, Lacey Black said: I’m so sorry you could have just said so! You didn’t have to read it 💚 No worries! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
down-in-flames Posted April 30, 2019 Share Posted April 30, 2019 chiara!! i'd love a review on the next chapter of my jily fic, if you wouldn't mind? Story and Author Name, including link: 9.9 Out of 10, Highly Recommend by ShadowRoseWarnings and Advisories: hate speech, sexual content, substance abuseGenre: romance, humour, AULength: chapter 2 is 7294 wordsSummary: Quote 2 bets. 10 days. Endless shenanigans. Ships: james/lilyAreas of Concern: just your thoughts! ❤️ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VaguelyCreativeName Posted April 30, 2019 Share Posted April 30, 2019 Chiara, might I bother you for one of your lovely reviews? Story and Author Name, including link: August and Royal by VaguelyCreativeNameWarnings and Advisories: violence, minor character deathGenre: General, Angst(?)Length: 2499 wordsSummary: Quote Augusta Fawley has always led a very privileged life, born as the youngest child and only daughter into one of wizarding Britain's oldest families, she grows up doted-on by her parents and four older brothers who took personal insight should any harm come to their darling sister. But she also grows up in times of war, and not even her brothers can protect her from it. Ships: noneAreas of Concern: I wrote this against a word count limit, so the story ends quite abruptly - most of that is intentional, but I was wondering if that came across alright. But I'd love to hear your thoughts in general! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted May 2, 2019 Author Share Posted May 2, 2019 @Noelle Zingarella your reviews are done! Lovely work as always! @ShadowRose and @VaguelyCreativeName I'll get to yours asap! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted May 4, 2019 Author Share Posted May 4, 2019 All requests are done! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Noelle Zingarella Posted May 4, 2019 Share Posted May 4, 2019 Chiara, I'm shyly coming back for more because your reviews are so awesome! Story and Author Name, including link: Moonlight (M) by Noelle Zingarella Link Warnings and Advisories: Consent Issues (Mild/Moderate), Derogatory Language, Domestic Abuse, Hate Speech, Sexual Content, Spoilers, Substance Abuse, Violence Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst, Humor, Romance Length: 15 Chapters, 65,342 words Summary: A Comedy of Errors about an Unstoppable Force meeting an Immovable Object. Miranda Rose had always enjoyed more than her share of good luck, which served her well in avoiding the consequences of her frequently impulsive behavior. But when her penchant for risk-taking leads her into the middle of a war—and an entanglement with the enigmatic Severus Snape—her luck may not be enough to save her. Ships: Snape/OC Areas of Concern: Just your thoughts. 🙂 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted May 11, 2019 Author Share Posted May 11, 2019 @Noelle Zingarella done! Sorry it took me a bit... Open for requests again, my loves! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Noelle Zingarella Posted May 14, 2019 Share Posted May 14, 2019 Since no one else has grabbed this spot yet, I'm here again. You're about to read about my night club, so I'm looking forward to your thoughts on it. 🙂 Story and Author Name, including link: Moonlight (M) by Noelle Zingarella Link! Warnings and Advisories: Consent Issues (Mild/Moderate), Derogatory Language, Domestic Abuse, Hate Speech, Sexual Content, Spoilers, Substance Abuse, Violence Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst, Humor, Romance Length: 15 Chapters, 65,342 words Summary: A Comedy of Errors about an Unstoppable Force meeting an Immovable Object. Miranda Rose had always enjoyed more than her share of good luck, which served her well in avoiding the consequences of her frequently impulsive behavior. But when her penchant for risk-taking leads her into the middle of a war—and an entanglement with the enigmatic Severus Snape—her luck may not be enough to save her. Ships: Snape/OC Areas of Concern: Just your thoughts. 🙂 P.S. If you are interested, there is a playlist for chapter 10 in my Writer's Journal here. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted May 19, 2019 Author Share Posted May 19, 2019 @Noelle Zingarella done with your request again! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowkat678 Posted May 23, 2019 Share Posted May 23, 2019 Hey, mind if I come in and snag a slot? I have a story you haven't reviewed yet! (I know, shocking.) Story and Author Name, including link: Sirius Black Escape from Azkaban (T) by shadowkat678 Warnings and Advisories: Spoilers? Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst Length: 1 chapter and 4031 words Summary: Sirius Black escaped the inescapable, and is experiencing emotions he hasn't gotten the chance to feel in a very long time. Yet, with Aurors on his tail, there isn't much time to waste. Ships: N/A Areas of Concern: Just thoughts on overall flow and content. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Noelle Zingarella Posted May 28, 2019 Share Posted May 28, 2019 Chiara, my dear, would you mind coming back for some more? Chapter 12 is a bit of a transition, and Chapter 13 is particularly exciting. 🙂 Story and Author Name, including link: Moonlight (M) by Noelle Zingarella Link! Warnings and Advisories: Consent Issues (Mild/Moderate), Derogatory Language, Domestic Abuse, Hate Speech, Sexual Content, Spoilers, Substance Abuse, Violence Genre: Action/Adventure, Humor, Romance Length: 16 Chapters, 71,968 words Summary: A Comedy of Errors about an Unstoppable Force meeting an Immovable Object. Miranda Rose had always enjoyed more than her share of good luck, which served her well in avoiding the consequences of her frequently impulsive behavior. But when her penchant for risk-taking leads her into the middle of a war—and an entanglement with the enigmatic Severus Snape—her luck may not be enough to save her. Ships: Snape/OC Areas of Concern: Just your thoughts. 🙂 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted June 8, 2019 Author Share Posted June 8, 2019 @Shadowkat678 and @Noelle Zingarella all done! Sorry it took me a bit long... Open for requests, everyone! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Noelle Zingarella Posted June 15, 2019 Share Posted June 15, 2019 Hi Chiara! I'd love to know what you think of Severus's reaction to Miranda's antics 🙂 Story and Author Name, including link: Moonlight (M) by Noelle Zingarella Warnings and Advisories: Consent Issues (Mild/Moderate), Derogatory Language, Domestic Abuse, Hate Speech, Sexual Content, Spoilers, Substance Abuse, Violence Genre: Action/Adventure, Humor, Romance Length: 17 Chapters, 77,574 words Summary: A Comedy of Errors about an Unstoppable Force meeting an Immovable Object. Miranda Rose had always enjoyed more than her share of good luck, which served her well in avoiding the consequences of her frequently impulsive behavior. But when her penchant for risk-taking leads her into the middle of a war—and an entanglement with the enigmatic Severus Snape—her luck may not be enough to save her. Ships: Snape/OC Areas of Concern: Just your thoughts. 🙂 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted June 26, 2019 Author Share Posted June 26, 2019 @Noelle Zingarella done! Sorry, took a while... but I'm loving the story as much as always! Send me your links, people! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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