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heyyyy...i saw you were open for business 👀 hope you don't mind! 😁  

Story and Author Name, including link: What Others Dream Of by prideofprewett
Warnings and Advisories: Sexual Content, but not in this chapter! 🤗
Genre: Fluff, Microficiton, Romance
Length: ch 16 is 991 words
Ships: Emmeline Vance/Rose Jorkins
Summary: Not everyone gets the chance to live out their great love story. Some are only left to dream about such a love. But that is not the case for Emmeline Vance and Rose Jorkins.
Areas of Concern: Mostly your thoughts...but like...is there an iota of fluff in this chapter lol? It feels a bit angsty. 😅
Current Review Request Count: 2/5 

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Chiara, may I interest you in some Breathing Underwater-verse Severus/Ted fluff?

Story and Author Name, including link: More than Words+ by inmyownlittlecorner

Warnings and Advisories: Domestic Abuse, Sexual Content, Slurs

Genre: Angst, AU, Fluff, Hurt/Comfort, Microfiction, Romance, Smut

Length: Chapter 1 is 875 words

Ships: Severus Snape/Ted Tonks

Summary: 
 

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Ted Tonks was always too good for Severus Snape. Severus was just too happy to care.

Areas of Concern: Your thoughts ❤️ 

Current Review Request Count: 2/3

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Chiara, I hope your not too tired of me 🙈 I just saw you had the review thread so I thought I'd get your thoughts on another chapter. 

Story and Author Name, including link: In This Darkness https://fanfictalk.com/archive/viewstory.php?sid=1542
Warnings and Advisories: M Domestic Abuse, Sexual Content, Slurs, Violence
Genre: Romance
Length: Chapter 5 is at 5102
Ships: OC/Lily Luna
Summary: There was darkness, and then there was her. 
Areas of Concern: Just general thoughts. :)
Current Review Request Count: _1_/5 

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Hey lovely, please could I request for chapter 2 of Make Me Feel Alive? Loved hearing your thoughts on chapter 1 🥰

Story and Author Name, including link: Make Me Feel Alive (M)
Warnings and Advisories: For this chapter - references to child death, dying/grieving, war
Genre: Romance/Angst
Length: This chapter's 2059 words
Ships: Marlene McKinnon/Sirius Black
Summary: 

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"Don't ask me to care. Just make me feel something. Anything. Just make me feel alive." Seventh year is supposed to be exciting, a time to look forward to the future. But between grief, worry and war, Marlene McKinnon doesn't have the time and energy for feelings. She definitely isn't looking to fall in love. Especially not with Sirius Black.


Areas of Concern: Just your thoughts! This chapter features James and Sirius so would love your thoughts on their characterisation and any general reactions too. 
Current Review Request Count: 1/5 

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Hi Betaaa ❤️ 

Was wondering if I could request a review of something I wrote recently :D

The Dragonbreath Conclusion (M) 

Warnings and Advisories: None
Genre: Romance/Fluff
Length: One shot - 3791 words
Ships: James Potter I / Lily Evans
Summary: 

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When the hangover clears, the head starts to think clearly. Unless, of course, the heart gets involved.

Final installment of the Dragonbreath series (Sequel to Firewhiskey and Dragonbreath shots, and Dragonbreath Hangover)

 

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Hi Chiara! Can I bother you with the last chapter update from In This Darkness?? ❤️ 

Story and Author Name, including link: In This Darkness Chapter 9
Warnings and Advisories: M Domestic Abuse, Sexual Content, Slurs, Violence
Genre: Romance
Length: Chapter 9 is at 5977 words
Ships: OC/Lily Luna
Summary: There was darkness, and then there was her. 
Areas of Concern: Just anything that jumps up at you. :)
Current Review Request Count: _1_/5 

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Heyyy Chiara! If you're still open, would ya mind reading this "found family," chapter of What Others Dream Of? 💖

Story and author name, including link: What Others Dream Of by prideofprewett

Warnings and Advisories: Sexual Content, but not this chapter

Genre: Fluff, Microfiction, Romance

Length: Ch 28 is 1,069 words

Ships: Emmeline Vance/OC and Molly/Arthur in this chapter

Summary: Not everyone gets the chance to live out their great love story. Some are only left to dream about such a love. But that is not the case for Emmeline Vance and Rose Jorkins.

Areas of concern: This one was challenging for me to write so I would appreciate your thoughts/impressions on it. 🤗

Current Review Request Count: 1/5

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@prideofprewett (and everyone else :P)

Just wanted to let you know that I've seen your request, but it might take a while because I'm away from home for most of August (two weeks working from the mountains, then two weeks on holiday in Sicily)

This thread is still active, it just might take me a while before I can get back at you... I'll be back in full swing in September (Courtney, I'll try to get back at you earlier, but I can't guarantee... just wanted to let you know... :hug:)

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Heyyy...popping in here to see if you might be interested in reading the final chapter of What Others Dream Of? 😁 💖

Story and author name, including link: What Others Dream Of by prideofprewett

Warnings and Advisories: None is this chapter

Genre: Fluff, Microfiction, Romance

Length: Ch 30 is 1,213 words

Ships: Emmeline Vance/OC 

Summary: Not everyone gets the chance to live out their great love story. Some are only left to dream about such a love. But that is not the case for Emmeline Vance and Rose Jorkins.

Areas of concern: Anything, really 😁 

Current Review Request Count: 1/5

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Not me, just flooding this thread with review requests. At least I waited a week? 😅

Story and author name, including link: Hardened Hearts (Say Unimaginable Things) by prideofprewett

Warnings and Advisories: None, in this chapter

Genre: Angst, Dark, Drama, Romance

Length: Ch 21 is 5,994 words

Ships: Cedrella Black/Septimus Weasley 

Summary: Cedrella Black is expected to marry well and raise a line of perfect, pureblood children, who further the aims of the society she was born into. But as she navigates the politics surrounding Wizarding Society's London Social, Cedrella finds herself inconveniently bumping into Septimus Weasley, a flirtatious fortune hunter with a family secret. While her parents push her to marry another, she slowly discovers she has more in common with Septimus than she ever dreamed possible. 

As the events of the summer unfold, alliances are forged, hearts are broken, and a newly printed publication threatens to tear apart Wizarding Society's Most Sacred Twenty-Eight.

Areas of concern: Any thoughts! 😁

Current Review Request Count: 1/5

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