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down-in-flames

hi chiara! i'd love your thoughts on the latest chapter of 9.9 :wub:

On 4/30/2019 at 3:27 PM, down-in-flames said:

Story and Author Name, including link: 9.9 out of 10, highly recommend by down-in-flames
Warnings and Advisories: hate speech, sexual content, substance abuse
Genre: romance, humour, AU
Length: chapter 5 is 8137 words (lol i'm sorry)
Summary: 2 bets. 10 days. Endless shenanigans
Ships: james/lily
Areas of Concern: just your thoughts! ❤️

[1/5 open requests]

 

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BookDinosaur

Chiara!! I hope you don't mind my returning for more of your lovely reviews  :rose:

Story Name, Author, and Rated Link: All the Waves Resounded [M] by BookDinosaur
Warnings and Advisories: Consent Issues (Mild/Moderate), Derogatory Language, Hate Speech, Sexual Content, Substance Abuse, Violence
Genre: AU, Drama, Romance
ShipsTed/Andromeda
Length: currently 55k! chapter 6 is nearly 5k
Summary:

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When he kisses her, she feels as though she could crumble, but the truth of the matter is that he is not her Perseus; perhaps there is no Perseus in this telling of the story.

The First Wizarding War is raging around her, and Andromeda Black has turned traitor.

Areas of Concern: Just more of your thoughts would be lovely! 

[ 2 / 5 open requests ]

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RonsGirlFriday

Hi! I'm Melanie, new to this site. :) When I visited your author page recently I noticed you like Remus Lupin. Would love if you'd check out a Remus one-shot of mine:

Story and Author Name, including link: Like Coming Home by RonsGirlFriday
Warnings and Advisories: None; all audiences
Genre: Drama, Romance (sort of), maybe a little Angst
Length: One-shot (1885 words)
Ships: Remus/Rosmerta
Summary: She says his name as though she expected him right at this very moment. She breathes it with the satisfaction of someone who has been waiting a long time. Remus/Rosmerta.  Maybe.
Areas of Concern: General thoughts :)
Current Review Request Count: 5/5 

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Felpata_Lupin

@BookDinosaur  I've left two more reviews, and I'm loving the story more and more (I might be falling in love with Ted Tonks just a tiny bit... :wub:) Hopefully I'll manage to come back for more soon!!!

@RonsGirlFriday  So glad you found your way to our little, lovely corner of the internet! :hug: I've left your review and your story was just adorable... I totally didn't cry... 😭

Just a fyi... during the month of December I'll be off on a quest to hit all the wishlists (I'm going to fail miserably, of course, but let me dream for a bit longer...) so I will probably neglet this thread... you are still free to drop requests, but bear in mind that it might take me a bit longer than usual to fulfill them...

:freeze: :grouphug: to all!

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RonsGirlFriday

Hey!! Mind if I drop in again with a fluffy romance ?

 

Story and Author Name, including link: Irrational (on HPFT) by Ronsgirlfriday (and here on AO3)
Warnings and Advisories: T, mild sexual content 
Genre: romance, humor, fluff 
Length: chapter 1 is 3976 words (fic is a WIP, up to 6 chapters so far)
Ships: Percy/Audrey
Summary: Knowledge belongs to the head - wisdom, to the heart.
Areas of Concern: Just your thoughts! (And did you say you cross post reviews?? I included my links to the fic here on HPFT and AO3)
Current Review Request Count: 4/5

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Felpata_Lupin

@RonsGirlFriday I've left a couple reviews on Irrational for you! :D It's a really entertaining story so far! :wub:

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RonsGirlFriday

Is it too soon to come back for more of your thoughtful reviews? :wub: Whenever you get around to it, obviously, since it is a busy time!

Story and Author Name, including link: Irrational (chapter 3+) (on HPFT) by Ronsgirlfriday (and here on AO3 if you're still willing to cross-post!)
Warnings and Advisories: T, mild sexual content 
Genre: romance, humor, fluff 
Length: Beginning with chapter 3 (WIP, up to 7 chapters so far)
Ships: Percy/Audrey
Summary: Knowledge belongs to the head - wisdom, to the heart.
Areas of Concern: Just whatever!
Current Review Request Count: 4/5

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Felpata_Lupin

@RonsGirlFriday left two more reviews for you, darling! :hug:

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RonsGirlFriday

:ninja:

Story and Author Name, including link: Irrational (Chapter 6+) (on HPFT) by Ronsgirlfriday (and here on AO3 if you're still willing to cross-post!)
Warnings and Advisories: T, mild sexual content 
Genre: romance, humor, fluff 
Length: Beginning with chapter 6 (WIP, up to 8 chapters so far)
Ships: Percy/Audrey
Summary: Knowledge belongs to the head - wisdom, to the heart.
Areas of Concern: Just whatever!
Current Review Request Count: 5/5

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LadyMarauder

Hi!! I promise I'll get to your requested review by tomorrow, sorry it's taken a bit longer than I thought!

This one needs finishing so it might help me!

Story and Author Name, including link: LadyMarauder - Let Me Love You
Warnings and Advisories: Derogatory Language, Domestic Abuse, Sexual Content, Substance Abuse, Violence
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Length: Chapter 1 is 1335 and chapter 2 is 4440 words.
Ships: Remus Lupin/OC
Summary: Sometimes lovers, always friends, Remus Lupin and Chi McAllister have a complicated relationship. She looks at him like he's worth something, and that terrifies him. 
Areas of Concern: Your thoughts 😁
Current Review Request Count: 1/5 

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Pixileanin

Hi there!  I have a sort-of -but-not-really fluff story that I'd love some concrit on.  Are you up for it?

 

Story and Author Name, including link:s Anything Is Possible (T) by Pixileanin
Warnings and Advisories: no warnings, Anxiety, Lesbian
Genre:  Fluff, Romance... possibly not...
Length:  5773 words/ one-shot complete
Ships: OC/OC
Summary: Bad Owl Coffee helps Eleanor Branstone get through the holidays.
Areas of Concern: Not sure how I did with my character development. I'm having a hard time getting the reader to connect to my original characters.  Please tell me how I did with this.  Thanks!
Current Review Request Count: 3/5

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Felpata_Lupin

@RonsGirlFriday and @Pixileanin I'll get to your reviews asap (by the end of the week, hopefully) ;) 

@LadyMarauder I think I already reviewed both chapters...? I can review something else if you want me to :shrugs:

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@LadyMarauder I think I already reviewed both chapters...? I can review something else if you want me to :shrugs:

Ha! Sorry, I must have missed that, I'm a bit sleep deprived 😂 I'll pop another request over in a bit if that's ok x

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2 minutes ago, LadyMarauder said:

Ha! Sorry, I must have missed that, I'm a bit sleep deprived 😂 I'll pop another request over now if that's ok x

Ahahah! It happens, no worries! :P 

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RonsGirlFriday

I just can't stay away! :wub:

 

Story and Author Name, including link: Irrational (Chapter 8+) (on HPFT) by Ronsgirlfriday (and here on AO3 if you're still willing to cross-post!)
Warnings and Advisories: T, mild sexual content 
Genre: romance, humor 
Length: Chapter 8 is 2499 words
Ships: Percy/Audrey
Summary: How a logical boy and a sensible girl decided to listen to their quiet hearts. A Percy/Audrey romance.

Areas of Concern: Just whatever!
Current Review Request Count: 2/5

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Felpata_Lupin

@Pixileanin your review is (finally) done! So, so, so sorry for the long wait... it was a really adorable story! :wub:

@RonsGirlFriday your review is done, too! :D 

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RonsGirlFriday

Back for more! :rose:

Story and Author Name, including link: Irrational (Chapter 9) (on HPFT) by Ronsgirlfriday (and here on AO3 if you're still willing to cross-post!)
Warnings and Advisories: T, mild sexual content 
Genre: romance, humor, drama
Length: Ch 9 is 2883 words
Ships: Percy/Audrey
Summary: Knowledge belongs to the head - wisdom, to the heart.
Areas of Concern: Just whatever! ❤️
Current Review Request Count: 3/5

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down-in-flames

hi chiara! i've got a new chapter of 9.9 out that i'd love your feedback on :P

Story and Author Name, including link: 9.9 out of 10, highly recommend by down-in-flames
Warnings and Advisories: hate speech, sexual content, substance abuse
Genre: romance, humour, AU
Length: chapter 6 is 4892 words
Summary: 2 bets. 10 days. Endless shenanigans
Ships: james/lily
Areas of Concern: just your thoughts! ❤️

[1/5 open requests]

 

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abhorsen.

Hi, Chiara, I'm popping my head in to throw some shenanigans at you! 😛

 

Story and Author Name, including link: Shenanigans, Capers, and Hi-Jinks by Beeezie
Warnings and Advisories: M (Sexual Content)
Genre: Action/Adventure, Drama, Humor, Romance
Length: 17 chapters (38236 words)
Ships: Teddy/Vic, Fred II/OC
Summary: Meeting banshees in the Forbidden Forest, setting the Great Hall on fire, and smuggling in contraband: Victoire and Fred Weasley are trouble with a capital T.
Areas of Concern: your feedback is always amazing - same general concerns about flow/character development/etc! :hug:
Current Review Request Count: 1/5 

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Felpata_Lupin

@down-in-flames and @abhorsen. It took me a bit longer than I hoped, but your reviews are done! ;) :wub:

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Story and Author Name, including link: Technically
Warnings and Advisories: T (Draco has a potty mouth)
Genre: AU/Fluff/Family
Length: 1 chapter (5365 words)
Ships: N/A
Summary: If Iris Potter had had her way, which wasn’t often when she wasn’t at her Auntie (technically, first cousin, once removed) Narcissa’s house, she wouldn’t have been standing across from her cousin (technically, second cousin) Draco, pretending that she actually wanted to spend time with him.
Areas of Concern: Don't really have any; I just want your thoughts on it.
Current Review Request Count: 1/5 

 
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BookDinosaur

chiara! i saw your status update and wondered if i might sneak in here :rose:

Story and Author Name, including link: All the Waves Resounded by BookDinosaur
Warnings and Advisories: M (Sexual Content, Slurs, Substance Abuse, Violence)
Genre: AU, Drama, Romance
Length: currently 76k -- i believe you've gotten up to chapter nine? and that is 5k 💖
Ships: Andromeda Black/Ted Tonks
Summary:

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When he kisses her, she feels as though she could crumble, but the truth of the matter is that he is not her Perseus; perhaps there is no Perseus in this telling of the story.

The First Wizarding War is raging around her, and Andromeda Black has turned traitor.


Areas of Concern: just your thoughts! ❤️ 
Current Review Request Count: 2 / 5 

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