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I've been reading a lot of really incredible and diverse fanfiction lately - probably more than I have in years. HPFT is chock-full of talented writers and, with that in mind, I wanted to jump on the reviewing love bandwagon!

Fandoms: HP is cool (love Next-gen, Marauders and Founders and pretty much anything that's placed around the HP books), OF is impressive (I love it and I'm a bit in awe of y'all who write it) and I'm familiar with a lot of weird books and shows so if you're not sure if your story is for me, feel free to ask! Anything Cursed Child I will just flat out refuse to read, I'm too invested in all the unofficially 'canon' Next-Gen fics that were created in-between HPDH and HPCC to be able to appreciate it.

Sites: HPFT, ffn, Ao3 are all cool. I'll cross post those reviews if you're keen, because I get that them numbers are important!

Likes: I'm a sensitive little soul and, while some weird days I'll be in the mood for some morally ambiguous characters and stories of darkness and angst, I do love my fluff and I LIVE for a good laugh. I'm willing to at least try and read anything, but I may or may not feel extremely uncomfortable - and that will probably reflect on my reviews, so if you want to see how sensitive normies read your stories, feel free to torture me. I definitely don't mind a little smut as long as it's not Porn Without Plot (and even some of those, if they're well written, I will read with gusto). Just... throw your stories my way and if there's something I'm not comfortable with in one of your requests, I'll let you know.

No-no's: No AU's with a tiny twist. It is a bit grating to me when I'm reading something that's a carbon copy of the original work with a few changes, it's not for me. No incest, no adult/minor relationships, no super gratuitous blood curdling gore.

Reviewing style: I usually default to cheerleading and gushing, but every once in a while I will feel the need to point out something that feels wrong or weird for me as a reader. I like to think I'm not an ass about it but please keep in mind that when I say that something is 'just my opinion' it's really just my opinion and it's worth pretty much nothing. It doesn't reflect on your story or you as a writer, it's just something that I thought you might like to know...?

rules: there will be 5 open slots and the reviews will be done on a first come/first serve basis

Story and Author Name, including link: 
Warnings and Advisories: 
Genre: 
Length: 
Ships: 
Summary: 
Areas of Concern: 
Current Review Request Count: __/5 

Hit me! 🥰

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something wicked

ooh yay! i get to be first! 🖤

story and author name: as the lights went out by something wicked 
warnings and advisories: slurs, self harm, sexual content, substance abuse 
genre: drama, romance, smut, angst
length: novella, one chapter so far (2867 words) 
ships: jsp/oc
summary: 

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It started as a mistake, but that was a while ago. 

What we're looking at now is a whole series of mistakes. 


areas of concern: so you mention some days being in the mood for morally ambiguous characters and i guess i'm hoping that day might be soon 😋 this is my new next gen romance and erin (the oc) is emmmmm... a bit of a mess? i'd just love any thoughts on your first impressions of her and the story in general! i've always got a pretty big focus on character in my writing so any feedback about how they come across is always appriciated! 
current review request count: 2/5

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story and author name, including link: physical fatality by grumpy cat
warnings and advisories: sexual content, substance abuse
genre: angst, drama, romance, smut
length: chapter 1 is 2624 words
ships: oliver wood/oc
summary: 

we're just young and reckless
if we wreck this,
it's fine.

areas of concern: your thoughts :kris: my entire author's page is one big morally ambiguous mess, though :kris: but, hey, nobody gets murdered, i've temporarily hidden those stories 😅 also, this fic is smutty as fuck, but not the first chapter and it does have some plot. and veela prejudice commentary :ninjavanish: but basically, up until this story i've never written a fic where the love interests were kinda doomed from the start and for which i knew that the romance needs to die by the end of it so that was an interesting challenge. ofc, now i have a problem that i'm a lil bit too attached to these two (oliver and freya) :kris:
current review request count: 2/5 

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Veritaserum27

Hi there!  So... I hear you like ScoRose?  Well, I've got one and I'd love to year your thoughts!

 

Story and Author Name, including link: Actions Speak Louder than Words
Warnings and Advisories: Sexual Content, Substance Abuse, Violence
Genre: Romance, Drama, Action/Adventure
Length: 45 Chapters/ 175,086 words
Ships: Rose/Scorpius, Harry/Ginny, Ron/Hermione, Albus/OC
Summary: Bravery comes in many different forms, even for a Ravenclaw like Rose.
Areas of Concern: I'm always concerned about the pace and the mystery.
Current Review Request Count: 2/5 
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RonsGirlFriday

Heyyy, can I just...

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(I didn't see you specify any number of open slots for requests, so hope this is okay -- but if not and you need to limit it to the requests already made above, please feel free to ignore!)

 

Story and Author Name, including link: Snoggus Interruptus by RonsGirlFriday (and if you're in a cross-postin' mood...here on AO3)
Warnings and Advisories: T, sexual content
Genre: Humor
Length: 1883 words (one shot)
Ships: Percy/Audrey
Summary: Ginny has a habit of catching her brother in the act.
Areas of Concern: None specifically. This fic is just pure silliness, FYI (and an older one of mine). A glimpse into the future of my favorite couple whom you've been rooting for. Just would love whatever in the world you feel like saying about it.
Current Review Request Count: 4/5 

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story and author name, including link: physical fatality by grumpy cat
warnings and advisories: sexual content, substance abuse
genre: angst, drama, romance, smut
length: chapter 2 is 2710 words
ships: oliver wood/oc
summary: 

we're just young and reckless
if we wreck this,
it's fine.

areas of concern: your thoughts  😅
current review request count: 2/5 

omg i totally just slithered in haha

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abhorsen.

heyyy so if you want to laugh

 

Story and Author Name, including link: +an incomplete log of absurd wizarding texts
Warnings and Advisories: m (sexual content)
Genre: humor
Length: 1986 words
Summary: Theoretically, you should never document your crimes and misdeeds in text messages. On the other hand, though, it's super convenient.
Areas of Concern: this is a new fic, it's kind of ridiculous, i'm writing more so would love feedback on it
Current Review Request Count: 3/5

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RonsGirlFriday

Since you're okay with me slidin' back in here.

Story and Author Name, including link: Pride and Joy by RonsGirlFriday (and here on AO3)
Warnings and Advisories: A, none
Genre: General
Length: 2401 words (one shot)
Ships: Percy/Audrey
Summary: Percy Weasley has received his comeuppance, and her name is Molly.
Areas of Concern: Literally whateverrrrr, I just like that you're such a cheerleader for this dude ❤️
Current Review Request Count: 4/5 

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Noelle Zingarella

Oh boy!! :MeowParty:

 

Story and Author Name, including link: Moonlight+ by Noelle Zingarella
Warnings and Advisories: M;  Domestic Abuse, Sexual Content, Slurs, Substance Abuse, Suicide, Violence
Genre: Action/Adventure, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Length: Novel; Chapter 11 is 2954 words
Summary: A Comedy of Errors about an Unstoppable Force meeting an Immovable Object: Miranda Rose had always enjoyed more than her share of good luck, which served her well in avoiding the consequences of her frequently impulsive behavior. But when her penchant for risk-taking leads her into the middle of a war—and an entanglement with the enigmatic Severus Snape—her luck may not be enough to save her.
 
Areas of Concern: your thoughts!
Current Review Request Count: 2/5

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down-in-flames

hiiiii i know you're not a fan of minor au's, but how do you feel about full-blown au's? i promise there's no carbon copying of source material here bc it is, uhhhh, way out there in comparison to canon - no one's magical and they all work for the nypd lol :P (if au's in general aren't your thing, feel free to skip this request!)

Story and Author Name, including link: 9.9 out of 10, highly recommend by down-in-flames
Warnings and Advisories: slurs, sexual content, substance abuse
Genre: au, humor, romance
Length: chapter 1 is 4102 words
Ships: james/lily
Summary:

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2 bets. 10 days. Endless shenanigans.

Areas of Concern: just your thoughts!
Current Review Request Count: 2/5

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story and author name, including link: physical fatality by grumpy cat
warnings and advisories: sexual content, substance abuse, slurs, domestic abuse
genre: angst, drama, romance, smut
length: chapter 3 is 2529 words
ships: oliver wood/oc
summary: 

we're just young and reckless
if we wreck this,
it's fine.

areas of concern: your thoughts 
current review request count: 1/5

:kris:

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Noelle Zingarella

Your reviews are always worth waiting for ❤️

Story and Author Name, including link: Moonlight+ by Noelle Zingarella
Warnings and Advisories: M;  Domestic Abuse, Sexual Content, Slurs, Substance Abuse, Suicide, Violence
Genre: Action/Adventure, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Length: Novel; Chapter 12 is 4017 words
Summary: A Comedy of Errors about an Unstoppable Force meeting an Immovable Object: Miranda Rose had always enjoyed more than her share of good luck, which served her well in avoiding the consequences of her frequently impulsive behavior. But when her penchant for risk-taking leads her into the middle of a war—and an entanglement with the enigmatic Severus Snape—her luck may not be enough to save her.
Areas of Concern: your thoughts!
Current Review Request Count: 1/5

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RonsGirlFriday
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Edit: Shit, Noelle beat me to while I was typing! 😅 💗

DISREGARD!

 

I’m back like the validation-seeking gremlin that I am.

Story and Author Name, including link: Irrational  ch 13 by RonsGirlFriday (and here on AO3)
Warnings and Advisories: T
Genre: Drama, humor, romance
Length: Ch 13 is 4277 words
Ships: Percy/Audrey
Summary: Most people seem to judge him — but Audrey doesn’t. Most people seem not to see her — but Percy does.
Areas of Concern: Literally whateverrrrr
Current Review Request Count: 2/5

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