Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 20 Feb 2021 04:20 PM · For: Unearthing old skeletons

I know its over but can we have a scene where bea comes t grimuld place and spends time with remus and sirius talking about laura an meets the order

Name: javu (Signed) · Date: 16 Aug 2018 08:59 PM · For: Starting again

Wonderful writing, as always. Still sad. But I guess the whole marauder era is just really sad. 

Name: StarFeather (Anonymous) · Date: 01 Jul 2018 12:31 AM · For: Laura: Gryffindor vs Slytherin

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27th September 2016:

 

Hi, me again. :)

 

 I may like this chapter the best among the other chapters so far. I always love the Quidditch match scene, the intense one. Especially the classic one, Gryffindor vs Slytherin; especially Sirius watches and criticizes his brother Regulus, the untold episode by J.K.Rowling who gave us information that Harry recognized Regulus was the Seeker from the magical photo. I love the plot very much. I ask you to write more. I'd like to encourage to write about it. I think you really did a good job.

 

 It likely happens that James get a lot of scores, which leads Gryffindor to the victory but the Snitch is captured by Regulus Black. I like the idea.

 

 Your description about Lily and Laura is well written, their feeling towards each boyfriend grab our hearts. So many kudos on that!

 

 One more scene in which I got thrilled is what Lily sighted the Snitch the first of all. It shows that her future son is very good at finding the Snitch! ;D

 

 Honestly, I've read the other chapters randomly before I reached here and found out these one shots are written for Sirius (most of chapters are bittersweet, so beautiful but so sad), and I'd like to tell you that I love to see your descriptions about Lily and James more. Your fabulous descriptions made me feel so. The same thing might be said about your Remus. I'm very fond of Remus and his girlfriend, though we know his fate and his predicament very well. It's good to see he could have some romance in his life. I wonder how you would portray his angst and love in your Remus centered fic.

 

 Kenny

Name: StarFeather (Anonymous) · Date: 01 Jul 2018 12:29 AM · For: The trial

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27th September 2016:

 

Hi, melian. I came back from Gryffindor Tower to see your Marauders more.

 

 I've been wondering whose trial this was for. It's severe that they had to make sure the culprits would get punished though they were so young when they faced their friend's death. That is what I felt when I started reading your description about Laura at the beginning.

 

 It's horrifying to imagine Dementors and the defendants strapped into the chains in the court room, the severe fact. And Barty Crouch, your description is right to the point: severely-cut dark hair and a tooth brush moustache".

 

 I like the idea of Sirius thinking his father when he observed Crouch. The sad experience made Laura the type of person who would be good in a fight. You portrayed the heavy fact from Sirius' and Laura's POV. He supported her kindly. I could feel he really cared her from your description. I like the plot that Sirius felt instinctively and uncomfortably both Orion Black and Barty Crouch had the same ruthlessness.

 I'd like to read more about their relationship between a father and a son. I'd like to read the heavy scenes involving arguing back each other in the Grimmauld Place or somewhere.

 

 As Crouch pronounced them guilty without enough proofs, I wondered if the culprits were forced to do their mouths shut. I suspect someone behind the scenes let them do that. Voldemort, or Bellatrix? Who really killed them?

 

 Kenny

Name: StarFeather (Anonymous) · Date: 01 Jul 2018 12:26 AM · For: An expedition

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26th September 2016:

 

Hi, melian! I thought it's the first time to visit your story from Gryffindor Tower!

 

 The title, "An expedition" attracted me. I like action very much. :) All stars of Marauder entered! I got thrilled. Especially they used the Potter's Invisibility Cloak. Cool.

 

 Oh, I really love the scene they changed into their Animagus forms. Yeh, I felt the same as you mentioned it was awkward riding Prongs and going up the shallow staircase. I've avoided writing Harry's transforming into Prongs in my fanfiction, you know, it's inconvenient for doing mischief. It's easier for me to write Harry in his bird animagus form than Prongs in my story, too. When you want some action scenes, Prongs form doesn't fit at all. And his antlers! hahaha, it surely annoys James.

 

 Oh, poor Macdonald's cat. It was cast "Petrificus Totalus." I like you set the siren and the cat.

 

 Yeah, my feeling is just the same as Remus right now. An invasion of privacy shouldn't be attempted. I like pranks but this...I may be the type of person like Remus. I'd like to see the description about his animagus form more.

 

 Oh, naughty James. Watch out! Your Lily and the other girls will come back soon! Hmm, he's brave huh? Or should I say he is an explorer (to the girl's room)? And even he took lead suggesting that they would leave notes? Bad student and really reckless, which are qualities of Peverell. I'd like to clap for James, a descendant of Peverell. I really love it was James who directed all mischief. I've read the stories where Sirius is centered at pranks by Marauders but not James, so thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed it very much!

 

 Kenny