Name: la_topolina (Signed) · Date: 27 Aug 2020 02:27 AM · For: A Ghost in Time

Hi Elena!

This is such an interesting start! I've heard of Ron/Pansy before, and it has that Enemies to Lovers appeal. But poor Hermione, having to watch her enemy marry her ex-boyfriend--and Hermione is still so close with the Weasleys that she has to be at social functions with them. How uncomfortable for her :(

George's voice welcoming Pansy to the family was very touching. 

I was not expecting Gideon to show up as a ghost and start a romance with Hermione but I'm intrigued by it. I like how you're playing with temperature and the solid/transparent nature of the ghost magic. 

Nice start!

Yours,

Noelle

Author's Response:

Ah, thank you :)

One day when time permits, I might actually flesh this one out. It plays out in 5 chapters but has so many places you could go and delve into a lot more.

Ron/Pansy is a favourite. Generally if I need Ron out of the way, Pansy is my go to girl. I've used tghis pairing a few times in my stories :)

Oh, George...There's more to come. I cannot say more yet.

Same with Gideon. There's just so much more....But I must admit, after writing this, I fell in love with where you can go with Gideon and Fabian. So, I have more up my sleve for these two.

Just getting the rest of the chapters ready to post, thanks for reading and reviewing :)